MS. SHANNAH MAY MONTALES Faculty Member Department of Arts and Sciences Ateneo de Naga University
Dear Ms. Montales:
Subject: Excuse Letter
Please excuse me if I was unable to attend the class last meeting, June 9, 2013, because I had to see my doctor for a medical checkup.
I hope you understand. Hereby, I have attached my medical certificate for your record.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Michelle Micah Prado 2 nd year, Legal Management
MP_dk Queborac Bagumbayan Sur Naga City, Philippines 4400 Tel: +639171234567
June 25, 2014
JUAN DELA CRUZ Head/Manager Customer Service Management House Transport
Dear Sir:
I would like to inform you that the furniture that I have asked to be transported were defected.
Last June 1, 2014, I have ordered to your management to have my furniture from my old house transferred to my current residence. But then, I have noticed some major damages to some of my stuffs. I have thought they were damaged at the time the movers were carrying them.
Therefore, I am slightly dissatisfied with the performance of your company, yet I appreciate your service. Attached are photos of the damages to my furniture in support of my claim.
I look forward to hearing from you by return.
Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
Michelle Micah Prado
MP_dk
Queborac Bagumbayan Sur Naga City, Philippines 4400 Tel: +639171234567
June 22, 2014
MS. EVELYN B. AMARO Director Admissions and Aid Office Ateneo de Naga University
Dear Ms. Amaro:
Subject: Letter of Inquiry
I, Michelle Micah C. Prado, incoming first year college student, would like to be part of your institution, Ateneo de Naga University.
Therefore, I would like to request detailed admission procedure and curriculum for the courses available in your college. I would also be grateful if you could include all information about financial aid including the scholarships you are offering.
MR. J WONG Purchasing Officer Fortune Goods 317 Orcherd Road
Dear Sir:
Subject: Response to Complaint Letter
I am writing in response to your letter of complaint dated June 25, 2014. As a result of our investigation, we found out that our company failed to deliver your full order.
I have thought that your orders were carefully and correctly checked by my staff. Please accept our apology regarding the situation if we had just delivered 12,000 batteries instead of 14,000. As a gesture of our regret, we are willing to supply the lacking 2,000 and an additional 2,000 batteries.
I appreciate to receive a feedback from you concerning our mistake. We look forward to receiving your further orders and assure you that they will be filled correctly.
Thank you very much.
Yours sincerely,
Michelle Micah Prado Distributions Manager
MP_dk Queborac Bagumbayan Sur Naga City, Philippines 4400 Tel: +639171234567
July 2, 2014
MR. TJ ZIPSTER Operation and Production Manager IGP Cafeteria Ateneo de Naga University
Dear Mr. Zipster:
Subject: Order Letter
I was informed that your business has been known because of your trendy accessories. In accordance with it, I would like to purchase the following items:
No. Product Quantity Unit Price Total 1 Basic Zip Bracelet 3 Php. 55.00 Php. 165.00 2 Customized Zip 1 Php. 70.00 Php. 70.00 3 Zip Watch 2 Php. 250.00 Php. 500.00 Total Php. 735.00
Please be guided accordingly with the correct quantities of order I will be purchasing. I would appreciate it very much if you could send these items immediately.
I am looking forward for a long-term business relationship with you.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Michelle Micah Prado
MP_dk Queborac Bagumbayan Sur Naga City, Philippines 4400 Tel: +639171234567
July 7, 2014
JUNE VAN KLAVEREN 123 New York St. Gimenez Park Subd., Naga City
Dear Sir:
My name is Mich Prado, owner of Sweetshop located at Bayan Sur, Naga City. Come and try our DELIGHTSOME and LUSCIOUS CAKES!
We have various styles of cakes suited to your taste for all occasions. For your information, well be offering discounts this coming weekend, July 11 & 12, 2014. If you are interested, we could directly deliver your orders without service fee for your convenience.
I am looking forward for your response to our invitation. Attached is a catalogue to facilitate your orders.
I am very pleased to serve you. Thank you.
Yours truly,
Michelle Micah Prado Owner, Sweetshop
MP_dk
WOODEN NOVELTIES Queborac Bagumbayan Sur Naga City, Philippines 4400 Tel: +639171234567
July 9, 2014
MR. JOHNY DELA CRUZ Custom Poppy Popsicle Pineapple St., Naga City
Please be reminded that you still have an outstanding balance of TWO HUNDRED TWENTY-EIGHT THOUSAND AND SEVEN HUNDRED FIFTY PESOS ( Php. 228,750.00) in your account as of June 23, 2014.
Please pay the amount immediately.
Thank you for your payment.
Yours truly,
Michelle Micah Prado Collecting Officer
MP_dk
Introduction
The global business trend has been tremendously competitive as far as product quality, marketing strategies and its managing resources. Some company owners, managers, CEOs and other business leaders are now introducing innovations in making their business strong, efficient and effective in dealing with their clients.
Business letter correspondence and other personal-related documents are somewhat vital and necessary for such a basic management function. As for a business student, it is important to acquire these various types of business letter in order to know and be prepared once he/she now enters the business world. The following were the letters I have learned and done during our preliminary period.
Excuse Letter Letter of Inquiry Complaint Letter Response to Complaint Letter Order Letter Sales Letter Collection Letter
This contains the draft and the final output of the above-said letters.
From the first letter, I have perceived lots of errors in terms of use of my prepositions and dictions. Theres ambiguity on my sentences due to the wrong usage of some words which resulted to a different thought of the sentences. However, I think I have also developed as we proceeded writing the succeeding letters. Though there were still some common errors and mistakes, at least I witnessed my scores progressing from the time I wrote the first letter until the last. Seeing the grade of my letters is somewhat a motivation for me to do better in my other letters to achieve a much higher grade. Im very glad as well that Mam Shannah taught us the basics well in doing those letters proficiently. But as for my general performance, I still need to improve in such a way of writing letters concisely and exercise proper usage of words, most importantly prepositions.