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Order number: 407165
Name:Sam
13/08/14
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Writing
Word count: The customer ordered 10000 Words (~40 pages). How many
words did the researcher complete? (excluding bibliography)
10002
Spelling and grammar: Is the work free from spelling and
grammatical errors?
Yes
Flow and Signposting: Does the work flow well with good evidence of
signposting?
Yes
(Please provide evidence used to make your decision.)
The dissertation flows well and the interplay between the three
substantive chapters is very good. Chapters 1 and 2 provide the basis
of the analysis conducted in Chapter 3. The dissertation is
effectively signposted by the Introduction which sets out the aims and
objectives and explains how the methodology will work towards
References
Referencing Style: The customer
requested 'Harvard - page numbers for
direct quotes only' referencing
style.
Has the correct style been used?
Yes
Formatting: Is the format of the referencing correct?
Yes
If 'Yes', Please select at least 3 examples of references from
in-text and the bibliography that you have checked to ensure the
formatting is correct
In-text Citations:
For example, Martin (2012) states that "Short-cuts like buying essays
seem all the more natural when higher education is increasingly
presented, and marketed, as a commodity for those with access.
Wright and Cortbus (2014) tap into this perception of individuals that
use custom dissertation writing services, featuring a case study in
their investigative report about the current state of the custom
dissertation writing service as of the summer of 2014 and it does
point to the same desperation that Brady and Dutta (2012)
highlight.
When this is added to the figures from UK Essays that suggest a
threefold increase in international student customers in the first two
months of 2013 alone (Matthews, 2013), there can be little doubt that
the increased numbers of international students until 2014 and the way
in which they are treated by UK universities led to a major rise in
the custom dissertation writing services and therefore has impacted
Bibliography Entries:
Groark, M., Oblinger, D. & Choa, M., (2001).
Term Paper Mills, Anti-Plagiarism Tools and
Academic Integrity. Educause, Sept/Oct 2001,
pp. 40-48.
Dante, E., (2010). The Shadow Scholar. The Chronicle of Higher
Education. [Online] Available at:
http://chronicle.com/article/The-Shadow-Scholar/125329/ [Accessed 20
July 2014].
Clarke, R. & Lancaster, T., (2006). Elimination the Successor to
Plagiarism? Identifying the Usage of Contract Cheating Sites.
Presented at 2nd International Plagiarism Conference, Gateshead, 19-21
June 2006.
Standard
Focus: Is the work focused, with all
material relevant to the question?
Yes
(Please provide evidence used to make
your decision.)
The focus of the dissertation is defined in the aims and objectives,
which aim to provide a more nuanced thesis statement to allow the
opportunity for in depth analysis. The researcher explains this focus
well at page 5, stating:
- "These aims effectively narrow the focus of the title, which is
otherwise too broad to make any significant analytical discoveries and
would instead suggest a more narrative approach. All four will be kept
in mind during the research and writing processes so that accurate
conclusions may be drawn relating to each one."
Critical/descriptive: Is the work critical, rather than
descriptive? (if appropriate)
Yes
(Please provide evidence used to make your decision.)
There is evidence of critical thought and analytical thinking
demonstrated throughout. For example, the writer explains the
methodology and the decision to use a case study of one company, UK
Essays, to constitute Chapter 2 to expand and narrow the literature
review undertaken in Chapter 1:
- "[I]t will facilitate the examination of the growth of the
industry and the changes that it has experienced over the past decade.
This is a key element of the methodology because of the value it will
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