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2. Millions of people every year move to Englishspeaking countries such as Australia, Britain or
America, in order to study at school, college or
university. Why do so many people want to study in
English? Why is English such an important
international language?
Nowadays, language becomes a major factor to become a
successful person (that affects personal success). Many
people prefer to study abroad to (in an) English-speaking
countries because English is an international language.
There is no doubt that the best way to increase the English
language skill is use English language daily so if people
study in English speaking countries, their English skill
(English skill repeats too many times) will be improved
automatically and it will give them some advantages such
as they can (opportunities to) work in many countries or
they are able travelling(able to travel) to many different
places without studying other languages. This essay will
describe more details why English is an important
international language.__(this sentence adds no value to
your essay, remove it)
Firstly, English is widely used by a lot of countries and at
the present, the world traders are currently developing
rapidly. In order to compete with people from different
countries, it is very essential (essential (you cannot say
very essential)) to be able to communicate with (in)
English language. For example, China has been improving
a lot in many sectors. They are able to compete with other
countries because many people in China aware the
important (are aware of the importance of the) English
language and they are trying hard to study English.
Secondly, many companies prefer to employ people who
can speak English because if the companies create new
branch (branches) in different countries, the employers
are able to move the new branch without employ
(employing) new people again and the branch company is
still able to communicate with the central company. In
fact, One of the largest companies in the world (Google)
has created some branch (branches) in different countries
and each of the Google employers (employees) are able to
discuss or communicate even tough they are in different
countries because they use English to communicate.
In conclusion, many people move to English speaking
countries for further studies because they believe that it
will improve their English skill and to become a
successful person in the future, mastering English is very
essential (essential (again you cannot say very essential)).
This essay is too long (313 words instead of 250-265). It
isnt a problem on its own, but wasting time to write
more content that you dont get extra marks for is not
wise. Also, the more content you write, the more room
Arguments against
Its not in the best interest of a nation to ask for more from
foreign tourists as it clearly shows that the government
considers foreigners a source of easy money. These people
have traveled thousands of miles to understand ,
experience and praise the historical and cultural jewels,
which are a treasure for the entire mankind and not just
one nation . Hence, charging them a hefty premium is
immoral.
Moreover, this differential pricing works as a deterrent for
people from underdeveloped and developing nations who
could have visited tourist attractions in foreign countries,
but missed out due to the combination of high price and
unfavorable exchange rate.
Conclusion
Summarize the ideas above, do not add new information.
Introduction
Your introduction paragraph would be a good place to
explain that the practice of charging foreign visitors a
premium is something that several countries do for logical
and economic reasons.
Arguments in favor
Vocabulary
premium, differential pricing, immoral, mankind, treasure
heritage, coffer, historical and cultural jewels, deterrent