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Memorandum

To:
CircuitJudge
From:TyWhalin
Date: 11September2003
Subject:
Appealsandjudgmentsconcerningsupport
Deardefendantsandplaintiffs,
Iwouldliketodirectyourattentiontotheissuesofchildsupportandtherulesand
regulationsgoverningtheseissues.
Asanindividualwhopayschildsupporttothebestofmyability,Iknowtherulesand
regulationsthatmandateit.Ihavestudiedthematerialconcerningtheseissuesandwould
liketodrawyourattentiontosomeoftheconcernsthatyouandIneedtoaddress.For
yearspeoplehavebeenforcedtopaychildsupportandoverthattimeconcernshaverisen
aboutitbeingleviedunfairly.Therulesandregulationsarebiasedinfavorofthewoman
concerningtherulesandregulationsthatgovernchildsupport.Manyproblemshaverisen
throughouttheyearssincetherulesandregulationshavebeeninforced.Iwouldliketo
getsomeinputfromthemenandwomanconcerningthisissue.You,asthepeople,can
helpmakeandprovideinputgoverningtheseissues.Yourthoughtsandinputconcerning
thesechildsupportissueswouldbeuseful.
Sincerely,
TyWhalin

AudienceIdentityandNeeds
Primaryaudience
:
CircuitJudge
Secondaryaudience:

MarionCountyClerksOffice
Relationship:

Appealsandjudgments
Intendeduseofdocument:

Toprovideinformationforappealingandjudgments
Priorknowledgeaboutthistopic:

FloridaRulesOfCourt,Internet
Additionalinformationneeded:

Doesntagreewithsetsupportpriceandtherulesand

regulationsmandatingthem
Probablequestions:

Whatshouldtheamountbesetas?

Werethepapersdrawnupeversigned?

Aretherulesandregulationsmandatingchildsupportwrong

andneedreevaluated?

Aretherulesandregulationsmandatingchildsupportbiased?

Whataretheguidelinesmandatingtheserulesandregulations?

Whenwheretheserulesandregulationsforcedintoeffect?

Whoforcedtheserulesandregulationsintoeffect?

AudiencesProbableAttitudeandPersonality
Attitudetowardtopic:

Concernedbutpossiblyargumentative
Probableobjections:

Therulesandregulationsareolderandneedrevisedpossibly
Probableattitudetowardthiswriter:

Dislikestherulesandregulationsthatarecurrently

inaffect
Organizationalclimate:

Informativeandtruthful
Personsmostaffectedbythisdocument:

Individualsinthesamecircumstances
Temperament:

Longathoughtoutdecisionmakingconcerningrevisions
Probablereactiontothisdocument:

Theaudienceshouldagreewithsomeobjections
Riskofalienatinganyone:

Possiblymaleorfemaleauthority

AudienceExpectationsabouttheDocument
Reasondocumentoriginated:

Thoughtofappealinganddefamationofcharacteror

wrongfullyaccused
Culturalconsiderations:

Thesechangeswouldaffectpeopleglobally
Acceptablelength:

Astrongreportdiscussingthesignificantissuesconcerningthis

report
Materialimportanttothisaudience:

Facts,statistics,courtissuesofsimilarsituations
Mostusefularrangement:

Testimonials,convincingevidence,avote,factsandstatistics
Tone:

Respectful,concerned,somewhatdisgruntled
Intendedeffectonthisaudience:

Persuasion,toinfluencesomeonesactions,thinkingor

decisionmaking
DueDate:

11September2003

Sincerely,

TyWhalin

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