1-11 Reading Skills

Authors Purpose
In learning new reading skills, you will use special academic
vocabulary. Knowing the right words will help you to
demonstrate your understanding.

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Academic Vocabulary
Word

Meaning

Example Sentence

convince v.
Related words: convinced,
convincing

to cause someone to
agree

Lawyers convince the jury by providing

relevant facts.

establish v.
Related words:
established, establishing

to create or prove

The players must establish the rules of

the games before they begin.

achieve v.
Related word: achiever

to carry out successfully

To achieve success you must be patient

and persistent.

The authors purpose is the authors reason for writing. The most
common purposes are to inform, to entertain, to persuade, and to reect.
The chart below lists some of the tools authors use to communicate
their purpose in expository texts and literature. For example, in the
novel Animal Farm, George Orwell used the theme the danger of
the few having power over the many to persuade his readers of the
misuse of political power in a dictatorship.

Expository Texts

Literature

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facts/details

gurative language

technical language

word choice

sentence structure

imagery

characters

imagery

setting

word choice

theme

genre

Directions Read the following e-mail. Underline clues in the text that
tell you what the authors purpose is. Note whether the purpose is to
inform, entertain, persuade, or reect. Then answer the questions.

Cezars bday

Link

Real L t o
ife

Sasha,
All set for Cezars bday party tonight
Cake = great (IMHO)1
Decorations = took me four hours, but also great
BTW2 Still need help so feel free to come early
Directions: Route 134 West to Exit 4A
Take right off exit

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Take third left onto Evergreen Street

Take rst right onto Prospect Place
Were #401A in the brick building on the left
CUL8R3 ; ) Aamir

1. IMHO In my humble opinion

2. BTW By the way
3. CUL8R See you later

Identify What is the authors purpose for writing this e-mail?

Establish What is the relationship between the author and

Sasha? What details tell you this?

Evaluate An e-mail is an informal way of communicating.

What aspects of the e-mail identify it as informal? Which
aspects are culture-specic?

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in business. Guiding Question: Does the author of this

memo express a truth that one cannot argue against?
Background The following memo was written by an employee of a
business. Read this memo closely to determine the authors purpose.
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MEMO
March 23
To: Todd Barker, Director of Facilities Management

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From: Maria Furtado, Human Resources

RE: Changing from polyfoam products to paper in
the company cafeteria
I am an employee of this company in the human resources
department. I am writing with regard to the polyfoam that is
currently being used as trays, bowls, and plates in the cafeteria.
I suggest that we switch from polyfoam to paper.
By switching from polyfoam to paper we would be helping the
environment, thereby eliminating unnecessary litter in our waste
disposal site. Paper is recyclable; polyfoam is not. Also, paper
products are less expensive than polyfoam, thereby saving the
company a lot of money.
Please consider my proposal for switching from polyfoam products
to paper products in the company cafeteria. I can be reached at
extension 2431.
Thank you very much.

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Thinking About the Selection

Memo
Identify The authors purpose is different from the message,
or theme. What is the authors purpose for writing this memo?
What is the message?

Evaluate Did Maria do an effective job of achieving her

purpose? If so, explain. If not, what could she have done
differently?

Identify What text features are part of a memo?

Interpret Rewrite the memo in the format of an e-mail, making

sure to convey a friendly tone. Remember to include a greeting
and closing.

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Write Answer the following questions in your Readers Journal.

Does the author of this memo express a truth

that one cannot argue against? Explain two different ways
of responding to this memo.

Apply With a partner, write a memo from the perspective

of a character in your Anchor Book to a character with
whom he or she is in conict.

Your teacher may ask you if you would like to

Ready for a
Free-Choice Book? choose another book to read on your own.
Select a book that fits your interest and that
youll enjoy.
y As you read, think about how your
new book compares with your Anchor Book.
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1-12 Literary Analysis

Setting and Mood

Literary Terms

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The setting
g of a literary work is the time and place of the
action. The setting can also serve a more important function. For
example, if a character is struggling against a force of nature, the
setting is the source of the storys conict.
Mood is the overall feeling that a literary work conveys to the
reader. Details of setting help establish the mood. A story set in
an old, decaying castle on a dark, stormy night might convey a
gloomy, frightening mood.
Directions Read the following passage. Underline details of setting
that help convey the mood. Then, answer the questions that follow.

from The

Land I Lost by Huynh Quang Nhuong

I was born on the central highlands of Vietnam in a small hamlet on a

riverbank that had a deep jungle on one side and a chain of high mountains
on the other. Across the river, rice elds stretched to the slopes of another
chain of mountains.
There were fty houses in our hamlet, scattered along the river or propped
against the mountainsides. The houses were made of bamboo and covered
with coconut leaves, and each was surrounded by a deep trench to protect
it from wild animals or thieves. The only way to enter a house was to walk
across a monkey bridgea single bamboo stick that spanned the trench. At
night we pulled the bridges into our houses and were safe.
There were no shops or marketplaces in our hamlet. If we needed
suppliesmedicine, cloth, soaps, or candleswe had to cross over the
mountains and travel to a town nearby. We used the river mainly for traveling
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Describe Look back at the details you underlined. Briey

describe the setting of the passage.

Analyze Describe the overall mood of the passage. Which

details of setting are most important in conveying this mood?

Analyze What does the setting tell you about when and where
the action in the passage takes place? Use details to support
your answer.

Apply Imagine a setting that makes you feel a certain

way. How would this place look, smell, and sound? What
different tastes and textures might someone experience in this
setting? Use the chart to list these sensory details.

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Sight

Sound

Smell

Taste

Touch

Describe On a separate sheet of paper, use the images from

your chart to write a brief description of the setting you have
imagined. Revise your description to make the setting and
mood more vivid by substituting specic nouns and verbs.
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understand the setting and mood. Guiding Question: What

does this story express that is true for everyone?

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The Day It Rained

Cockroaches
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by Paul Zindel

Background Paul Zindel was born in New York City, but he

moved to many different places during his childhood. The Day It
Rained Cockroaches tells of an event that left a lasting impression
on him during one of these moves.

Vocabulary Builder
Before you read, you will discuss the following words. In
the Vocabulary Builder box in the margin, use a vocabulary
building strategy to make the words your own.
kerchiefs

aghast

emblazoned

As you read, draw a box around unfamiliar words you could

add to your vocabulary. Use context clues to unlock their
meaning.

About anything else youd ever want to know about my

preteen existence you can see in the photos in this book.
However, I dont think life really started for me until I became a
teenager and my mother moved us to Travis, on Staten Island.
When we rst drove into the town, I noticed a lot of plain
wood houses, a Catholic church, a war memorial, three saloons
with men sitting outside on chairs, seventeen women wearing
kerchiefs on their heads, a one-engine rehouse, a big redbrick
school, a candy store, and a butcher shop with about 300
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Setting and Mood
As you read, underline key
words and phrases that describe
the setting and mood. In the
margin, make notes about how
the author is trying to help you
visualize the place and feeling of
the events that take place.

Vocabulary Builder
kerchiefs
(ku
urchifs) n.
Meaning

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aghast
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Meaning

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signaling she was aghast. Travis was mainly a Polish town, and
was so special-looking that, years later, it was picked as a location
for lming the movie Splendor in the Grass, which starred Natalie
Wood (before she drowned), and Warren Beatty (before he dated
Madonna). Travis was selected because they needed a town that
looked like it was Kansas in 1920, which it still looks like.
The address of our new home was 123 Glen Street. We stopped
in front, and for a few moments the house looked normal: brown
shingles, pea-soup-green-painted sides, a tiny yellow porch,
untrimmed hedges, and a rickety wood gate and fence. Across
the street to the left was a slope with worn gravestones all over it.
The best-preserved ones were at the top, peeking out of patches of
poison oak.
The backyard of our house was an airport. I mean, the house
had two acres of land of its own, but beyond the rear fence was a
huge eld consisting of a single dirt runway, lots of old propellerdriven Piper Cub-type planes, and a cluster of rusted hangars.
This was the most underprivileged airport Id ever seen, bordered
on its west side by the Arthur Kill channel and on its south side
by a Con Edison electric power plant with big black mountains
of coal. The only great sight was a huge apple tree on the far
left corner of our property. Its trunk was at least three feet wide.
It had strong, thick branches rich with new, apping leaves. It
reached upward like a giants hand grabbing for the sky.
Isnt everything beautiful? Mother beamed.
Yes, Mom, I said.
Betty gave me a pinch for lying.
Ill plant my own rose garden, Mother went on, fumbling for
the key. Lilies, tulips, violets!
Mom opened the front door and we went inside. We were so
excited, we ran through the echoing empty rooms, pulling up
old, soiled shades to let the sunlight crash in. We ran upstairs
and downstairs, all over the place like wild ponies. The only
unpleasant thing, from my point of view, was that we werent
the only ones running around. There were a lot of cockroaches
scurrying from our invading footfalls and the shafts of light.
Yes, the house has a few roaches, Mother confessed. Well
get rid of them in no time!
How? Betty asked raising an eyebrow.
I bought eight Gulf Insect Bombs!
Where are they? I asked.
Mother dashed out to the car and came back with one of the
suitcases. From it she spilled the bombs, which looked like big
silver hand grenades.
We just put one in each room and turn them on! Mother
explained.

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Critical Viewing
Does this picture
capture the mo
of the story?
Why or w

Good to Know!
Cockroaches can
survive on very little
food. They will eat
the glue from the
back of postage
tamps when little
s available.

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She took one of the bombs, set it in the middle of the upstairs
kitchen, and turned on its nozzle. A cloud of gas began to stream
from it, and we hurried into the other rooms to set off the other
bombs.
There! Mother said. Now we have to get out!
Get out? I coughed.
Yes. We must let the poison ll the house for four hours before
we can come back in! Lucky for us theres a Lassie double feature
playing at the Ritz!

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emblazoned
(em blaz nd) v.
Meaning

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We hadnt been in the house ten minutes before we were

driving off again!
I suppose you might as well know now that my mother really
loved Lassie movies. The only thing she enjoyed more were
movies in which romantic couples got killed at the end by tidal
waves, volcanos, or other natural disasters. Anyway, I was glad
we were gassing the roaches, because they are the one insect I
despise. Tarantulas I like. Scorpions I can live with. But ever since
I was three years old and my mother took me to a Worlds Fair, I
have had nightmares about cockroaches. Most people remember
an exciting water ride this fair had called the Shoot-the-Chutes,
but emblazoned on my brain is the display the fair featured
of giant, live African cockroaches, which look like American
cockroaches except theyre six inches long, have furry legs, and
can pinch esh. In my nightmares about them, Im usually lying
on a bed in a dark room and I notice a bevy1 of giant cockroaches
ading for me. I try to run away but nd out that someone has
secretly tied me down on the bed, and the African roaches start
crawling up the sides of the sheets. They walk all over my body,
and then they head for my face. When they start trying to drink
from my mouth is when I wake up screaming.
So after the movie I was actually looking forward to going back
to the house and seeing all the dead cockroaches.
Wasnt Lassie wonderful? Mother sighed as she drove
us back to Travis. The way that brave dog was able to crawl
hundreds of miles home after being kidnapped and beaten by
Nazi Secret Service Police!
Yes, Mom, I agreed, although I was truthfully tired of seeing
a dog movie star keep pulling the same set of tear-jerking stunts
in each of its movies.
Maybe well get a dog just like Lassie one day, Mother
sighed.
When we got back to the house this time, we didnt run into
it. We walked inside very slowly, snifng for the deadly gas. I
didnt care about the gas so much as I wanted to see a lot of roach
corpses all over the place so Id be able to sleep in peace.
But there were none.
Where are all the dead cockroaches? I asked.
We crept slowly upstairs to see if the bodies might be there.
I knew the kitchen had the most roaches, but when we went in,
I didnt see a single one, living or dead. The lone empty Gulf
Insect Bomb sat spent in the middle of the oor. My sister picked
up the bomb and started reading the directions. One thing my
mother never did was follow directions. As Betty was reading, I
noticed a closed closet door and reached out to turn its knob.
bevy
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It says here we shouldve opened all the closet doors before

setting off the bombs, so roaches cant hide. Betty moaned, her
clue to me that Mom had messed up again.
I had already started to open the door. My mind knew what
was going to happen, but it was too late to tell my hand to stop
pulling on the door. It sprang open, and suddenly 5,000 very
angry, living cockroaches rained down on me from the ceiling of
the closet.
Eeehhhhhh! I screamed, leaping around the room, bathed in
bugs, slapping at the roaches crawling all over me and down my
neck! Eeehhhhhh! Eeehh! Ehhh! Ehh!
Dont worry. Ill get more bombs, Mother said comfortingly
as she grabbed an old dishrag to knock the uttering roaches off
my back. Betty calmly reached out her foot to crunch as many as
dared run by her.

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After you read, review the words you decided to add to your
vocabulary. Write the meaning of words you have learned in
context. Look up the other words in a dictionary, glossary,
thesaurus, or electronic resource.

Paul Zindel
Although Paul Zindel studied chemistry at a college on Staten
Island, the borough where he grew up, Zindel had been writing
since he was a young boy. Because he, his mother, and his sister
moved around so much, Zindel had a lot to write about. By the
time I was ten, Zindel wrote, I had gone nowhere, but had
seen the world.
Zindel used many of his unusual real-life experiences as a
basis for his plays and young adult novels. He wrote his rst play
in high school, which earned him a literary award. During the
ten years he spent teaching high school chemistry and physics,
Zindel wrote the Pulitzer-Prize winning play The Effect of Gamma
Rays on Man-in-the-Moon Marigolds. The play was performed on
Broadway, winning an Obie Award in 1970 for Best American
Play. In addition to writing plays, Paul Zindel wrote many novels
for teenagers, including The Pigman, Confessions of a Teenage
Baboon, and The Undertakers Gone Bananas.

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Thinking About the Selection

The Day It Rained Cockroaches

Interpret How do the narrators sister and mother respond

to the narrators fear of cockroaches? What do their responses
reveal about their attitude toward the narrator?

Respond At what point in the story did you know something

was going to go wrong with the insect bombs? Explain your
response.

Determine What is the authors purpose for writing

this story?

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Analyze What mood does the story convey? How do the

characters and the setting help to create the mood?

Write Answer the following questions in your Readers Journal.

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What does this story express that is true for

everyone?
Analyze How is the setting important in your Anchor
Book? Compare the importance of this setting to one in
your own life.

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1-13 Comparing
Theme

Literary Works

Literary Term

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The theme of a literary work is different from the topic. A topic is the
focus, while a theme is its unifying idea. The message can be a lesson
about life or an observation about people. Often a works theme is
impliednot stated directly in the textso you will need to think
deeply about your reading to identify the theme.
Read the table below to see how a student marked the text to
identify theme.
Student Model: Marking the Text

The Ant and the Dove by Leo Tolstoy

An Ant went to the bank of a river to quench its thirst, and
being carried away by the rush of the stream, was on the point
of drowning. A Dove sittingg on a tree overhanging
g g the water
pplucked a leaf and let it fall into the stream close to her. The
Ant climbed onto it and oated safelyy into the bank. Shortly
afterward a birdcatcher came and stood underneath the tree,,

Dove saves
Ants life.
Dove will
be trapped.

and laid his lime-twigs

g for the Dove,, which sat in the branches.
The Ant,, perceiving
p
g his design,
g , stungg him in the foot. In pain
p
the birdcatcher threw down the twigs,
g , and the noise made the

Ant saves
Doves life.

Dove take wing.

g

The Ant risked its life to save the Dove. The Dove saved the Ants life
rst. Theme: One good turn deserves another.
Here are some common themes in literature.

A person grows with each challenge he or she overcomes.

Enjoy life now, because life is short.
Without courage, one might fail when life becomes difcult.
Jealousy can cause a person to do things he or she may regret.
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Vocabulary Builder
Before you read, you will discuss the following words. In
the Vocabulary Builder box in the margin, use a vocabulary
building strategy to make the words your own.
tantalizing

kindled

preserves

As you read, draw a box around unfamiliar words you could

add to your vocabulary. Use context clues to unlock their
meaning.
It was enough for Catherine that Dolly understood her:
they were always together and everything they had to say
they said to each other: bending my ear to an attic beam I
could hear the tantalizing
g tremor of their voices owing
like sapsyrup through the old wood.
To reach the attic, you climbed a ladder in the linen
closet, the ceiling of which was a trapdoor. One day, as I
started up, I saw that the trapdoor was swung open and,
listening, heard above me an idle sweet humming, like

Theme
As you read, underline
details that will help you to
determine the theme. Write
the theme at the end.

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g
p
p
main character, Collin, had become an orphan and is now
living with two quirky old ladies with whom he forms an
unbreakable bond.

Vocabulary Builder
tantalizing
(tan t lizi[ng]) adj.
Meaning

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pretty sounds small girls make when playing alone. I would

have turned back, but the humming stopped, and a voice said:
Catherine?
Collin, I answered, showing myself.
The snowake of Dollys face held its shape; for once she did
not dissolve. This is where you comewe wondered, she said,
her voice frail and crinkling as tissue paper. She had the eyes of
a gifted person, kindled, transparent eyes, luminously green as
mint jelly: gazing at me through the attic twilight they admitted,
timidly, that I meant her no harm. You play games up herein
the attic? I told Verena you would be lonesome. Stooping, she
rooted around in the depths of a barrel. Here now, she said,
you can help me by looking in that other barrel. Im hunting
for a coral castle; and sack of pearl pebbles, all colors. I think
Catherine will like that, a bowl of goldsh, dont you? For her
birthday. We used to have a bowl of tropical shdevils, they
were: ate each other up. But I remember when we bought them;
we went all the way to Brewton, sixty miles. I never went sixty
miles before, and I dont know that I ever will again. Ah see, here
it is, the castle. Soon afterwards I found the pebbles; they were
like kernels of corn or candy, and: Have a piece of candy, I said,
offering the sack. Oh thank you, she said, I love a piece of
candy, even when it tastes like a pebble.
We were friends, Dolly and Catherine and me. I was eleven,
then I was sixteen. Though no honors came my way, those were
the lovely years.
I never brought anyone home with me, and I never wanted to.
Once I took a girl to a picture show, and on the way home she
asked couldnt she come in for a drink of water. If Id thought she
was really thirsty I wouldve said all right; but I knew she was
faking just so she could see inside the house the way people were
always wanting to, and so I told her she better wait until she got
home. She said: All the world knows Dolly Talbos gone, and
youre gone too. I liked that girl well enough, but I gave her a
shove anyway, and she said her brother would x my wagon,
which he did: right here at the corner of my mouth. Ive still got a
scar where he hit me with a soda bottle.
I know: Dolly, they said, was Verenas cross, and said, too, that
more went on in the house on Talbo Lane than a body cared to
think about. Maybe so. But those were the lovely years.
On winter afternoons, as soon as I came in from school
Catherine hustled open a jar of preserves, while Dolly put a
foot-high pot of coffee on the stove and pushed a pan of biscuits
into the oven; and the oven, opening, would let out a hot vanilla
fragrance, for Dolly, who lived off of sweet foods, was always
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kindled
(kin d ld) adj.
Meaning

preserves
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Meaning

never would touch a vegetable, and the only meat she liked was
the chicken brain, a pea-sized thing gone before you tasted it.
What with a woodstove and an open replace, the kitchen was as
warm as a cows tongue. The nearest winter came was to frost the
windows with its zero blue breath. If some wizard would like to
give me a present, let him give me a bottle lled with the voices of
that kitchen, the ha ha ha and re whispering, a bottle brimming
with its buttery sugary bakery smellsthough Catherine smelled
like a sow in the spring.

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Vocabulary Builder
After you read, review the words you decided to add to your
vocabulary. Write the meaning of words you have learned in
context. Look up the other words in a dictionary, glossary,
thesaurus, or electronic resource.

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Critical Viewing

The collage on the

left is an artists
interpretation of the
story. What details
from the text support
the artists choices?

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Now that youve read an excerpt from The Grass Harp,

read this excerpt from Child of the Owl and compare the
central message, or theme, in both readings.

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by Laurence Yep

Background In the following story, a twelve-year-old AsianAmerican girl is forced to live with her grandmother in San
Francisco after her father, Barney, ends up in the hospital. The girl
quickly learns that San Francisco is a place very different from her
home, and nds herself feeling like a stranger in a strange land.

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Vocabulary Builder
Before you read, you will discuss the following words. In
the Vocabulary Builder box in the margin, use a vocabulary
building strategy to make the words your own.
momentary

swanky

truce

As you read, draw a box around unfamiliar words you could

add to your vocabulary. Use context clues to unlock their
meaning.

It was like wed gone through an invisible wall into another world.
There was a different kind of air here, lighter and brighter. I mean,
on the north side there were a series of small broken down stores;
on the west, the mansions and hotels of Nob Hill; and on the
other two sides were the tall skyscrapers where insurance men or
lawyers spent the day. And they were pushing all the sunshine and
all the buildings of Chinatown together like someone had taken
several square miles of buildings and squeezed it until people and
homes were compressed into a tiny little half of a square mile.
I didnt know what to make of the buildings either. They were
mostly three- or four-story stone buildings but some had fancy
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Theme
As you read, underline details
that will help you to determine
the theme. Write the theme at
the end.

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momentary
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Meaning

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balconies, and others had decorations on them like curved tile

roofsone building had bright yellow balconies decorated with
shiny, glazed purple dolphinsand there was a jumble of neon
signs, dark now in the daytime, jammed all together. Most of the
buildings, though, had some color to thembright reds and rich
golds with some green thrown in.
But it was the people there that got me. I dont think Id ever
seen so many Chinese in my life before this. Some were a rich,
dark tan while others were as pale as Caucasians1. Some were
short with round faces and wide, full-lipped mouths and noses
squashed at, and others were tall with thin faces and high
cheekbones that made their eyes look like the slits in a mask.
Some were dressed in regular American style while others wore
padded silk jackets. All of them crowding into one tiny little patch
of San Francisco.
Funny, but I felt embarrassed. Up until then I had never
thought about skin colors because in the different places where
Barney and I had lived, there were just poor people in all different
colors. But now all of a sudden I saw all these funny brown
people running around, a lot of them gabbling away at one
another. I started to roll up the car window to try to shut out the
sound and I noticed that my hand on the window handle was
colored a honey kind of tan like some of the people outside. I took
my hand off the handle and stared at it.
Whats the matter now? Phil asked. Wed gotten caught in
a momentary
y trafc snarl. I turned to see that Phils face was
brown as my hand. Phil adjusted his tie uneasily and growled,
Whatre you looking at?
I looked ahead, keeping my eyes on the glove compartment.
Barney and me had never talked much about stuff like this. I knew
more about race horses than I knew about myselfI mean myself
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my hands, and then I closed my eyes and felt their outline, noticing
the tiny fold of esh at the corners. Maybe it was because I thought
of myself as an American and all Americans were supposed to be
white like on TV or in books or in movies, but now I felt like some
mad scientist had switched bodies on me like in all those monster
movies, so that I had woken up in the wrong one.
Suddenly I felt like I was lost. Like I was going on this trip to
this place I had always heard about and I was on the only road
to that place but the signs kept telling me I was going to some
other place. When I looked in the glove compartment to check my
maps, I found Id brought the wrong set of maps. And the road
was too narrow to turn around in and there was too much trafc
anyway so I just had to keep on going . . . and getting more and
more lost. It gave me the creeps so I kept real quiet.
Phil headed up Sacramento Streeta steep, slanting street that
just zoomed on and on up to the top of Nob Hill, where the rich
people lived and where they had the swanky
y hotels. Phil turned
suddenly into a little dead-end alley wide enough for only one
car. On one side was a one-story Chinese school of brick so old
or so dirty that the bricks were practically a purple color. On the
other side as we drove by was a small parking lot with only six
spaces for cars. Phil stopped the car in the middle of the alley
and I could see the rest of it was lled with apartment houses.
Somewhere someone had a window open and the radio was
blaring out I Want to Hold Your Hand by that new group, the
Beatles. I couldnt nd the place where it was coming from but I
did see someones diapers and shirts hung in the windows and
on the re escape of one apartment.
Why do they hang their laundry in the windows? I asked Phil.
Thats what people from Hong Kong use for curtains, Phil
grumbled.
The sidewalk in front of Paw-Paws house was cracked like
someone had taken a sledgehammer to it, and there were iron
grates over the lower windows. The steps up to the doorway were
old, worn concrete painted red. To the left were the mailboxes,
which had Chinese words for the names or had no labels at
all. To the right were the doorbells to all the nine apartments.
Phil picked out the last and rang. He jabbed his thumb down
rhythmically. Three short. Three long. Three short.
Why are you doing that? I asked.
Signaling your Paw-Paw, he grumbled. She never answers
just one buzz like any normal person, or even just three bursts.
Its got to be nine buzzes in that way or she doesnt open the door.
She says her friends know what she means.
So did I. It was Morse code for SOS. The buzzer on the door
sounded like an angry bee. Phil the Pill opened the door, putting

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swanky
(swa[ng] ke) adj.
Meaning

Critical Viewing
Why does the
sound of music
make the narrator
think she is at the
wrong door?

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his back against it and ghting against the heavy spring that
tried to swing it shut. Go on. Up three ights. Number nine.
I walked into an old, dim hallway and climbed up the wooden
steps. As I turned an angle on the stairs, I saw light burning erce
and bright from a window. When I came to it, I looked out at the
roof of the Chinese school next door. Someone had thrown some
old 45s and a pair of sneakers down there. If I were some kind of
kid that felt sorry for herself, I would almost have said that was
the way I felt: like some piece of old, ugly junk that was being
kicked around on the discard pile while Barney was getting better.
I didnt stay by the window long, though, because Phil was
coming up the stairs and I didnt want to act like his kids stories
about Paw-Paw had scared me. Anybody could be better than
Phil the Pill and his family I hoped. I stopped by the numbernine room, afraid to knock. It could not be the right place because
I could hear I Want to Hold Your Hand coming through the
doorway. I scratched my head and checked the numbers on the
other doors on the landing. Phil the Pill was still a ight down,
hufng and pufng up the steps with my duffel bagit wasnt
that heavy; Phil was just that much out of shape. Go on. Go on.
Knock, you little idiot, he called up the stairwell.
I shrugged. It wasnt any of my business. I knocked at the
door. I heard about six bolts and locks being turned. Finally the
door swung open and I saw a tiny, pleasant, round-faced woman
smiling at me. Her cheeks were a bright red. Her gray hair was
all curly and frizzy around her head
eyeglasses perched on her nose. She
wearing a sweater even on a hot da
black slacks, and a pair of open-hee
Paw-Paw? I asked.
Hello. Hello. She opened up her
arms and gave me a big hug, almost
crushing me. It was funny, but even
though it was like I saidBarney
and me never went in much for that
sentimental stuff like hugging and
kissingI suddenly found myself
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the soft layers of clothing I could feel how hard and tough she was.
She patted me on the back three times and then left me for a moment
to turn down her radio. It really was her old, white, beat-up radio
playing rock music.
Hey, how about a hand? Phil puffed as he nally got to the
landing.
Paw-Paw shufed out to the landing in her slippered feet and
made shooing motions. You can go home now. We can do all
right by ourselves.
Phil heaved his shoulders up and down in a great sigh and set
the bag down. Now, Momma
Go on home. she said rmly. We need time by ourselves.
I saw that Phil must have had some ne speech all prepared,
probably warning Paw-Paw about me and warning me about
ingratitude. He was not about to give up such an opportunity to
make a speech.
Now. Momma
Go on. Youre still not too old for a swat across the backside.
Phil ran his hand back and forth along the railing. Really,
Momma. You oughtnt
Go on, Paw-Paw raised her hand.
Phil gulped. The thought of having a former district president
of the lawyers spanked by his own mother must have been too
much for him. He turned around and started down the steps. He
still had to get in the last word though. You mind your Paw-Paw,
young lady. You hear me? he shouted over his shoulder.
I waited till I heard the door slam. Do you know what those
buzzes stand for?
Do you? Her eyes crinkled up.
It stands for SOS. But where did you learn it?
When I worked for the American lady, her boy had a toy . . .
what do you call it? She made a tapping motion with her nger.
Telegraph?
Yes. Its a good joke on such a learned man, no? Her round red
face split into a wide grin and then she began to giggle and when
she put her hand over her mouth, the giggle turned into a laugh.
I dont think that I had laughed in all that time since Barneys
accident a month ago. It was like all the laughter I hadnt been able
to use came bubbling up out of some hidden wellburst out of the
locks and just came up. Both of us found ourselves slumping on
the landing, leaning our heads against the banister, and laughing.
Finally Paw-Paw tilted up her glasses and wiped her eyes.
Philip always did have too much dignity for one person. Ah.
She leaned back against the railing on the landing before the
stairwell, twisting her head to look at me. Youll go far. she
nodded. Yes, you will. Your eyebrows are beautifully curved like
silkworms. That means youll be clever. And your ears are small
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and close to your head and shaped a certain way. That means
youre adventurous and win much honor.
Really?
She nodded solemnly. Didnt you know? The face is the map
of the soul. Then she leaned forward and raised her glasses and
pointed to the corners of her eyes where there were two small
hollows, just shadows, really. You see those marks under my eyes?
Yes. I added after a moment, Paw-Paw.
Those marks, they mean I have a temper.
Oh. I wondered what was to happen next.
She set her glasses back on her nose. But I will make a deal
with you. I can keep my temper under control if you can do
the same with your love of adventure and intelligence. You
see, people, including me, dont always understand a love of
adventure and intelligence. Sometimes we mistake them for
troublemaking.
Ill try. I grinned.
I went and got my bag then and brought it inside Paw-Paws
place and looked around, trying to gure out where Id put it.
Her place wasnt more than ten by fteen feet and it was crowded
with her stuff. Her bed was pushed lengthwise against the wall
next to the doorway leading out to the landing. To the right of
the door was another doorway, leading to the small little cubicle
of a kitchen, and next to that door was her bureau. The wall
opposite the bed had her one window leading out to the re
escape and giving a view of the alley, which was so narrow that
it looked like we could have shaken hands with the people in the
apartment house across from us. Beneath the window was a stack
of newspapers for wrapping up the garbage. Next to the window
was a table with a bright red-and-orange-ower tablecloth. PawPaw pulled aside her chair and her three-legged stool and told
me to put my bag under the table. A metal cabinet and stacks of
boxes covered the rest of the wall and the next one had hooks from
which coats and other stuff in plastic bags hung.
In the right corner of the old bureau were some statues and
an old teacup with some dirt in it and a half-burnt incense stick
stuck into it. The rest of the top, though, was covered with old
photos in little cardboard covers. They lled the bureau top and
the mirror too, being stuck into corners of the mirror or actually
taped onto the surface.
Next to the photos were the statues. One was about eight
inches high in white porcelain of a pretty lady holding a ower
and with the most patient, peaceful expression on her face. To her
left was a statue of a man with a giant-sized, bald head. And then
there were eight little statues, each only about two inches high.
Who are they? I asked.
Statues of some holy people, Paw-Paw said reluctantly.

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There was something familiar about the last statue on PawPaws bureau. It was of a fat, balding god with large ears, who
had little children crawling over his lap and climbing up his
shoulders. Hey, I said. Is that the happy god?
Paw-Paw looked puzzled. Hes not the god of happiness.
But they call him the happy god. See? I pulled Barneys little
plastic charm out of my pocket and pointed to the letters on the back.
Paw-Paw didnt even try to read the lettering. Maybe Barney
had already shown it to her long ago. Hes not the god of
happiness. He just looks happy. Hes the Buddhathe Buddha
who will come in the future. Hes smiling because everyone will
be saved by that time and he can take a vacation. The children are
holy people who become like children again.
What about the others, Paw-Paw?
I dont have the words to explain, Paw-Paw said curtly, like
the whole thing was embarrassing her.
I sat down by the table on the stool, which was painted white with
red owers. Sure you do. I think your English is better than mine.
You dont want to know any of that stuff. With her index
nger Paw-Paw rubbed hard against some spot on the tableclo
That stuffs only for old people. If I tell you any more, youll
laugh at it like all other young people do. There was bitter hu
and anger in her voice.
I should have left her alone, I guess; but we had been getting
close to one another and suddenly Id found this door between
usa door that wouldnt open. I wasnt so much curious now as
I was desperate: I didnt want Paw-Paw shutting me out like that.
I wont laugh, Paw-Paw. Honest.
That stuffs only for old people who are too stupid to learn
American ways, she insisted stubbornly.
Well, maybe Im stupid too.
No. Paw-Paw pressed her lips together tightly; and I saw that no
matter how much I pestered her, I wasnt going to get her to tell me
any more about the statues on her bureau. Wed been getting along so
great before that I was sorry Id ever started asking questions.
We both sat, each in our own thoughts, until almost
apologetically Paw-Paw picked up a deck of cards from the table.
Do you play cards?
Some, I said. Draw poker. Five-card stud. Things like that.
Paw-Paw shufed the cards expertly. Poker is for old men
who like to sit and think too much. Now I know a game thats for
the young and quick.
Whats that?
Slapjack. She explained that each of us took half of a deck and
stacked it in front without looking at it. Then we would take turns
taking the top card off and putting it down in the middle. Whenever
a jack appeared, the rst one to put her hand over the pile of cards
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Buddhism was founded in the

fth century B.C.E. by Siddartha
Gautama, who became known
as the Buddha.

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got it. She then mixed the new cards with all the cards she still had in
front of her. The rst one to get all the cards won the game. It would
sound like the advantage was with the person who was putting out
the card at that time, but she was supposed to turn up the card away
from her so she couldnt see it before the other player.
Paw-Paw had played a lot of card games, since she lived by
herself, so she seemed to know when the jacks were going to come
up. For a while all you could hear was the slap-slap-slapping of
cards and sometimes our hands smacking one another trying to get
the pile. And sometimes Id have more cards and sometimes PawPaw would. Eventually, though, she beat me. She shufed the deck
again. Youre a pretty good player, she grudged.
Not as good as you, though.
Paw-Paw shufed the cards, tapping them against the table so
the cards in the pack were all even. We used to play all the time.
Your mother, Phil, everyone. Wed hold big contests and make
plenty of noise. Only when Phil got older, he only wanted to play
the games fancy Americans played likewhats that word for a
road that goes over water?
A bridge? Phil wanted to play bridge.
Yes. Paw-Paw put the deck on the table. I wandered over to
the bed.
The radio was in a little cabinet built into the headboard of the
bed. I lay down on the bed and looked at the radio dial. Do you
like rock music, Paw-Paw?
Its fun to listen to, Paw-Paw said, and besides, Chinese Hour
is on that station every night.
Chinese Hour?
An hour of news and songs all in Chinese. Paw-Paw slipped
the cards back carefully into their box. They used to have some
better shows on that station like mystery shows.
I bet I could nd some. I started to reach for the dial.
Dont lose that station. Paw-Paw seemed afraid suddenly.
Dont worry, Paw-Paw. Ill be able to get your station back for
you. It was playing Monster Mash right then. I twisted the dial
to the right and the voices and snatches of song slid past and then
I turned the dial back to her station, where Monster Mash was
still playing. See?
As long as you could get it back, Paw-Paw said reluctantly.
I ddled with the dial some more until I got hold of Gunsmoke.
Itd gone off the air three years ago but some station was playing
reruns. Paw-Paw liked that, especially the deep voice of the
marshal. It was good to sit there in the darkening little room,
listening to Marshal Dillon inside your head and picturing him
as big and tall and striding down the dusty streets of Dodge City.
And I got us some other programs too, shows that Paw-Paw had
never been able to listen to before.

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 Good to Know!

Physicists were developing

innovative ideas for radio
technology as early as the
1860s. It was not until the
1920s that commercial
radio appeared.

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Dont get the idea that Paw-Paw was stupid. She just didnt
understand American machines that well. She lived with them
in a kind of truce where she never asked much of them if they
wouldnt ask much of her.
Its getting near eight, Paw-Paw said anxiously. It was only
when I got the station back for her that she began to relax. I was
always so worried that I would not be able to get back the station,
I never tried to listen to others. Look what I missed.
But you have me now, Paw-Paw, I said.
Yes, Paw-Paw smiled briey, straightening in her chair. I
guess I do.

Vocabulary Builder
After you read, review the words you decided to add to your
vocabulary. Write the meaning of words you have learned in
context. Look up the other words in a dictionary, glossary,
thesaurus, or electronic resource.

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truce
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oos) n.
Meaning

Thinking About the Selection

from The Grass Harp and from Child of the Owl
Analyze How are Paw-Paws cultural and religious beliefs
different from the narrators? How does this difference affect
their ability to communicate?

Compare The Grass Harp and Child of the Owl have similar
themes, yet the ways in which their themes are revealed differ
in each selection. What is the theme of these selections? What
details from each selection are used to express the same theme?

Analyze The same themes that appear across literary texts

are universal themes. Characters in these texts often share
similarities. What issues, experiences, and emotions do the
characters of both excerpts share?

Evaluate The Child of the Owl excerpt uses more contemporary

language than the excerpt from The Grass Harp. Identify and
explain an example from each that shows this difference in
style.

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Write Answer the following questions in your Readers Journal.

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Is your Anchor Book genre ction or

nonction?
Interprett What is the theme of your Anchor Book, and
how is it communicated through the genre? Support your
response with details from the text.
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1-14 Language Coach

Grammar and Spelling
Personal Pronouns
A personal pronoun is used in place of a noun in a sentence. Personal
pronouns change their form, or case, depending on how they function
in a sentence.

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I, you, she, it, we, they

Objective Case Pronouns

me, you, him, her, it, us, them

Possessive Case Pronouns

my, mine, your, yours, his, her, hers, its, our, ours, their, theirs

Case

When to Use

Examples

Nominative

the pronoun is the subject of a verb

They
y make memory chips for computers.

Objective

the pronoun is used as a direct or

indirect object

Keith took the computer apart

and studied it.

Possessive

to show ownership

Jasmine enjoys playing with her computer.

Avoid errors in pronoun case. If a pronoun is near the beginning of

a sentence, it should probably be in the subjective case. If a pronoun
is near the end of the sentence, it is most likely an example of the
objective case.
Directions Proofread the following passage. Underline and correct
the errors in pronoun case.
Me and her went to the movies. I forgot me wallet, but she lent
I some money. She gave the ticket to I. I will probably pay she
back tomorrow. The movie was great, but the previews of upcoming
movies were better. I cant wait to see them.

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Authors Craft
See who can nd
the most personal
pronouns in the
excerpt from The Day
It Rained Cockroaches.
Label the pronouns as
nominative, objective,
orr possessive.

Reexive Pronouns
A reflexive pronoun reects the action of the verb back to the subject.
A reexive pronoun always ends with selff or -selves.
Most domestic catss will groom themselves.

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The reexive pronoun themselves reects the action of the verb

groom back to the subject cats.
A reexive pronoun always refers back to another word in the
sentence (its antecedent). The reexive pronoun should agree in
number with the antecedent.
Mindy prides herselff on being a good skater.
Mindy is the antecedent.
Karen and I found two seats and made ourselves
comfortable.
The antecedent of ourselves is the compound subject Karen and I.
Do not use a reexive pronoun to take the place of a noun or pronoun.
INCORRECT
CORRECT

Dan, Lily, or myself will run the video camera.

Dan, Lily, or I will run the video camera.

Directions Underline the reexive pronoun in each sentence. Then,

circle the antecedent.

Viewers of television owe it to themselves to choose shows

wisely.

Usually a producer of a TV show will not willingly censor

himself.

My sisters and I make ourselves viewing schedules.

Because the TV does not turn itself off, we limit our viewing to
one hour per night.

You can make yourself smarter by choosing interesting,

informative shows to watch.

Authors Craft
Rewrite two sentences
from the selection The
Day It Rained Cockroaches on page 68
so that they contain
reexive pronoun errors. Then trade your
sentences with a partner and correct your
partners sentences.

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Pronoun Agreement
A pronoun usually stands for a noun or pronoun, which is called the
antecedent. Pronouns should agree with their antecedents in person,
gender, and number. Person tells whether the pronoun refers to the
one speaking (rst person), the one spoken to (second person), or the
one spoken about (third person).

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Number tells whether a pronoun is singular or plural.

I would like to write my report on penguins.
Penguins walk with a waddle because they have short legs and tall bodies.
Sometimes the antecedent of a pronoun is an indenite pronoun.
Singular Indenite Pronouns
Example One of the penguins was
feeding its baby.

anybody, anyone, anything, each, either

everybody, everyone, everything, neither
nobody, no one, nothing, one, somebody
someone, something

Plural Indenite Pronouns

Example Many of the penguins were
on their stomachs on the ice.

both,

few,

many

Certain indenite pronouns can be plural or singular. Use the verb

to identify whether the antecedent is plural or singular.
Plural or Singular Indenite Pronouns
Singular Example Some of the money remains unclaimed.
Plural Example Some of the children hide from the babysitter.
Directions Rewrite each sentence, correcting any errors in pronounantecedent agreement. If a sentence is correct as written, write Correct.

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Each of the men took their uniform to the dry cleaners.

The ladies in the card club have postponed its next meeting.

Several of the homes had their roofs torn off during the storm.

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all, any, most

some, none, more

Spelling Tricky or Difcult Words

Sometimes, when saying a word, people make the mistake of adding
or subtracting syllables. If this mistake leads them to mispronounce
the word, they are likely to misspell the word as well.

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If you say bev-er-age,

you might spell beverage (correct)

If you say bev-rage,

you might spell bevrage (incorrect)

If you say de-cath-a-lon,

you might spell decathalon (incorrect)

If you say de-cath-lon,

you might spell decathlon (correct)

The best solution to this problem is to look in a dictionary. Check

how to pronounce the word, as well as how to spell it. For practice
in recognizing correct spelling, read through your Anchor Book. Say
aloud tricky or difcult words to match their pronunciations to their
spelling.
Directions Circle the letter of the sentence in which the underlined
word is spelled correctly.

A. In the winter, everyone enjoys a hot bevrage

g .
B. When I had the u, the doctor told me to take asprin
p .
C. Most soda pop is basically
y sugar water.
D. Carla is a superb all-around athalete.

F. It can be dangerous to drive in wintery

y conditions.
G. Saying that my younger brother is mischevous is putting
it mildly.
H. Some nutritionists say that small amounts of choclate are
good for you.
J. My sister is a talented amateur gardener
g
.

A. My dad and I have basickly

y different tastes in music.
B. When we discuss this topic, the atmossfhere can grow
pretty intense.
C. My dad says that after listening to hours of my CDs, he
has a headache and needs an aspirin
p
.
D. I tell him that I feel the same way after listening to his
opra
p CDs.

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1-15 Writers Workshop

Narration: Personal Narrative
A personal narrative, or memoir, tells the story of a memorable
event, time, or situation in the writers life. Follow the steps outlined
in this workshop to write a personal narrative about an event that had
an effect on your attitude or helped you see the world differently.
Your personal narrative should feature the following elements.
A consistent rst-person point of view
A clear incident, event, or situation from your life

Purpose To tell the

story of a memorable
event, time, or
situation in your life
Audience You, your
teacher, and your
classmates

Relevant background information

A central conict, problem, or shift in perspective
Vivid feelings you have about the experience
Dialogue that helps reveal your and others personalities
Error-free writing, including correct use of pronouns

PrewritingPlan It Out
To choose a good topic to narrate, use any of the following strategies.
Free write. List ideas about special times in your life. Focus
on getting ideas down do not worry about grammar and
punctuation. Instead, let one idea lead to another and jot dow
details to help you remember each specic time. Review your
and choose a topic.
Make a chart. In a chart like the one at right, list words and
phrases that apply to each heading. You may use
some of these words and phrases when you write.

Rening Your Topic

Peop
le: M
e, Ma
Time
tt, Pa
: 5p.m
t
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Place
: base
b
Even
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e play
Pat g ed the Bul
ot hu
ldogs
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Feeli Matt had t,
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Nervo to take ov
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us, ex
cited r.

Knowing why you want to tell your story and why it might in
your audience can help you decide what to write.
If your purpose is to entertain your audience, focus on the funny,
exciting, or moving parts of your story.
If your purpose is also to share a lesson you learned, focus on
details that illustrate the message. Be prepared to explain what
you learned from your experience.

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DraftingGet It on Paper
Before writing your draft, look over some of the techniques the
authors in this unit and in your Anchor Book have used.
Shape your writing. Make sure you address the important elements
in your narrative. Complete the graphic organizer below.
Narrative Elements

Your Narrative

Setting
Conict
Climax
Resolution
Student Model: Shape Your Writing
I remember the day my dad placed a glove in one of my hands and a
bat in the other and told me the combination was an eight-letter word
called baseball. Ever since then, most of my memories have been related
to the sport. When I was eleven, I played in a game Ill remember forever.

The student starts his

draft by introducing the
situation and hinting at
the conict.

Provide elaboration. Describe the event, setting, situations, and

people using rich details to create a vivid picture of the experience.
Dull:

Matt caught the ball and threw it to rst base.

Vivid: Matt made an awkward catch, then an even more clumsy lob toward rst.
Create a vivid detail for your narrative:

Describe your feelings. Tell your readers how you felt by using
a consistent rst-person point of view. As you draft, omit any
information that is not appropriate or relevant to your topic.

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Directions Read the student model of a personal narrative below.
Pay attention to specic details, the conict, and dialogue.

Chris Kleinhen, Palos Verdes, CA

Baseball, a Sport I Love

I remember the day my dad placed a glove in one of my
hands and a bat in the other and told me the combination
was an eight-letter word called baseball. Ever since then, most
of my memories have been related to the sport. When I was
eleven, I played in a game Ill remember forever.
We were facing the West Torrance Bull Dogs. We had a great
team that year. Our pitcher, Frank (The Smasher) was tough to
hit. The nicknames of other playersHot Glove, Fireball,
and Maguire Jr.were earned with outstanding play during
the season. We had a team of stars. The only one who had not
earned a star nickname was Matt.
Nine starters took the eld at ve oclock in the afternoon.
The small crowd of parents and friends made enough noise for
a major-league game. For most of the game, the two teams
were evenly matched. Then, in the last inning, Pat The
Runstopper at third base was injured as one of the Bull Dogs
accidentally rammed his ankle while sliding into third base. We
had two choices: forfeit the game or play Matt.
You can do it, Matt! the coach said as he sent Matt out to
take Pats place on third base.
All right, Matt! we encouraged from our places in the
eld as he trotted out nervously.The score was tied with two
outs. Unfortunately, the next ball took a sharp bounce toward
thirdand toward Matt. Matt ran forward and made an awkward
catch, followed by an even more awkward lob toward rst.
Amazingly it made it there in time!
As we jogged back in, the players called out, Way to go,
Matt!
You came through in the clutch!
Thats when I realized the truth of something the coach is
always telling us. When you play as a team, everyone is a star.
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RevisingMake It Better
Check that you have elaborated on your ideas with sufcient
supporting details. Check for sentence variety. Look over your
paragraphs to see the patterns of sentences you have used. When
writing in the rst person, you may nd that many of the sentences
begin with I. Use the rubric below to help you revise your narrative,
and consider reviewing your essay with a classmate or your teacher.

EditingBe Your Own Language Coach

Before you hand in your nal draft, review it for grammatical errors.
Pay special attention to proper spelling and punctuation of plural
nouns, along with pronoun agreement.

Publishing Share It!

A work is published for a specic audience. Share your essay with
friends or family, perhaps by creating a booklet or publishing it online.

Keep a log of your writing weaknesses and strengths and your

goals to improve as a writer. Work on developing your personal
voice.

Reecting on Your Writing

Rubric for Self-Assessment Assess your essay. For each

question, circle a rating.

CRITERIA
IDEAS Is your paper lled with rich details?

RATING SCALE
NOT VERY

VERY

ORGANIZATION How consistent is your

organization?

VOICE Does your writing draw the reader in?

WORD CHOICE Do your words convey a message?

SENTENCE FLUENCY Does your writing have an

easy ow and rhythm with well-built, varied sentences?

CONVENTIONS How correct is your grammar,

especially pronoun agreement?

Narration: Personal Narrative

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