Hello Brandon, You have given few relevant points.

However, it seems to inadequately

develop. You should give more elaboration to these points. The overall length of the essay
is also not satisfying. Try to stand your position more clearly. Good Luck !
Hi! You have done a good job by picking each assumption and explaining the reasons as
how the argument is flawed and could be strengthened. You can also add details to these
points to make your essay more effective. Good work!
Hi! The overall structure of your essay fulfills all the requirement of an outstanding essay
with two assumptions and a conclusion and few points illustrating how argument can be
strengthened. If you can add few more details in your writing illustrating the faulty
assumption in detail you can score a perfect 6. Good Work.
Hello Sara, Try to build your essay into paragraphs. Your essay does not take a stand
neither has it agreed nor does it disagree. You need to take a position and be more
elaborative with the points you give in your support. Also, the examples need to be tied
back to the prompt. Good Luck !!
Hello Zack, You have given some good examples in your essay. But remember to agree
or disagree with the prompt. Also, try to put your examples into paragraphs. A more
explanation of the same will help you score better. Good Luck!!
Hi! You have covered almost all the relevant assumptions in your writing. However you
need to pick each assumption and explain in detail in each paragraph. Additionally
mention how this assumption could have been strengthened by the author. Good Luck!
Hello Illona, You have mentioned few good points and analyzed the faulty assumptions
insightfully. Nonetheless, you need to elaborate the ways in which the argument can be
strengthened. Make sure you proof read the paper once before submitting. All the best!
Hi! You have well expressed your issues on how new idea is required by a society to thrive.
However you need to criticize the authors argument by taking a stand against his position and
mentioning all the assumptions he has made in his writing. Also mention how author could
have strengthened the argument. Good Luck!
Hello Anat, You introduced the topic in an interesting manner. The examples you mentioned
did justice to discuss the faulty assumptions which made your essay impactful. In addition, try
to suggest few ways in which the argument can be strengthened. Good Luck !
Hello Margaret, You have mentioned some relevant points and have analyzed all the faulty
assumptions insightfully. Nonetheless, you need to elaborate the ways in which the argument
can be strengthened. A more skillful use of the language will help you score better. All the
best!
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Hello Dorothy, You have much room for improvement. State your position on the prompt
clearly and then discuss the faulty assumptions. As you do that, make sure that your
examples relate more directly to the prompt. Also, try to put in more points as to how to
strengthen the argument. Keep practicing.
Hello Mohammad, The introduction is well written and you have analyzed all the faulty
assumptions. Nonetheless, you need to elaborate the ways in which the argument can be
strengthened. Try to avoid grammatical and spelling errors. All the best!

You have identified the relevant flaws and you have done a good job by not
only supporting your justification with reasoning but also with examples. You can
develop it in a manner that these points are presented as suggestions about how to
develop the argument. You can score better by spill ting your arguments into paragraphs
and providing a little more detail. All the best!
Hello Owain.

Hi____! You have made some good points but your response, rather than critiquing the
argument, is suggesting ways as to how all day kindergarten will benefit students. In
essence, you are uncritically accepting the argument. Your response lack organization of
an argument essay. Keep Practicing!!
Hi Pradeep. An argument essay needs an introduction and a conclusion. Try to weaken
the argument by providing examples and tie them back to the prompt. Also, you need to
include few concrete and focused examples and explain each of those in detail as to how
they strengthen the argument. Good Luck!!
Hello Owain. Your paper has an interesting start and all the examples you have mentioned
are relevant. However, you need to explain each point more in detail in order to create a
compelling paper. Best of luck!
Hi Arpitha. On the surface, this essay appears to present an organized discussion of the issue.
In actuality, there are fundamental deficiencies in analysis and development. Errors like
sentence fragments, incorrect verb tenses, and awkward syntax should be worked upon. Keep
practicing!

Hello Jessica. The essay is well organized. Try to agree or disagree with the prompt. Also, try
to make an impression by providing more concrete examples. Try to create an over the top
ending. I wish you all the best.

An argument essay needs an introduction and a conclusion. Try to weaken

the argument by providing examples and tie them back to the prompt. Also, you need to
include few concrete and focused examples and explain each of those in detail as to how
they strengthen the argument. Good Luck!!
Hello Deepak.

Hello SrinivasRaghavendra. The introduction is well written. However, you need to elaborate
the ways in which the argument can be strengthened. Make sure you proof read the paper
once before submitting. All the best!
Hi Anirudh. You have mentioned few good points. However, the writing task is to analyze the
faulty assumptions made in the argument instead of discussing the issue. In addition, you
need to suggest few ways in which the argument can be strengthened. Good luck!
Hello Urvashi. You have identified the faulty assumptions very well and have provided some
really good points. Try to be a little more elaborative. Also, try to strengthen the argument to
score better. Good Luck!
Hello Bethany. You have introduced the topic nicely; all the examples you have used are
relevant and well developed. You have grasped the essay task adequately and the organization
is good. Keep up the good work!

The reasons you mentioned in support of your argument are valid. However,
to make your point convincing, you need to include few concrete and focused examples
and explain each of those in detail. Keep up the effort!
Hello Sean.

Hi Jordan. You have given concrete examples which prove your argument very well.
Nevertheless, a more skillful use of language along with a compelling conclusion will get you
the perfect score. All the best!
Well Done Andrew ! You have a clear understanding of the topic and have given good
examples to prove your point. However, try to write more neatly to score better.
All the best !!
Hello Matthew. Interesting start. Nonetheless, you need to support with concrete examples
and explain them in detail. A more broader view and good presentation will help you fare
better. Keep Practicing !!
Hello Kodiak. You have a clear point of view and have given some good examples. However,
you need to tie back the examples to the prompt. Also, write little more neatly. All the best !!

Hello Ken. You have identified the faulty assumptions well and have provided some really

good points but few points especially the last two paragraphs are redundant. Additionally the
first flaw is not explained clearly. Try to be a little more elaborative. Also, try to strengthen the
argument to score better. Good Luck!

Hello Sungjin ! You have made some good points but your response, rather than critiquing the
argument, discusses the issue. The example chosen is apt but should not be in so much detail
as your job is to figure out flaws rather than presenting your views.

, Try to build your essay into paragraphs. Your essay does not take a stand
neither has it agreed nor does it disagree. You need to take a position and be more
elaborative with the points you give in your support. Also, the examples need to be tied
back to the prompt. Good Luck !!
Hello Nishanth.

Hello Ahmad. Try to build your essay into paragraphs. However, to make your point
convincing, you need to include few concrete and focused examples and explain each of
those in detail. Keep practicing !!
Hello Nishanth. An argument essay needs an introduction and a conclusion. Try to
weaken the argument by providing examples and tie them back to the prompt. Also, you
need to describe each faulty assumption in a paragraph and how to strengthen it. Good
Luck!!
Hello Ahmad. Try to build your essay into paragraphs. You need to identify the faulty
assumptions and discuss them. Also, try to strengthen the argument by giving examples
to score better. Keep Practicing !!
Hello Swetha. You have identified some faulty assumptions. However, you need to explain
them thoroughly. You need to elaborate as to how the authors assumptions can be weakened.
Also, try to strengthen the argument by giving some suitable examples. Good Luck!!
Hello Swetha. Try to build your essay into paragraphs. You need to make you position clear in
the opening paragraph you agree or disagree. You need to support with concrete examples
and explain them in detail. A broader view and good presentation will help you fare better.
Keep Practicing!!
Hello Vanessa. The introduction is well written. However, you need to elaborate the ways in
which the argument can be strengthened. Make sure you proof read the paper once before
submitting. All the best!
Hello Tessa. Good Introduction. However, the writing task is to analyze the faulty assumptions
made in the argument instead of discussing the issue. In addition, you need to suggest few
ways in which the argument can be strengthened. Good luck!
Hello Dora. Try to build your essay into paragraphs. State your position on the prompt
clearly and then discuss the faulty assumptions. As you do that, make sure that your
examples relate more directly to the prompt. Also, try to put in more points as to how to
strengthen the argument. Keep practicing.
Hello Belinda. You have much room for improvement. State your position on the prompt
clearly and then discuss the faulty assumptions. As you do that, make sure that your
examples relate more directly to the prompt. Also, try to put in more points as to how to
strengthen the argument. Keep practicing.

Hello Bala. Good Introduction. However, the writing task is to analyze the faulty assumptions
made in the argument instead of discussing the issue. In addition, you need to suggest few
ways in which the argument can be strengthened. Good luck!

Try to build your essay into paragraphs. Your essay does not take a stand
neither has it agreed nor does it disagree. You need to take a position and be more
elaborative with the points you give in your support. Also, the examples need to be tied
back to the prompt. Good Luck !!
Hello Jess.

Hello Tara. You have mentioned some good points. However, your essay does not take a
stand neither has it agreed nor does it disagree. You need to take a position and be more
elaborative with the points you give in your support. Also, the examples need to be tied
back to the prompt. Good Luck!!
Hello Shwetha. Your essay doesnt take a position. State your position on the prompt clearly.
You need to support with concrete examples and explain them in detail. A broader view and
good presentation will help you fare better. Keep Practicing!!

Hello Joe. Good introduction. However, try to explain each of the faulty assumptions in more
detail. Tie them back to the prompt. Providing a strong conclusion will bring your essay into
limelight. Good Luck!!

Your essay does not take a stand neither

has it agreed nor does it disagree. You need to take a position and be more elaborative
with the points you give in your support. Also, the examples need to be tied back to the
prompt. Good Luck !!
Hello Aisha. Try to build your essay in paragraphs.

Hello Brittany. You have stated your position clearly in the opening paragraph. However, you
need to use well developed examples and tie them back as to how they support your view. A
more strong command over the language will help you fare better. Keep practicing!!
Hello Leah. The paper is well organized and you have provided relevant and concrete examples
to support your stance on the topic. Nevertheless, a more skillful use of language along with a
compelling conclusion will get you the perfect score. All the best!
Hello Louisa. You have introduced the topic nicely; all the examples you have used are
relevant and well developed. You have grasped the essay task adequately and the organization
is good. Keep up the good work!
Hello Cynthia. The introduction is well written and you have analyzed all the faulty
assumptions insightfully. Nonetheless, you need to elaborate the ways in which the argument
can be strengthened. Make sure you present the essay in paragraphs. All the best!
Hello Lilian. The paper is well organized and you have provided relevant and concrete
examples to support your stance on the topic. You have identified the faulty assumptions very
well. Nevertheless, try to put in more points as to how to strengthen the argument. All the
best!

Hello. You have identified the faulty assumptions very well and have provided some really
good points. Good use of language presents your view points very well. Try to be a little more
elaborative as to how to strengthen the argument to get the perfect score. Good Luck!
Hello Andrew. You have identified the faulty assumptions very well and have provided some
really good points. Try to be a little more elaborative. Also, try to strengthen the argument to
score better. A more skilful use of language will help you score better. Good Luck!
Hello. You have identified the faulty assumptions very well and have provided some really
good points. Try to be a little more elaborative. Also, try to strengthen the argument to score
better. A more skilful use of language will help you score better. Good Luck!
Hello Anjuli. You have given some good points. Try to discuss the faulty assumptions more
efficiently and deeply. Also, give few ways as to how to strengthen the argument. Good Luck!!
Hello. You have given some good points. Try to discuss the faulty assumptions more efficiently
and deeply. Also, give few ways as to how to strengthen the argument. Good Luck!!

An argument essay needs an introduction and a conclusion. Try to weaken the

argument by providing examples and tie them back to the prompt. Also, you need to
include few concrete and focused examples and explain each of those in detail as to how
they strengthen the argument. Good Luck!!
Hello Rajat.

Hi Nicole. You have mentioned few good points. However, you need to make your position
clear in the introduction. A more detailed explanation of the examples is required. Also, try to
tie them back to the prompt. Good Luck!!

Hi Marina. You have mentioned good points to strengthen the argument. Nonetheless, the
writing task is to analyze the faulty assumptions made in the argument more clearly and
efficiently. In addition, a more skillful use of the language can help you score better. Good
luck!
Hi Dayna. You have introduced the topic nicely. However, you need to identify the faulty
assumptions and state your position clearly on them. To an extent, you have tried good to
strengthen the argument. Keep Practicing!!
Hello Elizabeth. The introduction is well written. Try to discuss the faulty assumptions in more
detail to leave an impact on the reader. Moreover, you need to elaborate the ways in which the
argument can be strengthened. Make sure you proof read the paper once before submitting.
All the best!

An argument essay needs an introduction and a conclusion. Try to weaken

the argument by providing examples and tie them back to the prompt. Also, you need to
include few concrete and focused examples and explain each of those in detail as to how
they strengthen the argument. Good Luck!!
Hello Nisanth.

Hello Alex . You essay is very well written. You have identified all the faulty assumptions
and have discussed them very well. A little more elaboration as to how to strengthen the
argument will help you get the perfect score. Good Luck!!
Hello. You have done a good job of discussing the faulty assumptions. However, try to
discuss them all at one place. Leave a little time to proofread to avoid such mistakes.
Good Luck!
Hello Nathan. You have made some good points. However, you need to present each of the
faulty assumption in little more detail. Leave a little time to proofread to avoid spelling and
grammatical errors. Good Luck!!
Hello Deena. You have discussed the faulty assumptions quite well. However, try to discuss
them in little more detail to leave an impact. Also, suggest certain ways in which the argument
can be strengthened. Good Luck!!
Hello. You have made some good points. However, you need to present each of the faulty
assumption in little more detail. Also, suggest certain ways in which the argument can be
strengthened. Good Luck!!
Hello. You have discussed the faulty assumptions quite well. However, try to discuss them in
little more detail to leave an impact. Also, suggest certain ways in which the argument can be
strengthened. Good Luck!!

Hello Suzanne. You introduced the topic in an interesting manner. The examples you
mentioned did justice to discuss the faulty assumptions which made your essay impactful. Try
to explain in more detail each of the faulty assumption. In addition, try to suggest few ways in
which the argument can be strengthened. Good Luck!
Hello Meenakshi. You have mentioned some relevant points and have analyzed all the faulty
assumptions insightfully. Nonetheless, a little elaboration is needed as to how the argument
can be strengthened. A more skillful use of the language will help you get the perfect score. All
the best!
Hi Angana! You have made some good points but your response, rather than critiquing the
argument, is suggesting ways as to how unmanned space flights will benefit us. In essence,
you are uncritically accepting the argument. Your response lacks organization of an argument
essay. Keep Practicing!!
Hello Jayanth. The introduction is well written. However, you need to analyze all the faulty
assumptions. Moreover, you need to elaborate the ways in which the argument can be
strengthened. Make sure you present the essay in paragraphs. All the best!
Hi Amit! You have made some good points but your response, rather than critiquing the
argument, is suggesting ways as to how all day kindergarten will benefit the students. In
essence, you are uncritically accepting the argument. Your response lacks organization of an
argument essay. Keep Practicing!!

Hello. You have introduced the topic nicely. All the examples you have used are relevant and
well developed. You have grasped the essay task adequately and the organization is good. A
little more skilful use of language will help you score better. Keep up the good work!
Hello. You have introduced the topic nicely. All the examples you have used are relevant and
well developed. You have grasped the essay task adequately and the organization is good. A
little more explanation as to how to strengthen the argument is required. Keep up the good
work!

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Hello. You have mentioned some good points to strengthen the argument. However, the
writing task is to discuss the faulty assumptions instead of discussing the issue. A good and
skillful use of language will help you score better. Good Luck!!

Pick up the flaws in the argument and explain

in depth why you feel the reasoning is faulty. A little more explanation as to how to
Hello! You have mentioned few good points.

strengthen the argument is required. Keep up the good work!