on the screen which immediately gives an eerie feel to the short. The use of a completely black screen with a white text gives the intro much more of a sombre mood, whilst the non-diegetic sound of a creepy piano playing slowly in the back ground adds to the sombre feel. I also like the use of the smoky text beneath the main text as this creates a sense of intrigue and mystery. The short then starts with an establishing/panning shot of a young woman walking down the road of a quiet village, which immediately gives the impression that something bad will shortly happen. The use of black and white reinforces the stereotype of the horror genre also the fact that the woman is walking alone and looks very vulnerable again reinstates that it is clearly a horror as stereotypically the woman is the one in danger. The camera the changes to an extreme close-up of the protagonist putting the key into a lock this shows that this will be an important part of the short film and should stick in the viewers mind. It then cuts to an extreme close-up of the door not properly shutting, which is followed by a high pitch screeching noise which is a common convention of the horror genre and also drives home the point that the door and lock is an importing part of the story whilst also building suspense and tension. The next scene is a close-up of the woman laying down relaxing, however during this she is constantly fidgeting and the non-diegetic sound of the high pitch noise in the background which creates good suspense.
There is a number of quick cross-cuts between the protagonist and a man who has not been identified but by the eerie music continuing to play and the fast cross-cuts it is easy to identify him as the villain. This shows that the short follows Vladimir Propps theory with a clear heroine who is a passive and a clear villain who seeks to harm the heroine. The short then cuts to an extreme close-up of the villain whispering into the heroines ear its not Jamie the music then comes to a climax and this is the point in the short where the viewer will feel most threatened as it plays on the fear of our homes being invaded by a stranger. The short then cuts to a medium shot of the protagonist waking up and you can see a sense of relief wash over the character and the eerie music stops which makes the audience believe that the danger has passed. However, this is a common convention in many horror films and shorts so many of the audience will know the short is not yet over. This means many horror films do no not follow the standard convention of Todorovs narrative structure of a new equilibrium. The final seen is the most effective in the entire short in my point of view. The director uses an over-the-shoulder shot to show the heroin visibly distressed with the man who looks clearly to be the villain walking slowly up behind the young woman. This is made even more effective by the fact that all music is brought to a stop which makes the scene much more eerie. There is then a flash of lightning which symbolises that the woman has just been attacked. However, leaving the short on a cliff hanger will make the audience think about the short more and come to their own conclusion.
Anthony Kaferle, Joe Brandstetter, John Kristoff and Mike Kristoff v. Stephen Fredrick, John Kosor and C. & F. Coal Company. C. & F. Coal Company, 360 F.2d 536, 3rd Cir. (1966)