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A response deemed to have satisfied the examination requirements must satisfy the following criteria. Spelling and grammatical accuracy are mandatory only one response is allowed for each question / blank. Meaningful paraphrasing and correct use of own words are permitted.
A response deemed to have satisfied the examination requirements must satisfy the following criteria. Spelling and grammatical accuracy are mandatory only one response is allowed for each question / blank. Meaningful paraphrasing and correct use of own words are permitted.
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A response deemed to have satisfied the examination requirements must satisfy the following criteria. Spelling and grammatical accuracy are mandatory only one response is allowed for each question / blank. Meaningful paraphrasing and correct use of own words are permitted.
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General Guidelines A response deemed to have satisfied the examination requirements must satisfy the following criteria:
• Spelling and grammatical accuracy are mandatory
• Only one response is allowed for each question / blank
o Each question / blank with multiple responses correct will be awarded only one mark o Each question / blank with multiple responses partially correct will not be awarded any mark
• “Chunking” or the lifting of entire sentence(s) is/are not permitted
• Upper and lower cases must be strictly adhered to
• Meaningful paraphrasing and correct use of own words are permitted
Section A: Part 1
No. Acceptable Responses Unacceptable Responses
Early contraction_ [Singular - Should be plural] 1 Early (contractions) Muscular / Uterine (contractions) [All the three stages relate to muscular / uterine contractions – thus, no distinction made] Irregularly [Adverb – should be Irregular || Irregular, spaced between adjective ] five to twenty minutes apart || Spaced Space(s) [Noun – should be participial 2 between five to twenty minutes apart || adjective] Spaced between 5 – 20 minutes apart 5 minutes / min(s) 20 minutes / min(s) Last less than a / one / 1 minute || Less Lasts less than … [Singular – should than a / one / 1 minute || Each be- plural] 3 then [Should be “than”] contraction lasts less than a / one / 1 minute Two or three days [Refers to “labour”] Dilates [Singular – should be plural] So that the baby can pass through To dilate the cervix || Dilate the cervix || the birth canal [Phrase refers to “result”, 4 not “purpose”] Dilating the cervix The baby can pass through the birth canal [Ambiguous - may refer to either “purpose” or “result”] 5 Strong Regularly [Adverb- should be adjective] Regular || Every two or three minutes || Two to three minutes / min(s)[Phrase Occurring every two or three minutes || indicates duration / Abbreviation] 6 2 minutes / min(s) [)[Phrase indicates Every 2 – 3 minutes duration / Abbreviation] 3 minutes / min(s) Phrase indicates duration / Abbreviation] (Last) longer than a minute || Longer 7 Lasts [Singular – should be plural] than a minute || More than a minute Continuously[Adverb – should be adjective] 8 Continuous Continually[Adverb – should be adjective] Continue(s) [Verb – should be adjective] Usually completed in less than an / one / Complete [Verb or noun – should be 1 hour || Completed in less than an / participial adjective] 9 one / 1 hour || In less than an / one / 1 Completes [Verb – should be participial hour || Less than an / one / 1 hour adjective] Placenta delivery [Wrong word order 10 Delivery of (the) placenta conveys distorted meaning - compare to “pizza delivery”] Section A: Part 2
No. Acceptable Responses Unacceptable Responses
Relationships [Plural – should be The relationship of society to its tools singular] and the extent society controls its It [Pronoun – should be possessive noun] environment || Relationship of society to It’s [Contraction – should be possessive 1. its tools and the extent society controls noun] its environment Extend [Verb – should be noun] * Note: The phrase preceding (The relationship Enviroment [Wrong spelling] of ….) and after “and” (the extent society …) must both be included in the response Tool_ [Singular – should be plural] Control_ [Plural – should be singular] They develop / have developed / Develops [Singular – should be plural] developed simple tools || They have Pass down the knowledge to their been known to develop simple tools || descendants [Indicates that technology is 2. Development of simple tools || To used to pass down the knowledge which develop simple tools || Develop simple does not relate to how technology is utilised.] tools 3-7 Accept any 5 in any order • Instrument [Noun – should be • Instrumental in developing more adjective] advanced economies || Developing Advance [Noun or verb – should be participial adjective] more advanced economies || __ advanced… [“More” omitted – Develop(s) more advanced “More” indicates a qualitative and economies / The development of quantitative advancement] more advanced economies || Economy [Singular – should be Development of more advanced plural] economies
Contributing towards (the) The leisure class [Refers to a specific class] emergence of a leisure class || The __ leisure class [“a” omitted – emergence of a leisure class || results in distortion in meaning] Emergence of a leisure class. Classes [Plural – should be singular – results in distortion in meaning]
• Depleted / Deplete(s) / Depleting • Resource_ [Singular – should be
natural resources || The depleting of plural] natural resources || Natural resources Natural resources deplete [Verb – should be participial adjective; depleted || The depletion of natural Transitive verb requires an object] resources || Depletion of natural resources No. Acceptable Responses Unacceptable Responses • Caused / Cause(s) / Causing • Cause [Plural – should be singular] irreparable damage to the __ damage [“Irreparable” omitted – environment || Irreparable damage to “Irreparable” conveys a drastic scenario] the environment Destroys / destruction [Conveys a pervasive meaning]
• Adversely affected / affects the • Affect [Plural – should be singular]
values of society || Adverse effect(s) Affected/Affects the values of to the values of society society [With “adversely” omitted, “affected” or “affects” becomes ambiguous with a positive or negative connotation] * Note: Affects/Affected (Verb) Effect (Noun)
• Caused / Cause(s) / Causing ethical Dilemma_ [Singular – should be
plural] dilemmas || Ethical dilemmas Fire [Does not relate to an “event”] The ability to control fires / a fire • The ability to control fire || Ability [“Fire” relates to “entity” whereas “fires” or 8. to control fire || Controlling fire “a fire” relates to instance(s) that entity] Discovery of fire [“Discovery” does not relate to technology] • The invention of the wheel || Discovery / Creation / Manufacture 9. Invention of the wheel of the wheel [Meaning distorted] The Internet / The) telephone [Does not relate to an “event”] The invention of the Internet and (the) telephone [Plural – should be • The invention of the Internet || The singular and refer to one event only] 10. __ Internet [Omission of “The”] invention of (the) telephone internet [“i” must be in the upper case] Telephones [Refer to instances of an entity] Telefon (BM spelling) PAPER 1 : SECTION B MARK GRADE DESCRIPTION OF CRITERIA RANGE • Complete realisation of task. • Utilise all content points effectively. • Excellent ability to analyse and justify points of view. A 25 – 30 • Excellent organisation of ideas. • Appropriate and precise use of science and technology expressions. • Entirely accurate use of the language. • Good realisation of task. • Utilise all content points with detailed supporting information. • Competent ability to analyse and justify points of 19 – 24 B view. • Competent organisation of ideas. • Appropriate use of science and technology expressions. • Largely accurate English. • Reasonable fulfillment of task. • Utilise some content points with adequate detailed information. • Satisfactory ability to analyse and / or justify points of C 13 – 18 view. • Satisfactory organisation of ideas. • Satisfactory use of science and technology expressions. • Language sufficiently accurate. • Limited fulfillment of task. • Utilise some content points but inadequately supported. • Limited ability to analyse and / or justify points of D 7 – 12 view. • Some attempts to organise ideas. • Limited use of science and technology expressions. • Language largely inaccurate with frequent errors. • Poor fulfillment of task. • Mere mention of content points. • No attempt to analyse and / or justify points of view. E 1–6 • No attempt to organise ideas. • Poor use of science and technology expressions. • Language barely accurate.