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Exchange essays
According to the thesis statement, which classical argument principles
are analyzed in the essay? Explain.
Do all topic and concluding sentences align with thesis? Explain.
Is the hook effective? Explain.
Does the introduction align with the conclusion? Explain.
Is MLA format followed? Explain.
The hunter crouched behind a tree waiting for a bear to come along
with a bow and arrow.
Dangling Modifiers
Modifier fails to refer logically to any word in the sentence
Understanding the need to create checks and balances on power, the
Constitution divided the government into three branches.
The document understood the need for checks and balances?
Understanding the need to create checks and balances on power, the
framers of the Constitution divided the government into three
branches.
Exercise 12-2
1. While working as a ranger in Everglades National Park,
a Florida panther crossed the road in front of my truck
one night.
While I was working as a ranger in Everglades National
Park, a Florida panther crossed the road in front of my
truck one night.
Exercise 12-2
2. By following the new recycling procedure, the citys
landfill costs will be reduced significantly.
If residents follow the new recycling procedure, the citys
landfill costs will be reduced significantly.
Exercise 12-2
3. Serving as president of the missionary circle, one of
Sophias duties is to raise money for the church.
Serving as president of the missionary circle, Sophia is
responsible for raising money for the church.
4. After buying an album by Ali Farka Toure, the rich and
rolling rhythms of Malian music made more sense to
Silas.
After buying an album by Ali Farka Toure, Silas
understood the rich and rolling rhythms of Malian
music.
Exercise 12-2
5. Opening the window to let out a huge bumblebee, the
car swerved into an oncoming truck.
When the driver opened the window to let out a huge
bumblebee, the car swerved into an oncoming truck.
The hunter crouched behind a tree waiting for a bear to come along
with a bow and arrow.
Restrictive ClauseThat
A restrictive clause is just part of a sentence that you can't get rid of
because it specifically restricts some other part of the sentence.
Here's an example: The words that sparkle restrict the kind of gems
you're talking about. Without them, the meaning of the sentence would
change. Without them, you'd be saying that all gems elicit forgiveness,
not just the gems that sparkle. (And note that you don't need commas
around the words that sparkle.)
On vs. About
On = placement
About = concerning, with regard to
Grammar Portfolio
Create and illustrate 5 misplaced or dangling modifiers.
Parallelism
Eng 102 BC
What is Parallelism?
Using the same pattern of words to show that two or more ideas
have the same importance
Patterns fall into four areas:
Eitheror
not onlybut also
neithernor
bothand whetheror
Parallelism Forms
Do not mix forms.
The production manager was asked to write his report quickly, accurately,
and in a detailed manner.
The production manager was asked to write his report quickly, accurately,
and thoroughly.
Parallelism Clauses
A parallel structure that begins with clauses must continue using clauses.
The coach told the players that they should get a lot of sleep, that they
should not eat too much, and to do some warm-up exercises before the
game.
The coach told the players that they should get a lot of sleep, that they
should not eat too much, and that they should do some warm-up exercises
before he game.
Parallelism Clauses
Repeat function words to clarify parallels
By, to, that, because
Our study revealed that left-handed students were more likely to have
trouble with classroom desks and rearranging desks for exam periods was
useful.
Our study revealed that left-handed students were more likely to have
trouble with classroom desks and that rearranging desks for exam periods
was useful.
Parallelism Lists
Be sure to keep al the elements in a list in the same form.
The dictionary can be used for these purposes: to find word meanings,
pronunciations, correct spellings, and looking up irregular verbs.
The dictionary can be used for these purposes: to find word meanings,
pronunciations, correct spellings, and irregular verbs.
Grammar Portfolio
Create a brochure about parallelism. Include an unbalanced example
of each parallel rule/category and its correction (there are 4).