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A comma splice is a sentence with at least two independent clauses joined only by a comma.
There is no conjunction or proper transition separate the independent clauses
2. What is a Run-On (RO)?
A run-on sentence is a sentence with at least two independent clauses with no punctuation to separate the
clauses
Readers cant tell where one clause ends and the next one begins. It just keeps going and going and going
and going and going...
Also called a fused sentence.
#1: Use a Transitional Expression : Join the two clauses with semi-colon (;), transitional expression, and
a comma (,)
A Complete Sentence
Names a subject the who or what that performs the action
Has a complete verb that indicates tense, person, and number.
Includes at least one independent clause and does not begin with a subordinating word (a word that
connects a dependent clause to an independent clause).
+ Examples of Complete Sentences:
A Dependent Clause
is a group of words that contains a subject and a verb but does not express a complete thought and
cannot be a sentence.
Often you can identify a dependent clause because it begins with a connecting (conjunctive or
subordinating) wordsee the Connecting Word List hand out to learn what these words are.
+ Example:
These begin with a subordinating word. (See the handout on Connecting Words for examples.)
They can be easily fixed by attaching the fragment to nearby independent clause either with a comma (,)
or by creating two sentences by deleting the subordinating word at the beginning of the dependent clause.
Fragment: MSU offers many engineering majors. Such as electrical, chemical, and industrial
engineering.
Revision: MSU offers many engineering majors, such as electrical, chemical, and industrial
engineering.
Fragment: I need to find a new roommate. Because the one I have now isnt working out too well.
Revision: I need to find a new roommate because the one I have now isnt working out too well.
Fragment: That summer we had so much fun. Fishing in the early morning, splashing in the lake
after lunch, exploring the woods before dinner, and playing Scrabble until bedtime.
Revision: That summer we had so much fun. We fished in the early morning, splashed in the lake
after lunch, explored the woods before dinner, and played Scrabble until bedtime.
Fragment: That summer we had so much fun. Fishing in the early morning, splashing in the lake
after lunch, exploring the woods before dinner, and playing Scrabble until bedtime.
Revision: That summer we had so much fun, fishing in the early morning, splashing in the lake
after lunch, exploring the woods before dinner, and playing Scrabble until bedtime.
Fragment: With the ultimate effect of all advertising is to sell the product.
Revision: The ultimate effect of all advertising is to sell the product.
(remove the preposition with)
Fragment: By paying too much attention to disruptive students can make a teacher grumpy.
Revision: Paying too much attention to disruptive students can make teacher grumpy.
(remove the preposition by)
Fragment: For doing photography for another newspaper got Phil fired.
Revision:Doing photography for another newspaper got Phil fired.
(remove the preposition for)
Revision: Phil got fired for doing photography for another newspaper.
(rearrange the sentence)
Fragment: For sixty-five years, the growth in consumer spending has been both steep and steady.
As compared with the growth in gross domestic product (GDP), which has fluctuated
significantly.
Revision: For sixty-five years, the growth in consumer spending has been both steep and steady,
as compared with the growth in gross domestic product (GDP), which has fluctuated
significantly.
Fragment: Elizabeth I of England faced many dangers as a princess. For example, falling out of
favor with her sister, Queen Mary, and being imprisoned in the Tower of London.
Revision: Elizabeth I of England faced many dangers as a princess. For example, she fell out of
favor with her sister, Queen Mary, and was imprisoned in the Tower of London.
Fragment: In 1965, Lyndon Johnson increased the number of troops in Vietnam. A former French
colony in southeast Asia.
Revision: In 1965, Lyndon Johnson increased the number of troops in Vietnam, a former French
colony in southeast Asia.
Fragment: Charlotte Perkins Gillman wrote The Yellow Wallpaper. A story with deep thoughts
and emotions.
Revision: Charlotte Perkins Gillman wrote The Yellow Wallpaper, a story with deep thoughts
and emotions.
Fragment: In the 1930s, three great band leaders helped popularize Jazz. Louis Armstrong, Benny
Goodman, and Duke Ellington.
Revision: In the 1930s, three great band leaders helped popularize Jazz including: Louis
Armstrong, Benny Goodman, and Duke Ellington.
Fragment: The group gathered at dawn at the base of the mountain. And assembled their gear in
preparation for the mornings climb.
Revision: The group gathered at dawn at the base of the mountain and assembled their gear in
preparation for the mornings climb.