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In your
opinion, what is one change that should be
remembered about the twentieth century? Use
specific reasons and details to explain your choice
Thesis: there are many important change in any branch of science such as
technological, cultural, and social science in 20 th century. In my view advance of
medical science is the most important change. The invention of vaccines and
antibiotics, increasing clinic and hospital and improve of operational technique help
to improve better life of millions of people.
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Main idea: first, the major invention of medical science is vaccines and antibiotics
that have saved the life. With the help of vaccines and antibiotics many diseases
and infection are now completely preventable. For example, polio was once a very
dangerous disease. Many people were crippling due to this disease and many of
them also die. By the invention of polio vaccine now people are completely safe. A
lot of people such as solders or people who live in as unhygienic condition once
suffer by infection. This infection leads people to die. In 18 th century pen cilium
antibiotic was invented. Form then it is used to heal infection. Now, Solders do not
suffer by infection. In 20th century medical advance especially invention of vaccines
and antibiotics is unprecedented. Thus, medical science has remarkably changed.
Supporting detail:
1 polio vaccines
2. penecillium antibiotic
3.
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Main idea: second, peoples live are improved by easy access of health care. People
now get treatment very easily as compare to past. For instance, in past, there was
only one clinic or hospital in a community or a district. Difficulties comes when
people fall sick or sudden accident or emergency that cause die because people
travel long distance to get treatment and there were no available ambulance. But
now there are number of private or public clinic and hospital in a community or
district. People easily meet a doctor and treated very easily. Now they fall less sick
that bring better quality of life which was impossible in past. This shows that
medical science has modified.
Supporting detail:
1 more clinic and hospital
2. easier to get treatment
3.
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Main idea: third, medical technology is remarkably improved that provide easier
solution in many medical problems. For example, Microscopic and lesser surgery
method are more efficient than older one. Doctors are now easily treating any
problem without dissection of body. In past many people lost their arm, leg in war or
any accident. They pass rest of their life as static. But now artificial limb, plastic
surgery now gives people new life. They lead their normal life. Patients are now cure
easily and recover faster without any intricacy as compare to the past and lead
better life. Hence, in 20th century most important change is in medical science
Supporting detail :
1mocroscopic and surgery are easier to perform
2. patient recover faster
3.
also go to outside when I have free time in Mumbai but in Shimla It was impossible
because weather in Shimla is not suitable for me. This shows that, same weather is
beneficial.
Supporting detail :
1 I get sick every winter
2.i could be outside all the year
3.
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Main idea : Second, in warm weather I get opportunity to do a lot of fun. For
instance, I like outdoor game and outdoor activity. I like to play football, cricket,
going to beach and riding my bicycle. I cannot do this in mixed weather because it
hampers my activity. In warm weather I can do my favorite activity easily all year
long. Thats why, warm weather is best in all weather.
Supporting detail :
1 outdoor activity
2.favourite activity
3.
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Main idea: third, I would have cost a lot if I live in a mixed weather. Different
weather have different nature and if we adjust this weather such as, in winter we
need warm cloth and also need a firehouse to maintain room temperature . In rainy
season everyone need umbrella and rain coat. It cost money to buy new cloth every
time when season changing. But, if we live in same weather, especially warm
weather we need light cloth that we wear all over the year. So we do not need to
buy new cloth. Hence, same weather is good.
sapporting detail :
1 heating is more expensive
2. no need to buy new cloth
3.
Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you
prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
1 no mistake
2.do not get distract
3. all job neat
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Main idea : third, machines never get tired. For example, if I can set a photocopy
machine to make 100 copies or 200 copies, it can do this without any difference. In
the same token,if I ordered a coffie machine to make 1 cup or 10 cup of coffie,
there are no difference between one cup and ten cup offie. In each cup has same
ingredient in same proportion. On the other hand, if I worked hard, I get tired and
not able to do the same work in same degree. For this reason, machines are better
than hand for same type of work.
In some, although some might be urge to doing his job by hand, especially in
crafting occupation where subtle error can not be solved by machine, but for quick
production, neat delivery and tiredless efford I prefer machine to doing my work
Supporting detail :
1 photocopy machine
2. answering machine
3.
Thesis: I would like to prefer to live in a big city because transportation is easier in
a big city. Moreover, life is very exciting and various people live in the big city,
which give me a different experience.
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Main idea: first, in a big city transportation is much more easier. For example, I live
in a megacity called Dhaka. There are bus stands, taxi stands in every section.
Moreover, in some point there are subways. People easily go from one place to
another by bus, taxi and subway. Roads are one way and very wider. So people
never fall in traffic jam. Moreover, public transportation is very cheap. On the other
hand, in a small town, transportation is the big problem. The Roads are narrow and
infrastructure is bad. There is not enough bus, taxi. So that, people arduously go
from one place to another. Thats why, I prefer to live in a big city.
Supporting detail:
1 bus, taxi, subway
2 cheaper and convenient
3.
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Main idea: Second, there are many facilities in a big city. For this reason, living here
is more convenient than a small town. For example, there are a lot of malls in a big
city. People buy their necessary goods cheaply. In a big city people are more
concern about their health and safety. Medical facility and emergency service are
easily accessible to people. Internet and technological innovation make life more
comfortable. Thus, a big city is better than a small city.
Supporting detail:
1 thing is changeable
2 recreational places
3.
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Main idea: Third, in a big city, we can join a variety of events. People usually
interact with each other. In a big city population density is high so that, a lot of
events held here. There are a lot of recreational and social events such as orchestra,
concert, theater, cinema hall etc. people participate this events and interact with
each other. On the other hand, life is dull and boring in a small town. Population
density is low. There are no recreational facilities. So that people pass their off time
lonely. Thus, living in a big city is much better.
In some, although, some people prefer to live in a small town because of healthy
environment, but I prefer to live in a big city for better transportation, better facility
and interact various people.
Supporting detail:
1 different people of different country, religion and race
2. Know a lot about this
3.
On the other hand, movie and television can also have negative influence. It makes
us lethargy. Watching movie and television is a passive activity. So if we spent more
hours to watching television, we become mentally and physically unhealthy. It also
influences us to do violent activity. For example, horror movie and crime watch
serial show us how to do crime or violent activity. We see supernatural activity in
horror movie that influence some people to do this in real life which have negative
effect to the others. In the movie, murder has no consequence. Even, some movie
actor is murdered but in another movie same actor appears again. People often
think that killing a people is not permanent .Sometime this makes us confuse with
our reality. Moreover, crime serial shows us various crime activities such as murder,
hijack, kidnaping, gambling, smuggling, etc. This also shows us how many ways a
specific crime activity will occur. Young generation is influenced and prone to do this
activity. They do this exactly the same way and the same style as serial shows.
Thus, movie and television degenerate our society.
In some, move and television has both positive and negative effect. How we
influence depends on what type of movie and television event we watch and how
long we watch this and also our responses.
Supporting detail:
1 horror movie
2 crime watch serial
3.
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Main idea: make us less active
Supporting detail:
1 require no activity
2 spent lot of time
3.
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Main idea: do not exercise our imagination
Supporting detail:
1 does not need to imagine character or place
2. Not spend little free moment
Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to
spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice.
Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to
support your answer.
Supporting detail:
1 laugh and joke with them
2 go to moviegoer
3. go to practice
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Main idea: people I can trust
Supporting detail:
1 to help me
2 to talk with
3.
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Main idea: teach about life
Supporting detail:
1 different people
2. Learn a lot
3.
A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor
go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice
Thesis: visit capital
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Main idea: overall countrys history represent by city
Supporting detail:
1 musium
2 park
3. Government palace
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Main idea: representation of our culture
Supporting detail:
1 art museum and gllary
2 naional theater
3. folk ballet perfomance
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Main idea: best product sold
Supporting detail:
1 depertmental store
2. central market
3.tourist and craft shop
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for
students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and
mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Thesis: important to study science and mathematics
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Main idea: get job more easily
Supporting detail:
1 job field: medical, computer science, engineering
2 writer and college professor: literature and history
3.
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Main idea: have a social prestige
Supporting detail:
1 society value science and mathematics
2 not interested in historian
3.
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Main idea: earn more money
Supporting detail:
1 doctor engineer earn a lot
2. history expert and literature professor
3.
In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and
office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule? Use specific reasons
and details to support your position.
Thesis: not fair to ban smoking in public place and official building
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Main idea: smoker has right just everybody else
Supporting detail:
1 some people not like smoking but that doesnot mean banning
2 nit like motorcycle, dog,
If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what
would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details
Thesis: I choose internet study
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Main idea: get me informed timely
Supporting detail:
1 broodcast and update lot of news 24 yours timely
2 lot of chance to kno ifferent people; thinking, living style, country religious
3. to understand each other to live peacefully
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Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life. Others think that
the automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion? Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer
Thesis: automobile improve modern life
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Main idea: more choice of place of work
Supporting detail:
1 job near or further
2 no automobile, job near
3.
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If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you
change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
Thesis: some usuful and advance facility for their use
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Main idea: library provide good environment for local people to study and upbride
Supporting detail:
1 newspaper, magazine and reference bok
2 cultural book good gabit toreading and learn to getknowledge
3.
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Main idea: to access internet and movie channnle to entertainment
Supporting detail:
1 e-commerce, e-card, email
2 watching movie what we choose
3.
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Main idea: need exercise to keep our healthy life
Supporting detail:
1 summing, jogging,playing tennis enhance ability to resist virus
2. positive attitude toward live
3.
Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to
prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and
examples to support your answer
Thesis: prefer to eat at home
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Main idea: save money
Supporting detail:
1 restruiant ask more money on same food item
2
3.
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Main idea: food in the resturent is not what you expect
Supporting detail:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us
about life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Thesis: both fun and useful because they teaches us skill we needed in life
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Main idea: teach cause effect relationship
Supporting detail:
1 hit a ball
2 certain combination of card
3.
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Main idea: deal with other people
Supporting detail:
1 team work
2 assain task according to each people skill
3. cooperate team member
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Main idea: how to follow rule to achieve something
Supporting detail:
1 know the rule in order to reach real goal
2. step by step toward a desired end
3.
Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults.
Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults.
Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position.
Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends
most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use
specific reasons to support your answer
Thesis: spent time most of th tome with friends
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Main idea: kep me from feeling lonely
Supporting detail:
1 do something with together
2 movie , shopping ,
3.
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Main idea: like talking with my friends
Supporting detail:
1 interseting thing share
2 problem share
3.
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Main idea: learn a lot from my friend
Supporting detail:
1 tell about a trip or book he read
2. political issue
3. invite me to watch movie that I never heard
Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone.
Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
3.
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Main idea: get fu from friend
Supporting detail:
1 pitcher, photo
2. joking
3. encourage
If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change
would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
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Main idea: use modern technology in our language class
Supporting detail:
1 computer
2. internet
3.real life material
Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school
day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on
academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and
details to support your answer.
Thesis: I donot believe that it is school responsibility to provide physical training for
its students
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Main idea: student should have to be graded
Supporting detail:
1 may not able to offer activity that interested everyone
2 poor grade
3.
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Main idea: economic
Supporting detail:
1 have no money to provide gym facility, athletic equipment
2 space is not available
3.
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Main idea: physical exercise that part of daly life
Supporting detail:
1 walk and ride bycicle
2. soccur team or tenies legue
3.
Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university.
What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons
and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
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Main idea: fun
Supporting detail:
1 party or concert
2. free time activity
3. serious about his study
Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their
birds, cats, or other animals like members of their family. In your opinion, are such
relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support
your answer
Thesis: not good to have too close relationship with pet or to treat it like a human
being
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Main idea: do not want to involve in other activity
Supporting detail:
1 invite for a coffie
2 not take weekened trip
3. put their pets interest before their own
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Main idea: too much love can interfere with relationship with people
Supporting detail:
1 neglete spouse and childern
2 loss interest in making friend
3. relationship with pet is less complicate
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We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your
opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work
closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these
characteristics are important.
Thesis: certain characteristics that all good coworker have common
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Main idea: cooperative
Supporting detail:
1 get along with other
2 try to do her part
3 positive attitude.
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Main idea: adaptable
Supporting detail:
1 shedule or rutine
2 job description revised
3. new procedure
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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other
people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your
opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why? Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose
friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends
who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to
you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?
It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your
neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and
details to support your answer.
Thesis: fully support the plan to build one
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Main idea: source of entertainment
Supporting detail:
1 little entertainment
2 nearest movie heater 60 mile away
3.
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Main idea: reduce juvenile deliquency
Supporting detail:
1 get job
2 sort of business
3.
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Main idea: attract more business
Supporting detail:
1 shop in our store
2. restaurant and store
3.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best
teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The expression Never, never give up means to keep trying and never stop
working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
Thesis: I agree with the statement
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Main idea: meet obstacle before achieve goal
Supporting detail:
1 ran for president
2 look my mistake and correct them
3. gave speech, call voter on phn , handed out broacher
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Main idea: another goal
Supporting detail:
1 love medicine but fail
2 love medicine because healping people
3. change my goal from healing people to helping people
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Main idea: another option
Supporting detail:
1 want to talk with my friend
2. computer doen, phn busy
3. got on bus and visit him
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently
when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the
way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
3.
It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your
neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and
details to support your answer.
Some people trust their first impressions about a persons character because they
believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a persons
character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare
these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Sup-port your choice with
specific examples
Thesis: people think it is unfair to judge others based on first impression but I
disagree
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Main idea: does not take long to show their true character
Supporting detail:
1 people act different situation and talk more to get to know
2 how person greet you
3. Friendly ,shy, polite , rude
4. How person try to make conversation
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Main idea: bad day what a person really like
Supporting detail:
1bad day tell you lot about people
2 angy, stride, ry , depressed, forget the problem
3.
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Main idea: learn a lot about a person fo few minute
Supporting detail:
1 way person gret me
Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times
throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate.
Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use
reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your
neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and
details to support your answer.
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher.
Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use
specific reasons to develop your essay.
3.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend
separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Thesis: I agree
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Main idea: fresh air in the countryside provides children with good health.
Supporting detail:
1 exposed to allergy vie pollution from both vehicles and factories.
2 far away from any high technologies much healthier.
3.
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Main idea: majority of children spend their free time wisely.
Supporting detail:
1 city-dwelling children waste their time by watching TV or playing video games
2 Big cities have limited areas and hardly furnish people in the communities with
public places for relaxing such as park and playgrounds. Therefore children in the
cities are limited to conducting useless or even harmful activities
3. rural children devote their leisure time playing with others in large open fields or
helping their parents look after their cattle. As a result, not only be rural children so
strong from everyday exercise, but they also spend their time in a meaningful way
by helping their parents do some work
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Main idea:
Supporting detail:
1
2.
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In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.
Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Thesis: for several reason
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Main idea: health care are available to more people now
Supporting detail:
1 public hospital
2 more clinic and doctor
3.
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Main idea: quality of health care improve
Supporting detail:
1 more knowledge about disease and cure
2 antiiotic and other medicine
3.
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Main idea: quality of nutrition has improved
Supporting detail:
1 low-fat food prevent heart disease
2. fruit and vegetable prevent cancer
3.
Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you
think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples
to support your opinion.