Académique Documents
Professionnel Documents
Culture Documents
STATION/ NIGHT
Dark screen.
Announcer VO: 11.45 Ka Borivali local paltform number 1 pe
aayega.
Camera on ground level. Close up of chappal(bright green crocs) clad
feet as it walks in. Next moment, someone spits right on the platform.
Suspense music build.
Tipu VO: Oh madam check karo na mera ticket!
We reveal the almost empty station, three men has walked in, the
eldest, Raghu(26) is chewing paan, in a kurta and jeans. Goldie(24) has
colored hair and a lot of chains around his neck. The third is the
youngest(19), Tipu. He is waving a ticket at a female CRPF. The lady
cops ignores and walks away. Goldie passes through the station metal
dictator.
Goldie(patting his pocket): Kaam nahi karta hai re.
Raghu: Tu yahhan bhi le ke aaya!
Announcer VO: 11.45 Ke local platform number 1 pe a chuka
hai.
They see the light of upcoming train and immediately gets active. Tipu
and Goldie run along the platform and position themselves. As the
train enters, almost empty, they start checking the compartment,
Raghu walks to the front in meanwhile.
Tippu: Aree Raghu bhai ek bhi maal nahi hai! kaisa gujara
karenge!
Raghu(pushing both boys in the front compartment): Ab chadh
toh sahi aage bahut station hai! Dadar hai..aur Har kisi pe
check karenge...ek do mili hi jaayegi. (Music keeps building
on).
CUT TO:
2.INT.OFFICE/NIGHT
CUT TO:
6.INT.SAHANA HOUSE/KITHCEN/DAY
We open with Sahana in home cloth, looking sleepy, making coffee for
herself. Her brother Summit(32) walks in.
Summit: Arre tu susural se kab aayi? (Sahana does not reply.
However summit wife chitra rushes inside, sensing trouble).
Kya karu? Lagta hai behen sausural mein hai!!
Sahana: Mujhe bhi lagta hai wohi... taane toh sasural jaisa hi
milte hai. Woh bhi mehnat se kaam karne ke liye.
Summit: Kaam hum bhi karte hai, aur roz 7 baje ghar bhi aa
jate hai. Kam khatam karna bhi sikhana chahiye.
Sahana: It is easy to say when you have your own medical
shop. Waise bhi, maine keh rakha tha ki ye ek mahina late
hoga...
Sumit: Haan, aur usse promotion milega. Toh uske liye
gharwale tension mein wait karein... ke ladki ek baje ghar laut
rahi hai.
Father VO: Sumit... phir se shuru kar diya?
We reveal Chitra has enterd with an elderly man, Father (60)
Father (Cont'd): As long as mayank is dropping her home what
is the problem? Yeh toh luck hai ki Abinash ji ka beta uski team
mein kaam karta hai.
Summit: Mujhe uss fuddu pe bharosa nahi hai. Agar kuch ho
gaya toh wo kya bachayega? Kuch ho jaaye toh baad mein
samjhoge.
Sahana(Embarras): Bhaiya, bahut ho gaya. Ab Mayank bhaiya
ke baare kuch mat bolo. He has done a lot for me(she storms
off)
CUT TO:
8.EXT.ROAD/NIGHT
They arrive and Sahana is surprised. A cab is waiting for them
Mayan: Station jaane ke liye...phone se book kar liya.
Sahana smiles and says - Hmmm...
Mayank: chal jaldi majak baad mein.
CUT TO:
9.INT.RUNNING TRAIN /NIGHT
Mayank and Sahana both seated in the train. The compartment is
empty. But for them The train is just leaving the Dadar station...we see
it from the window.
Mayank: Chal bacha liya tera paisa.(Sahana smiles) achcha
paise se yaad aaya aaj conversion rate dekha kya?
Mayank start showing something on his phone. Just then, the train door
rattles. We see some late passing by...three pairs of feet... and they
settle down diagonally opposite Mayank and Sahana. We reveal the
three goons. They start ogling at sahana, who is looking into phone.
Tipu: Bhaiya maanana padega aapke aankh ko. Aap sahi the.
Raghu smiles and holds up his phone. A photo there, which he took
previous day. Sahana running to catch the train!
Goldie whispers at Tipu. They start counting-1-2-3...just then Sahana
removes her falling hair from face. They stop counting and laugh and
high five.
Sahana gets little conscious. Raghu calls out-chal pe tum logon ke
dance baar jaane ka paisa bachcha liya (Mayank looks up) item
bhi yahan aur train thoda speed le le toh jhatka matka dekhne
ko milega.
Mayank looks angry, glares at them. Sahana is uneasy. Holds his hand
and resists.
Raghu: Arre sher aa rahe the ladne, hiran ne rok liya.
Goldie: ye Rita hai kya? pehle react nahi karti thi per 1 hafte
baad kya smile de ke gayi thi wo.
Tipu(cutting him): Nahi be ye archana hai samajh nahi rahi hai
esko baad mein baaju mein bitha ke samajhana padega.
Mayank (gets furious, whispers) this is too much.
Sahana: Bhaiya nahi.. agle sation pe utar jaayenge hum. Waise
bhi, wahan se taxi le kar asaan padega.
TIME LAPSE
The train starts approaching station. Mayank and sahana start walking
for the door. Next moment, boys gestures at each other. Two block one
door, the third one the other door. They look at them and grin.
Mayank and Sahana are clueless. Then Mayank approaches them
angrily. Build up... But then, the three boys jump out of the train, at the
platform.
Raghu (Calling out): Kisi aur raat milenge.
Mayank screams in anger, throwing his hand.
Mayank: Mujhe roka kyun? Saale ladkiyon ko chedega.(pulling
Sahana hand) chal neeche dekhte hai kahan jaate hai phir
CRPF ko...police bhi nahi rahti hai station mein!!
Sahana(shaking head): Mujhe bas ghar pahuchna hai. Jaldi.
We charge on her disturbed face.
CUT TO:
10.EXT. ROAD/ NIGHT
Mayank and Sahana are walking down. Mayank pacifies sahana.
Mayank: Tu itna darr kyun rahi hai? They are scared rats.
Dekha nahi kaise bhaag gaye. Such perverts are all over. Kuch
nahi kar sakte hai.
Sahana(shaking head): per main ye sab jhamela avoid kar sakti
hun. Waise hi late night ko lekar bhaiya peeche pade hai.
Aapke pass boss ka number hai kya?
CUT TO:
11.INT. SAHANA HOUSE KITCHEN/ NEXT MORNING
Summit arrive rubbing his eyes, calls out- Chotti mer liye double
ande ka omelette banana.
Chitra comes in and says- Mein karti hun sahana nikal gayi.
Summit: Itni jaldi?
CUT TO:
12.INT. HOUSE/ EVENING
We open with Summit and father talking in low voice. Sahana enters
and frowns.
Father: Itni jaldi?(sahana Shrugs) bhaiya ki baat sunane lagi
hai!
Summit: Meri baat ab sun. Yaad hai parso kya hai?(sahana
surprised) chitra birthday. We need to do something for her.
The brother explains in low voice- that they will throw a surprise party
tomorrow night. She has to help with shopping. Sahana goes to speak
but father says- now don't throw work excuse. It is for chitra!
13.INT.OFFICE /EVENING
Sahana enters tired and stops. The office is empty. Next moment
mayank comes ahead.
Mayank: Arre kahan gayi thi?
Sahana: Mat poocho bhaiya...bhabhi ka surprise party hai toh
saara saaman khareed ke ghar bhejwa diya.
Mayank: Aur tu?
Sahana: Mujhe repot khatam karna hai.
Mayank: Toh mein bhi ruk jaata hun.(Assuring) arre priya ke
saath baat kar lunga. She complains that i don't have time. Tu
pahataphat kar. 12 baje ka train yaad hai na?
INT.TRAIN COMPARTMENT/NIGHT/RECREATION
Mayank jokes with sahana, suddenly stops. Sahana turn to see the
three men has gotten into the train. The train starts right then.
This time they sit right opposite Sahana and Mayank.
Tipu: Uppar wala jab bhi deta....5 Din se esi time down train
pakad raha hun, aur aaj dekho ekdam first train mein. Beech
mein kahi rukne ka jhanjhat nahi.
Mayank looks at panicked sahana and steps ahead angrily.
Mayank: Dikh nahi raha hai main baitha hun uske saath.
Zubaan kaat lunga...
Suddenly goldie jumps to his feet and takes out a big knife.
Goldie: Aur mere pass ye hai. esse kaat lu tere zubaan.
Sahana shrieks meanwhile, Goldie pushes Mayank into the passage at
the knife point. (need Goldie dialogue) Raghu simply puts his foot
ahead and makes a backtracking Mayank trip and fall. They laugh
aloud. Sahana turns to the two passenger sitting afar. They are two
young men of her age, dressed in formal.
Sahana pleads them to come and help. They stand up unsure.
Raghu: Oye apne pairo pe ghar lautna hai ya ambulance pe.
He takes off a chain from around his neck and wraps around his hand.
The man stay in limbo.
Sahana: pls...pls help us.
Camera pans from Mayank on the floor. Two young men indecisive...
CUT BACK
Man VO: Ooo... madam ye last stop hai uttar jao!
Sahana gets up, starts walking out, holding her bag. Then she shivers
remembering something.
CUT BACK/RECREATION
Bandra station approaches. The two boys immediately jumps on to the
station and rushes away. Tipu laugh, mocking them but Raghu is
worried.
He ask Tipu to go watch the door. CRPF should not come here.
Immediately, Sahana starts crying for help, police. Raghu gets furious.
Swear at her and pins her down on the sit. Mayank moves slightly to
CUT BACK
The three of them holding Sahana down, as Raghu is about to get on
top of her. Suddenly Tipu gets alarmed.
Tipu: Andehri station approaching there may be cops.
They rush to the door, we pan to Sahana... clothes dishevelled.
CUT TO:
16. EXT./ INT. BORIVALI STATION/NIGHT
Sahana walks holding her bag. Suddenly, she shivers... starts running
as fast as she can.
She comes out of the station. And a rickshaw stand in front of her.
Sahana jumps... avoids it and keeps running like crazy.
The rain starts as she runs into the darkness.
CUT TO:
ANCHOR LINK 2
The anchor stands in the train, in the lady compartment. She points at
the sticker on the wall.
Anchor: 182- mumbai railway police ke women help line
number,..mumbai ke local train ke, har ladies compartment mein es
number ke baare jaankari diya gaya hai...agar koi bhi mahila yaatriyon
ko pareshan kare toh es number pe call karne se agle station tak police
madad ke liye aa jaayega. Per samasya hai ki sahana ke jaise kai
mahila yaatri ko es baare mein jaankari nahi hai. Aur kai baar pata
hone per bhi sahi wqat pe istemaal nahi karte hai.
Bas help line hi nahi, railway ke har station mein, yahan tak ki ladies
compartment mein police maaujud rehti hai. Kaash unki nazar sahana
pe padti...unhe pata lagta. Kaash sahana khud jaake police mein
compalin kar pa tab tak ye gunde zyada dur nahi gaye hone.
Kyunki en haadshon ko rokne ka ek hi tareeka hai, en kamino ko
pakadna, police sahare enka saamna karna. Kyunki agar ek haadsha
report nahi hota hai toh kai saare auraton ke upper khatra badh jaata
hai.
Mayank: Have you not heard what they were saying. They will
find us out. Wo log bahut khatarnak hai. Kahi se bhi aate hai
kahi se bhi jaate hai..please sahana tera photo bhi unke pass.
Sahana(removing her hand): I don't care. main bhaiya se baat
karungi aur main police main compalin karungi!
Mayank: Bhaiya? you care about your job right.(Sahana stops)
You think your brother will let you work? wo tumhe police mein
compalin karne dega, ghar beetha dega. you dream of your
making career. All finished.
Sahana looks doubtful now as Mayank pleads.
Mayank: Jo hua hai usse bhool jaate hai. Kisi ko jaanane ki
jarurat nahi hai. Monday se train se jaayenge hi nahi. please
bhool ja sab aur normal reh.
Father: Aree bhai jaldi karo tum log!
Mayank: Haan Uncle chaliye.
Mayank leaves. Sahana stand there... leaning against the door.
Summit vo(from outside): Tu aayegi ki nahi? Ruk...kal dikhata
hun. Kal sanivaar hai pura din chitra ka birthday celebrate
karenge. Koi bahana nahi chalega.
Sahana looks afraid at the possibility.
CUT TO:
18.EXT.ROAD/DAY
Chitra VO: Cinema dekhne jaana hai yaar mandir mein nahi
hai...tumhe ye traditional dress ka idea kisne diya?
We reveal Sahana, covered in full salwar kameej, while the rest of the
family is in casuals.
CUT TO:
19.EXT.ROAD/AFTERNOON
The family walks eating ice cream.
Father: Lunch jitna bhi achcha restauant mein kyun na ho,
Icecream raaste ka hi maja aata hai.
Sahana goes to comment, but then turn sharply. She has spotted of
pair of bright green crocs, the same as Tipu wore.
She immediately trying to see the men face...build up. Then the men
turns...it is someone else. sahana takes a deep breath, now looks
determined.
Chitra(from behind): kya dekh rahe ho(sahana shakes head)
koi bahut handsome ladka dikha kya?(smiles)
Sahana(laugh): Bhabhi!!!
CUT TO:
20.EXT/INT/APARTMENT/NIGHT
The family enter, happy and chattering(need dialogue) next moment,
Chitra picks up something hanging by the door knob- the ID card of
sahana. Chitra excalims- How did it come here?
Sahana is confused.
DISSOLVE TO:
22.INT.OFFICE/ DOOR/ CUBICAL DAY
She swipes her id at the door.
Raghu VO: Phone pe nazar rakhna. 2 ring se zayda bajna nahi
chahiye!
Mayank(from behind): Sahana sorry...please talk to me. Dekho
jo hona tha wo toh ho gaya ab toh sab kuch thik ho gaya na.
At this, Sahana almost runs inside the office....meets Her boss midway.
The middle age man starts giving her instruction.(need dialogue)
suddenly some random phone rings, and without wasting a second
sahana picks up her call. But it is not her phone ringing.
Sahana(in fear): Hello...hello!!!
Boss(surprised): Arre kya hello...shinde ka phone baj raha hai
tumhara nahi. go now.
Sahana starts coming back, when her phone finally rings. An unknown
landline number.
Raghu Vo: 2 large pizza ek veg ek nonveg.
Sahana: kya?
Raghu: Arre order kar jaldi. Bhook lagi hai aur tere office ke
baaju mein paan ke dukaan mein delivery karne ke liye bol,
Tipu pick up kar lega.(laugh) kya ghar ka address du kya taki
tu police ko lekar aaye. Aur sun kya boring dress pehenti
hai..shop some good dresses today only. kal aise kuch mein
nikalna jo dehne mein maja aaye. List bana.
CUT TO:
23.INT.HOUSE/SAHANA ROOM/NIGHT
Sahana picks out some new cloth for office. One after another. And
with that she cries- the tears of fear and humiliation.
CUT TO:
24.EXT.ROAD/DAY
Sahana walks in a tight, formal dress, holding a big bag. Her phone
rings. She answersRaghu Vo: Ab lag rahi hai tu babay doll. We saw when you left.
Sahana remains static, pulling the bag closer to her. In close up we see
some bruise on her bare arm. She is hiding it from passing public.
Raghu Vo: Bas bata nahi paaya kitni khoobsurat lag rahi hai tu.
Tera jaan pehchan mauhala hai na. We take care of your
izzat...So come and meet us tonight.
Sahana: k...kahan?
Raghu: Train mein aur kahan?
Sahana: Nahi nahi please...
Raghu: Achcha wo choddo tumhare bahiya ke dukaan ke bagal
mein ek pco hai pata hai(beat) yahan se tumhare bhaiya ka
sign board clear dikhta hai.(sahana Is frozen in fear a car horn
behind)... haan haan Tipu...suno Tipu kehta hai ki tum chote
baalon mein achchi lagogi. Wo hota hai na bob cut. Zara maan
lo na bachche ki khawish. Toh aaj raat ko train mein?
The phone goes dead and Sahana looks around blankly. Her pov. A
ladies saloon.
Next moment she turns and starts running.
CUT TO:
25.INT.HOUSE/DAY
Father sits with a news paper as the door bangs open sahana coming
inside.
Father: phir se dress change? Aaj subah se nikal rahi hai aur
change karne ghar aa rahi hai.(sahana Starts collasping and
crying) hua kya hai.
DISSOLVE TO:
26.INT. HOUSE/TIME LAPSE
The room is filled with family member. We see a furious summit, who
punches on the table.
Summit: kahan tha maine us Mayank pe yakeen mat karo.
(father Looks down) agar mujhe mila toh muh tod dunga. saala
Khud ko bhaiya kehta hai aur esse agle train mein chod ke
bhaag gaya.
Chitra([panicked): ye sab choddo...ab kya kare? Kuch paise
dekar...
Summit(angry): pagal ho gayi ho tum. Unko paisa
denge...seedha police mein compalin...
Chitra: Arre unke pass photo hai agar internet pe upload kar
diya toh!!!
Summit: Wo photo se blackmail karega!! Un kamino ko bhi
pata chalna chahiye ki ye 2016 hai. Cyber crime bhi koi cheez
hoti hai. jab cyber crime waale danda peeche lagayenne toh
sab photo banana nikal jaayega...choddo ye sab..chalo poice
station.
Suddenly, crying sahana hugs his brother. Summit put an assuring arm
on her and saysSummit: koi baat nahi chooti...i will break their bone
personally. Tu darr mat.
CUT TO:
27.INT.POLICE STATION/ AFTERNOON
We pan over sketches of three man as we hear of voice of female cop.
Female cop Vo: Dekhiye hamare pass record toh nahi hai. But i
fax it across all the police station.
We establish female cop(45). She looks sympathetic. AS father,
Summit and Sahana sitting in front of her..
Summit: kahi na kahi toh milega?
Female cop: Ham puri koshish kar rahe hai. They used pco. So
no point of tracking. Agar ye pata chale ki kahan se chadhta
hai aur kahan utarta hai toh...
The lady cops jumps out of train and starts shouting- where is Sahana.
Other cops also starts looking sahana. Lady cops try to call. Phone
rings on.
Cop: Dammit!! Those bastard must have palyed some smart
tricks and taken her away.
She gesture at two cop. Who runs to the over bridge. She herself with a
cop.
CUT TO:
EXT.GROUND/NIGHT
We open in dark ground next to the station.
Three goons are trying to rape Sahana. Her mouth is tied with a
kerchief. Raghu hisses- police bulayegi tu trap karke hamme
pakadne ke iye...ye dekh ye hai na...esi se hamara game hone
ke baad tera game khatam karunga.
In semi dark, we see a local gun in his hand. But Sahana does not
react. They pushes her onto the muddy ground.
INSERT
The cops are looking frantically for Sahana.
CUT BACK
The main are upon Sahana then, she quickly picks up a small rock and
hits Raghu on the head with it. As Raghu screams, stepping back, she
quickly snatches her gun. She points the gun upward tries to
shoot...but cannot. It is too tough.
Goldie: Abbe cheen usse gun? Agar goli chala diya toh.
Tipu grabs her from behind, trying to snatch the gun but she can
manage to fire it.
INSERT
Cops see the fire.
Lady cop hear the sound and starts running.
The three goons starts running away now, scared, but she does not let
them go...jumping in front. Holding them. and then torch light fall in
the dark ground from different direction.
TIME LAPSE
The three goons are taken away by the cops. As Sahana is being
escorted by her brother...she is covered in a shawl then she runs away
from her brother to the goons. And slaps Raghu hard on his face. The
lady cop simply nods at her.
ANCHOR LINK 3
Kya mujhe aur kuch batane ki jarurat hai, es sab ke baad bhi? Ji nahi,
seewaye ek cheez ke. Ki sahana ke jagah pe kal ham mein se koi bhi
ho sakta hai. Isliye saavdhan rahiye... satark rahiye...kyunki savdhani
aapki suraksha aapki.