A REVIEW OF NARRATIVE ESSAY

INTRODUCTION
The title of this essay is The Climb and the writer of this essay is Amy. I get this essay from the
internet. The website of this essay is www.thewritesource.com/studentsmodels/wi-theclimb.htm.
ORGANIZATION OF THE ESSAY
Paragraphs
The paragraphs in this essay are short and they are reader friendly. The writer uses simple words
to express her ideas to the reader. Some paragraphs also contains dialogues to make the essay to
be more interesting.
Thesis Statements
The essay is about the fear that the writer feels as she ascends a path to an area above a 100 feet
waterfall.
Topic Sentences
Despite of the fears, she still climb the mountain because the beautiful and attractive scene of the
surroundings.
Supporting Details
The supporting details are well done delivered until we as the reader can feel the excitement and
the writers experience.
Strengths
The writer uses simple language and the essay is understandable by the reader.
Weaknesses
The dialogues are unformal and they are not suitable for the new reader because kids maybe will
be influence with the unformal style of language.
A REVIEW OF CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAY
INTRODUCTION
The title of this essay is Causes and Effects of Low Self-Esteem and the writer of this essay is
Joseph Malek. I get this essay from the internet. The website of this essay is
www.helium.com/items/973692-causes-and-effects-of-low-self-esteem
ORGANIZATION OF THE ESSAY
Paragraphs
The paragraphs in this essay are short not more than five sentences in a paragraph. The usage of
the language is in medium level . The language that been use is the language of counselor
because it seem like to motivate the reader.
Thesis Statements
The essay is about cause and effect of low self esteem.
Topic Sentences
The article is about the modern society of America
Supporting Details
The supporting details writes by the writer are based on his observation.
Strengths
The writer gives many examples to make sure the reader can understand the message delivered
by him. The essay is short, so the reader can understand easily compare to the long essay.
Weaknesses
It is based only to the society of America. The situation may be different with the other country
society.

A REVIEW OF PROCESS ESSAY
INTRODUCTION
The title of this essay is How To Change a Flat Tire and the writer of this essay is Brent Romans.
I get this essay from the internet. The website of this essay is www.edmunds.com/how-to/how-
to-change-a-flat-tire.html
ORGANIZATION OF THE ESSAY
Paragraphs
This essay has 16 paragraphs. The usage of the language in this essay is easy to be understand.
The writer use understandable technical term. The process to change a tire is very clear and the
reader can easily do it because the writer explain precisely.
Thesis Statements
The essay is about a process to change a flat tire.
Topic Sentences
The topic sentence is at the beginning of the paragraphs. The steps of the process shown clearly
to the reader.
Supporting Details
The supporting details writes by the writer is given completely and in details.
Strengths
The writer include pictures so it is easy for the reader to understand the process. The paragraphs
are well organized. It is also follow the sequence and in order.
Weaknesses
The essay write by the writer is delivered in form paragraphs so it can be change into list form
because it is more understandable and reader friendly.
A REVIEW OF COMPARING AND CONTRASTING ESSAY
INTRODUCTION
The title of this essay is Lincoln and Douglass: Struggle between Freedom and Slavery and it is
written by Feross Aboukhadijeh. It is available in the internet. The website of this essay is
www.apstudynotes.org/english/sample-essays/compare-and-contrast-lincoln-douglass/
ORGANIZATION OF THE ESSAY
Paragraphs
The paragraphs for this essay are very long especially for second paragraph. The usage of the
language in this essay is very high and it is suitable for matured reader.
Thesis Statements
The essay is about the opinions of two political figure during Civil War in America and it
emphasizes on freedom and slavery.

Topic Sentences and Supporting Details.
Paragraph 2:
TS : Lincolns desire to maintain national unity.
SD : His job as the president of USA.
Lincoln freed all the slaves to weaken the South opponent.
He also stresses and conveyed harmony, reconciliation and unyielding unity.
Lincoln appealed to Northeners, Southeners and foreigners and gives them hope.


Paragraph 3:
TS : Douglas view to gain civil liberties for blacks.
SD : Douglas believed in the equality of all men, regardless of skin colour.
He expresses his experience working together with the blacks.
Douglas also uses appeal to emotion to make his audience empathize with the slaves
dismal situation.

Strengths
The reader can evaluate which and choose between freedom and slavery.
Weaknesses
The paragraph is based on one persons opinion. It is quite long and may bring boredom to the
readers.










A REVIEW OF CLASSIFYING ESSAY
INTRODUCTION
The title of this essay is Types of Computers and the writer is Oya Ozagac. I get this essay from
the internet. The website of this essay is www.buowl.edu.tr
ORGANIZATION OF THE ESSAY
Paragraphs
The paragraphs for this essay are organized by classification to make it easy to understand. It is
quite a straightforward essay. The language and the term used are based on computer technical
term but overall the sentences are easy to understand.
Thesis Statements (Paragraph 1)
Five types of computers according to the purpose and their capabilities.
Topic Sentences (TS) and Supporting Details (SD)
Paragraph 2:
TS : The most popular type is the personal computer (PC).
SD : Initially known as microcomputers.
Divided into two desktop and laptop
General use by a single person.

Paragraph 3:
TS : A computer as a workstation.
SD : Normally more powerful computers.
More additional memories (for graphics and game development).
Paragraph 4:
TS : A computer as a server.
SD : It must be optimized to serve other computers or network.
Servers usually have powerful processors, lots of memory and large hard drives.

Paragraph 5:
TS : The fourth type is the main frame
SD : Known as the heart of a network
Terminals which allows hundreds of people to work at the same time on the same data.

Paragraph 6:
TS : The final type is the supercomputers.
SD : Cost is high and high powered too.

Strengths
After reading the essay, the reader has knowledge about the types of computer and they can
choose a suitable computer for their usage.
Weaknesses
The paragraph is too long especially in paragraph two and makes the reader a quite hard to
understand the ideas. The idea of the essay is more towards technical tems.