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1.INT.

STATION/ NIGHT
Dark screen.
Announcer VO: 11.45 Ka Borivali local paltform number 1 pe
aayega.
Camera on ground level. Close up of chappal(bright green crocs) clad
feet as it walks in. Next moment, someone spits right on the platform.
Suspense music build.
Tipu VO: Oh madam check karo na mera ticket!
We reveal the almost empty station, three men has walked in, the
eldest, Raghu(26) is chewing paan, in a kurta and jeans. Goldie(24) has
colored hair and a lot of chains around his neck. The third is the
youngest(19), Tipu. He is waving a ticket at a female CRPF. The lady
cops ignores and walks away. Goldie passes through the station metal
dictator.
Goldie(patting his pocket): Kaam nahi karta hai re.
Raghu: Tu yahhan bhi le ke aaya!
Announcer VO: 11.45 Ke local platform number 1 pe a chuka
hai.
They see the light of upcoming train and immediately gets active. Tipu
and Goldie run along the platform and position themselves. As the
train enters, almost empty, they start checking the compartment,
Raghu walks to the front in meanwhile.
Tippu: Aree Raghu bhai ek bhi maal nahi hai! kaisa gujara
karenge!
Raghu(pushing both boys in the front compartment): Ab chadh
toh sahi aage bahut station hai! Dadar hai..aur Har kisi pe
check karenge...ek do mili hi jaayegi. (Music keeps building
on).
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2.INT.OFFICE/NIGHT

Cutting sharply from the previous scene, we open in a semi dark


office...where the last two employee, a man Mayank(30), and a girl
Sahana(24) are rushing out, when Mayank stops.
Mayank: Arre ruk na mera dabba toh canteen mein hi...
He runs back sahana exclaims- Agar aapke dabbe ke wajah se
train miss hua na i will kill you!!
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3.INT.TRAIN/ SAME TIME
A train starts leaving from the station. Tipu and Goldie stand at the
door. Just then an old men comes running, trying to catch the handle.
Goldie: kya hai! dikh nahi raha hai jagah nahi hai.
The old man looks at Goldie and steps back.
Tipu exclaims- Abhi tak ek bhi chidiya nahi mili sukha sukha
jaana padega....
pan to Raghu sitting like a king in empty compartment.
Raghu: Aage Dadar station hai... aage mil jaayega(getting up)
chal ab mujhe dekhne de.
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4.EXT.ROAD/NIGHT
Mayank and Sahana are running down the empty street.
Sahana: Rickshaw dadar station...Mayank bhaiya ek bhi jaane
ke liye taiyaar nahi hai!!
Mayank: Main toh keh raha hun taxi...
Sahana: Mayank bhaiya i don't get paid so much to spend four
hundred every night. It cannot be treat of your all the time.
Shaadi ke liye fit hona padega...
She pulls her ahead to danger.
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5.INT .DADAR STATION/NIGHT


Sahana and Mayank run, only to see the train moving away. By the
time they reach it is gone.
Sahana(exclaims): What luck..gaya train!!

That moment, leaving them we go to the train. Raghu stands, looking


behind, inside, Tipu- ye wala bhi gaya.
Raghu however keeps staring. fiddling with his phone
[Make it ambiguous whether he has them or not]
Anchor link 1
Kismat toh un ladkyion ke kharab hai. Jinhe train mein, bus
mein aise logon ko har roz jhelna padta hai. Har sahar mein,
har mohale mein aise log aapko milenge. jo auraton ko
pareshan karne ke liye ghar se nikalte hai. Aur kai baar inke
ghinnone harkaton ki wajah se ladkyion ka career mushkilon
mein aa jata hai.
Kuch ladkiyan inhi lago ki wajah se office mein late night tak
kaam nahi karna chahati hai. Kai ma- baap apni betiyon ko
kaam per bhejne se darte hai... sham ke 8 bajte hi phone karne
lagte hai.
Matlab ek padhi likhi qualified ladkiyon ki career, uke sapne
gali ke kuch "chidiyan dhoondhne" waale ladko ke uppar
nirbhar hai. Aakhir Ye kab band hoga?

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6.INT.SAHANA HOUSE/KITHCEN/DAY
We open with Sahana in home cloth, looking sleepy, making coffee for
herself. Her brother Summit(32) walks in.
Summit: Arre tu susural se kab aayi? (Sahana does not reply.
However summit wife chitra rushes inside, sensing trouble).
Kya karu? Lagta hai behen sausural mein hai!!

Sahana: Mujhe bhi lagta hai wohi... taane toh sasural jaisa hi
milte hai. Woh bhi mehnat se kaam karne ke liye.
Summit: Kaam hum bhi karte hai, aur roz 7 baje ghar bhi aa
jate hai. Kam khatam karna bhi sikhana chahiye.
Sahana: It is easy to say when you have your own medical
shop. Waise bhi, maine keh rakha tha ki ye ek mahina late
hoga...
Sumit: Haan, aur usse promotion milega. Toh uske liye
gharwale tension mein wait karein... ke ladki ek baje ghar laut
rahi hai.
Father VO: Sumit... phir se shuru kar diya?
We reveal Chitra has enterd with an elderly man, Father (60)
Father (Cont'd): As long as mayank is dropping her home what
is the problem? Yeh toh luck hai ki Abinash ji ka beta uski team
mein kaam karta hai.
Summit: Mujhe uss fuddu pe bharosa nahi hai. Agar kuch ho
gaya toh wo kya bachayega? Kuch ho jaaye toh baad mein
samjhoge.
Sahana(Embarras): Bhaiya, bahut ho gaya. Ab Mayank bhaiya
ke baare kuch mat bolo. He has done a lot for me(she storms
off)

We stay on chitra, painful, father bewildered.


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7.INT OFFICE/ NIGHT
SUPER ONE DAY LATER
Its like the first day all over again. Mayank and Sahana rushing out.
Sahana: Aaj agar aapne dabba bhoola na mayank bhaiya toh
mein priti di se shikayaat karungi!!
Mayank: Aaj dabba nahi... aur bhi kuch yaad hai.

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8.EXT.ROAD/NIGHT
They arrive and Sahana is surprised. A cab is waiting for them
Mayan: Station jaane ke liye...phone se book kar liya.
Sahana smiles and says - Hmmm...
Mayank: chal jaldi majak baad mein.
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9.INT.RUNNING TRAIN /NIGHT
Mayank and Sahana both seated in the train. The compartment is
empty. But for them The train is just leaving the Dadar station...we see
it from the window.
Mayank: Chal bacha liya tera paisa.(Sahana smiles) achcha
paise se yaad aaya aaj conversion rate dekha kya?
Mayank start showing something on his phone. Just then, the train door
rattles. We see some late passing by...three pairs of feet... and they
settle down diagonally opposite Mayank and Sahana. We reveal the
three goons. They start ogling at sahana, who is looking into phone.
Tipu: Bhaiya maanana padega aapke aankh ko. Aap sahi the.
Raghu smiles and holds up his phone. A photo there, which he took
previous day. Sahana running to catch the train!
Goldie whispers at Tipu. They start counting-1-2-3...just then Sahana
removes her falling hair from face. They stop counting and laugh and
high five.
Sahana gets little conscious. Raghu calls out-chal pe tum logon ke
dance baar jaane ka paisa bachcha liya (Mayank looks up) item
bhi yahan aur train thoda speed le le toh jhatka matka dekhne
ko milega.
Mayank looks angry, glares at them. Sahana is uneasy. Holds his hand
and resists.
Raghu: Arre sher aa rahe the ladne, hiran ne rok liya.

Goldie: ye Rita hai kya? pehle react nahi karti thi per 1 hafte
baad kya smile de ke gayi thi wo.
Tipu(cutting him): Nahi be ye archana hai samajh nahi rahi hai
esko baad mein baaju mein bitha ke samajhana padega.
Mayank (gets furious, whispers) this is too much.
Sahana: Bhaiya nahi.. agle sation pe utar jaayenge hum. Waise
bhi, wahan se taxi le kar asaan padega.
TIME LAPSE
The train starts approaching station. Mayank and sahana start walking
for the door. Next moment, boys gestures at each other. Two block one
door, the third one the other door. They look at them and grin.
Mayank and Sahana are clueless. Then Mayank approaches them
angrily. Build up... But then, the three boys jump out of the train, at the
platform.
Raghu (Calling out): Kisi aur raat milenge.
Mayank screams in anger, throwing his hand.
Mayank: Mujhe roka kyun? Saale ladkiyon ko chedega.(pulling
Sahana hand) chal neeche dekhte hai kahan jaate hai phir
CRPF ko...police bhi nahi rahti hai station mein!!
Sahana(shaking head): Mujhe bas ghar pahuchna hai. Jaldi.
We charge on her disturbed face.
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10.EXT. ROAD/ NIGHT
Mayank and Sahana are walking down. Mayank pacifies sahana.
Mayank: Tu itna darr kyun rahi hai? They are scared rats.
Dekha nahi kaise bhaag gaye. Such perverts are all over. Kuch
nahi kar sakte hai.
Sahana(shaking head): per main ye sab jhamela avoid kar sakti
hun. Waise hi late night ko lekar bhaiya peeche pade hai.
Aapke pass boss ka number hai kya?

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11.INT. SAHANA HOUSE KITCHEN/ NEXT MORNING
Summit arrive rubbing his eyes, calls out- Chotti mer liye double
ande ka omelette banana.
Chitra comes in and says- Mein karti hun sahana nikal gayi.
Summit: Itni jaldi?
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12.INT. HOUSE/ EVENING
We open with Summit and father talking in low voice. Sahana enters
and frowns.
Father: Itni jaldi?(sahana Shrugs) bhaiya ki baat sunane lagi
hai!
Summit: Meri baat ab sun. Yaad hai parso kya hai?(sahana
surprised) chitra birthday. We need to do something for her.
The brother explains in low voice- that they will throw a surprise party
tomorrow night. She has to help with shopping. Sahana goes to speak
but father says- now don't throw work excuse. It is for chitra!
13.INT.OFFICE /EVENING
Sahana enters tired and stops. The office is empty. Next moment
mayank comes ahead.
Mayank: Arre kahan gayi thi?
Sahana: Mat poocho bhaiya...bhabhi ka surprise party hai toh
saara saaman khareed ke ghar bhejwa diya.
Mayank: Aur tu?
Sahana: Mujhe repot khatam karna hai.
Mayank: Toh mein bhi ruk jaata hun.(Assuring) arre priya ke
saath baat kar lunga. She complains that i don't have time. Tu
pahataphat kar. 12 baje ka train yaad hai na?

Sahana(stops): Taxi se chalte hai!


Mayank(start laughing): kya tu abhi bhi usdin ko lekar darr
rahi hai kya? Arre wo gaya. Wo log tere inttezaar mein thodi
baithe rahenge. Waise bhi saamne shadi hai mujhe paisa
bachana hai.
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14.INT.DADAR STATION/NIGHT
From far, we see Mayank and Sahana. The train has come.
Mayank: Arre kismat dekh es time pe first train mil gaya.
Faaltu ke station mein nahi rukega.
Sahana: Main ladies compartment mein...
Mayank: pagal hai? ladies ka pura dibba khali hai. Toh mere
rukne ka kya faayda hua.(Two People get inside) ab toh chal
bheed ho gaya.
They get in. Ominous music build.
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15.EXT.BORIVALI STATION/NIGHT
Pan from the station sign board. The same train stands. It is now
empty. Lights are shut. We move inside the same compartment. And
see sahana sitting on the floor! Hugging her bag. She is bruised,
devastated, still. Quick pan through the compartment there is no one.
Not even Mayank.
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INT.TRAIN COMPARTMENT/NIGHT/RECREATION
Mayank jokes with sahana, suddenly stops. Sahana turn to see the
three men has gotten into the train. The train starts right then.
This time they sit right opposite Sahana and Mayank.

Tipu: Uppar wala jab bhi deta....5 Din se esi time down train
pakad raha hun, aur aaj dekho ekdam first train mein. Beech
mein kahi rukne ka jhanjhat nahi.
Mayank looks at panicked sahana and steps ahead angrily.
Mayank: Dikh nahi raha hai main baitha hun uske saath.
Zubaan kaat lunga...
Suddenly goldie jumps to his feet and takes out a big knife.
Goldie: Aur mere pass ye hai. esse kaat lu tere zubaan.
Sahana shrieks meanwhile, Goldie pushes Mayank into the passage at
the knife point. (need Goldie dialogue) Raghu simply puts his foot
ahead and makes a backtracking Mayank trip and fall. They laugh
aloud. Sahana turns to the two passenger sitting afar. They are two
young men of her age, dressed in formal.
Sahana pleads them to come and help. They stand up unsure.
Raghu: Oye apne pairo pe ghar lautna hai ya ambulance pe.
He takes off a chain from around his neck and wraps around his hand.
The man stay in limbo.
Sahana: pls...pls help us.
Camera pans from Mayank on the floor. Two young men indecisive...
CUT BACK
Man VO: Ooo... madam ye last stop hai uttar jao!
Sahana gets up, starts walking out, holding her bag. Then she shivers
remembering something.
CUT BACK/RECREATION
Bandra station approaches. The two boys immediately jumps on to the
station and rushes away. Tipu laugh, mocking them but Raghu is
worried.
He ask Tipu to go watch the door. CRPF should not come here.
Immediately, Sahana starts crying for help, police. Raghu gets furious.
Swear at her and pins her down on the sit. Mayank moves slightly to

protest and Goldie brandishes the knife...Mayank crawls back towards


the door.
Raghu(clasping her mouth): Shauq bahut hai na police bulane
ka? ab dekh...
Sahana resist hard, but just then the train starts moving again, Tipu
comes running excitedly.
Tipu: Bhai mera number!
Raghu(struggling to keep sahana down): Baad mein pehle
insurance policy nikaal.
Next moment, Tipu has held up her camera phone and started clicking
picture. Raghu forcefully turns her face to the camera.
Raghu: Ab agar hamme pata chale ki police ko bualyi, pure
internet mein dhamka maza denge.
Sound of cloth tearing. And clicking picture.
Sahana gasp. Pan to...Goldie holding Mayank at knife point.
Goldie: Aur tu chupchap ghar jaayega aur kisika bhaiya nahi
banega. Ham police ke haath nahi aane wale hai. Per tujhe
dhoondh nikalna hamare baaye haath ka khel hai es sahar
mein. jab bheed bus mein peeche se blade chalega tab
samjhoge.
From behind Sahana starts crying but Mayank stands still, unable to
move.
Mayank looks at sahana...then looks outside, the train is slow as it is
crossing a station. Mayank jumps out.
Sahana's face she cannot believe. That Mayank has abonded her.
Goldie VO: ye sher toh chua nikala.
He also moves to sahana.
INSERT/EXT TRAIN TRACK
The night local moves through darkness. We hear the frighten scream
of a girl. Next moment, overtaken by the sound of train.

CUT BACK
The three of them holding Sahana down, as Raghu is about to get on
top of her. Suddenly Tipu gets alarmed.
Tipu: Andehri station approaching there may be cops.
They rush to the door, we pan to Sahana... clothes dishevelled.
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16. EXT./ INT. BORIVALI STATION/NIGHT
Sahana walks holding her bag. Suddenly, she shivers... starts running
as fast as she can.
She comes out of the station. And a rickshaw stand in front of her.
Sahana jumps... avoids it and keeps running like crazy.
The rain starts as she runs into the darkness.
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ANCHOR LINK 2
The anchor stands in the train, in the lady compartment. She points at
the sticker on the wall.
Anchor: 182- mumbai railway police ke women help line
number,..mumbai ke local train ke, har ladies compartment mein es
number ke baare jaankari diya gaya hai...agar koi bhi mahila yaatriyon
ko pareshan kare toh es number pe call karne se agle station tak police
madad ke liye aa jaayega. Per samasya hai ki sahana ke jaise kai
mahila yaatri ko es baare mein jaankari nahi hai. Aur kai baar pata
hone per bhi sahi wqat pe istemaal nahi karte hai.
Bas help line hi nahi, railway ke har station mein, yahan tak ki ladies
compartment mein police maaujud rehti hai. Kaash unki nazar sahana
pe padti...unhe pata lagta. Kaash sahana khud jaake police mein
compalin kar pa tab tak ye gunde zyada dur nahi gaye hone.
Kyunki en haadshon ko rokne ka ek hi tareeka hai, en kamino ko
pakadna, police sahare enka saamna karna. Kyunki agar ek haadsha
report nahi hota hai toh kai saare auraton ke upper khatra badh jaata
hai.

17. INT. HOUSE/NIGHT


A totally wet Sahana rushes inside and stop. A party into progressChitra surprise party.
Summit(coming ahead): Ab aane ka time hua tujhe? Bas
samaan bhej ke duty khatam? ab jaldi se fresh ho le cake
kaatna hai.
Before she can speak summit pushes her inside the room. Happy
chatters comes from outside. She shivers. Then starts removing her
cloth... spots of bruise mark and stops. She cannot even bare to look at
it! Then, she hears her father outside.
Father VO: Arre aao aao, bade achche waqt pe aaye ho.
Mayank VO(fumbling): Haan wo matlab ek pendrive bhool gaya
sahana ke pass.
Sahana rushes to the door... and sees Mayank standing there. he is
also drenched. He looks frantically at her, almost scanning her, then
rushes to her, almost pulling her inside her room.
Father: Tum logon ka kya itna kaam ...jaldi aa jao cake
kaatenge.
(NOTE: mayank should be genuine and panicked, even though
he is a coward)
Mayank(panicked): Tu...thik toh hai na sahana? Un logon ne
tere saath kya kya... (He goes to hold sahana but sahana jerks
his hand off.)
Sahana: Tum mujhe jabardasti train mein le ke aaye aur mujhe
wahan pe akela chod ke bhaag aaye!
Mayank: Arre darr gaya tha main! There was a knife pointing at
me and they had other weapon. kya karta! i was so worried
then i saw you running home...i am sorry sahana.
Sahana: I will tell papa that how coward you are and priya
didi...everyone
Mayank: No no please...my wedding is next month, they have
done it to you why are you punishing me?
An angry sahana wants to leaves but Mayank stops her by holding her
hand. Keeps pleading in low voice.

Mayank: Have you not heard what they were saying. They will
find us out. Wo log bahut khatarnak hai. Kahi se bhi aate hai
kahi se bhi jaate hai..please sahana tera photo bhi unke pass.
Sahana(removing her hand): I don't care. main bhaiya se baat
karungi aur main police main compalin karungi!
Mayank: Bhaiya? you care about your job right.(Sahana stops)
You think your brother will let you work? wo tumhe police mein
compalin karne dega, ghar beetha dega. you dream of your
making career. All finished.
Sahana looks doubtful now as Mayank pleads.
Mayank: Jo hua hai usse bhool jaate hai. Kisi ko jaanane ki
jarurat nahi hai. Monday se train se jaayenge hi nahi. please
bhool ja sab aur normal reh.
Father: Aree bhai jaldi karo tum log!
Mayank: Haan Uncle chaliye.
Mayank leaves. Sahana stand there... leaning against the door.
Summit vo(from outside): Tu aayegi ki nahi? Ruk...kal dikhata
hun. Kal sanivaar hai pura din chitra ka birthday celebrate
karenge. Koi bahana nahi chalega.
Sahana looks afraid at the possibility.

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18.EXT.ROAD/DAY
Chitra VO: Cinema dekhne jaana hai yaar mandir mein nahi
hai...tumhe ye traditional dress ka idea kisne diya?
We reveal Sahana, covered in full salwar kameej, while the rest of the
family is in casuals.

Summit: Ye leg pulling baad mein karna. 10.55 Ka train nikal


na jaaye!
Sahana(immediately alert): Local? Hum train se? Nahi aap taxi
karo bahi.
Summit: Arre kitna door jana hai.
Sahana(shaking head vigorously): Arre main thak gayi hun
train mein travel karte karte. ham train se nahi jaayenge bas.
Everyone look surprised. Summit sigh

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19.EXT.ROAD/AFTERNOON
The family walks eating ice cream.
Father: Lunch jitna bhi achcha restauant mein kyun na ho,
Icecream raaste ka hi maja aata hai.
Sahana goes to comment, but then turn sharply. She has spotted of
pair of bright green crocs, the same as Tipu wore.
She immediately trying to see the men face...build up. Then the men
turns...it is someone else. sahana takes a deep breath, now looks
determined.
Chitra(from behind): kya dekh rahe ho(sahana shakes head)
koi bahut handsome ladka dikha kya?(smiles)
Sahana(laugh): Bhabhi!!!
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20.EXT/INT/APARTMENT/NIGHT
The family enter, happy and chattering(need dialogue) next moment,
Chitra picks up something hanging by the door knob- the ID card of
sahana. Chitra excalims- How did it come here?
Sahana is confused.

Father: Aur kaise? Bag se ghirayi hogi us baar ke jaise. Ground


mein gaurd ko mila hoga...ham nahi the isliye yahan rakh ke
gaye honge. Chal tere monday ka tension khatam.
They walk inside...sahana just looks back once.
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21. EXT.ROAD/DAY
Sahana rushes out for office, dressed in salwar kameej. As she walks
briskly, again she gets the glimpse of the green crocs. She looks aside,
ignoring...and sees the hand, chain wrapped on it. She freezes.
The three goons stand next to her in bright day light on busy road.
Raghu: kal hi aaye the id return karne ke liye(pointing at id)
Socha mil ke jaaunga. Per...
With that he starts subtly pushing sahana out of the road. She is so
shocked that she does not even resist until they enter a tiny lane...not
crowded.
Raghu(while walking): Tumhara office ka guard kitna buddhu
hai. kahan Id wapas karna hai toh tumhare ghar ka address
bata diya.hamme Laga kitna mehnat karna..
Goldie: Tum toh wo meenakshi jaisi nikali yaar.koi Police ka
jhameela nahi. Maaja aa gaya kya? Ya phir sach mein darr
gaye?
Raghu: Ghar waalon ko bhi nahi bataya(sahana looks shocked)
haan haan hamne nazar kiya! kyun baap ko heart attack aa
jaayega. Aur bhai ke dukaan mein dabaai nahi hai?
He starts laughing, teasing her....showing that he knows everything.
Goldie: Achcha hua. Now we can keep in touch without fear.
Sahana chokes in fear...understanding their purpose. raghu coolly ask
her about mobile number. She stands still.
Raghu (Angry in a moment): De kamini nahi toh tere bhai ke
dukaan ke sign board pe uska number bhi likha hai.
Sahana(shivering): 9...8..

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22.INT.OFFICE/ DOOR/ CUBICAL DAY
She swipes her id at the door.
Raghu VO: Phone pe nazar rakhna. 2 ring se zayda bajna nahi
chahiye!
Mayank(from behind): Sahana sorry...please talk to me. Dekho
jo hona tha wo toh ho gaya ab toh sab kuch thik ho gaya na.
At this, Sahana almost runs inside the office....meets Her boss midway.
The middle age man starts giving her instruction.(need dialogue)
suddenly some random phone rings, and without wasting a second
sahana picks up her call. But it is not her phone ringing.
Sahana(in fear): Hello...hello!!!
Boss(surprised): Arre kya hello...shinde ka phone baj raha hai
tumhara nahi. go now.
Sahana starts coming back, when her phone finally rings. An unknown
landline number.
Raghu Vo: 2 large pizza ek veg ek nonveg.
Sahana: kya?
Raghu: Arre order kar jaldi. Bhook lagi hai aur tere office ke
baaju mein paan ke dukaan mein delivery karne ke liye bol,
Tipu pick up kar lega.(laugh) kya ghar ka address du kya taki
tu police ko lekar aaye. Aur sun kya boring dress pehenti
hai..shop some good dresses today only. kal aise kuch mein
nikalna jo dehne mein maja aaye. List bana.
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23.INT.HOUSE/SAHANA ROOM/NIGHT
Sahana picks out some new cloth for office. One after another. And
with that she cries- the tears of fear and humiliation.
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24.EXT.ROAD/DAY
Sahana walks in a tight, formal dress, holding a big bag. Her phone
rings. She answersRaghu Vo: Ab lag rahi hai tu babay doll. We saw when you left.
Sahana remains static, pulling the bag closer to her. In close up we see
some bruise on her bare arm. She is hiding it from passing public.
Raghu Vo: Bas bata nahi paaya kitni khoobsurat lag rahi hai tu.
Tera jaan pehchan mauhala hai na. We take care of your
izzat...So come and meet us tonight.
Sahana: k...kahan?
Raghu: Train mein aur kahan?
Sahana: Nahi nahi please...
Raghu: Achcha wo choddo tumhare bahiya ke dukaan ke bagal
mein ek pco hai pata hai(beat) yahan se tumhare bhaiya ka
sign board clear dikhta hai.(sahana Is frozen in fear a car horn
behind)... haan haan Tipu...suno Tipu kehta hai ki tum chote
baalon mein achchi lagogi. Wo hota hai na bob cut. Zara maan
lo na bachche ki khawish. Toh aaj raat ko train mein?
The phone goes dead and Sahana looks around blankly. Her pov. A
ladies saloon.
Next moment she turns and starts running.
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25.INT.HOUSE/DAY
Father sits with a news paper as the door bangs open sahana coming
inside.
Father: phir se dress change? Aaj subah se nikal rahi hai aur
change karne ghar aa rahi hai.(sahana Starts collasping and
crying) hua kya hai.
DISSOLVE TO:
26.INT. HOUSE/TIME LAPSE

The room is filled with family member. We see a furious summit, who
punches on the table.
Summit: kahan tha maine us Mayank pe yakeen mat karo.
(father Looks down) agar mujhe mila toh muh tod dunga. saala
Khud ko bhaiya kehta hai aur esse agle train mein chod ke
bhaag gaya.
Chitra([panicked): ye sab choddo...ab kya kare? Kuch paise
dekar...
Summit(angry): pagal ho gayi ho tum. Unko paisa
denge...seedha police mein compalin...
Chitra: Arre unke pass photo hai agar internet pe upload kar
diya toh!!!
Summit: Wo photo se blackmail karega!! Un kamino ko bhi
pata chalna chahiye ki ye 2016 hai. Cyber crime bhi koi cheez
hoti hai. jab cyber crime waale danda peeche lagayenne toh
sab photo banana nikal jaayega...choddo ye sab..chalo poice
station.
Suddenly, crying sahana hugs his brother. Summit put an assuring arm
on her and saysSummit: koi baat nahi chooti...i will break their bone
personally. Tu darr mat.
CUT TO:
27.INT.POLICE STATION/ AFTERNOON
We pan over sketches of three man as we hear of voice of female cop.
Female cop Vo: Dekhiye hamare pass record toh nahi hai. But i
fax it across all the police station.
We establish female cop(45). She looks sympathetic. AS father,
Summit and Sahana sitting in front of her..
Summit: kahi na kahi toh milega?
Female cop: Ham puri koshish kar rahe hai. They used pco. So
no point of tracking. Agar ye pata chale ki kahan se chadhta
hai aur kahan utarta hai toh...

Sahana: Ek baar bandra mein utrethe the...(shivers) aur ek


baar andheri. Aur chadhne ka pata nahi.
Father(angry): Arre toh aap CCTV check kijiye na? kya ye log
aise karte rahenge ?
Female cops(leaning forward): Dekhiye wo toh ham check
karenge hi. Magar agar hamme wo station mil bhi gaya toh kya
gurantte hai ki wo ussi station ke ass-pass rehta hai...ek
tareeka hai...(looking at sahana) tum kar sakti ho!(Everyone
surprised) Agar unka phone aaye toh unhe kahi buulao raat ke
time mein...
Father(agitated): pagal ho gayi hai aap? Using my daughter as
a bait, in Front of those dangerous guys. No way. Agar unhe
pata chal gaya aur unhone kuch ulta seedha kiya toh.....
Female cop: kuch nahi hoga. Ham rahenge na peeche. Unko
unhi ke game mein phashayenge!!
Summit: koi jarurat nahi hai. koi film nahi hai ye. My sister
won't face them again. Aap log hi kuch kijiye.
Female cop(sigh): Aap jo thik samajhe.mobile Pe chip laga diya
hai. hum follow karenge!!
Pan to the family, unsure, frighten.
Female cop: Wo log sahana ke pass aane ka himmat nahi
karega...hamari nazar hai aap logo pe. Wo log himmat nahi karega
sahana ke pass aane ka.
CUT TO:
28.EXT/INT. LOCAL TRAIN/ NIGHT
The train rushes through darkness.
Now the train leaves the station...Mayak stands at the door. Suddenly
three figure climb at the door, blocking him. Mayank is scared looking
at the three goons.
Mayank: Mujhe...mujhe kuch pata nahi sahana ke baare mein.
Raghu: Arre hame pata hai na? Teri behen police station gayi
hai, compalin likhwaane.

Mayank: Maine toh nahi bola...maine toh...


Goldie: pata hai tu toh chua hai. Per ab hum kaise milenge
uske saath, under the watch of police?
Raghu: Ek kaam kar tu hi bula le apni behen ko, milne ke
waaste.(Raghu picks up Mayank phone from his pocket)
Mayank: Nahi nahi. Wo hamari baat nahi sunegi. Hamara
jhagada hua hai.
Raghu: 100% sunegi. Bol ki tu mushibat mein hai. dadar mein
mile.
Raghu only dials and gives him the phone. It rings.
PHONE CUT/ INT. SAHANA HOUSE
Sahana looks at the call, frowns. Puts it on speaker, her brother
watches.
Sahana: Hello?
Mayank: Sahana thoda problem...tu dadar station(looking at
goons, determined) mat aa...bilkul mat aa. Ye gunde yahan pe
hai...mujhe zabardasti...
Sahana: Hello what...kya?
Mayank can not finish, because Raghu lets out her scream and pushes
him out of the train. Music reaches the crescendo. Sahana screamsMayank bhaiya!!
CUT TO:
29.INT.HOUSE/ MORNING
Sahana sits like a stone. She seemed to have cried all night. Her
brother comes.
Summit: They recovered Mayank body in between Mahim and
Matunga. Police has doubled their search. Ye log bach nahi paayega.
But Sahana sits the same way, as if this word does not make any
impact. Her phone rings. A land line number again.

Raghu VO: police ko bata do es sahar mein 10 crore log rehte


hai. un mein se doondh lenge hamme? Per tere pass bhaiya
bhabhi baap toh ek hi piece hai na? Toh kyun risk le rahi hai?
Unke insurance policy bhi khareed le? Aake mil le hum se.
Sahana(beat): Aaj raat ke train mein....Dadar Se(summit goes
to react but Sahana holds his hand to stop him) bas mere
family ko...
Raghu VO: Arre sun aaj raat ko heroine aa rahi hai. Zym bym
karke aaja.
He cuts the call and summit excalims- has she gone mad? She goes to
meet those gundas.
Sahana says she has to. Once and for all.
Summit is surprised as Sahana dials from her phone.
Sahana: Inspector madam...un logo ka phone aaya tha!!
CUT TO:
30.INT.DADAR STATION/NIGHT
Announcer VO: 12.15 Ka slow local platform number 1 per aa
raha hai.
We see Sahana, waiting on the platform, close on her ear, a blue tooth
is attached. She is on phone secretly.
Lady cop VO: Tum befikra train mein chadh jao. Main mere
aadmiyon ke saath usi train mein hun. Bas darna mat. Keep
them till the naxt station.
We see the train coming. Sahana prepares to get on. Just then
someone taps her shoulder. She turns to see Tipu behind, his face half
covered in a shawl.
As the train enters he leads her out of the station. Sahana understand
what is happening and starts resisting but by then she is gripped by
two more hand.
Raghu: Hum se milna the na toh chal.
INSERT/ INT.STATION

The lady cops jumps out of train and starts shouting- where is Sahana.
Other cops also starts looking sahana. Lady cops try to call. Phone
rings on.
Cop: Dammit!! Those bastard must have palyed some smart
tricks and taken her away.
She gesture at two cop. Who runs to the over bridge. She herself with a
cop.
CUT TO:
EXT.GROUND/NIGHT
We open in dark ground next to the station.
Three goons are trying to rape Sahana. Her mouth is tied with a
kerchief. Raghu hisses- police bulayegi tu trap karke hamme
pakadne ke iye...ye dekh ye hai na...esi se hamara game hone
ke baad tera game khatam karunga.
In semi dark, we see a local gun in his hand. But Sahana does not
react. They pushes her onto the muddy ground.
INSERT
The cops are looking frantically for Sahana.
CUT BACK
The main are upon Sahana then, she quickly picks up a small rock and
hits Raghu on the head with it. As Raghu screams, stepping back, she
quickly snatches her gun. She points the gun upward tries to
shoot...but cannot. It is too tough.
Goldie: Abbe cheen usse gun? Agar goli chala diya toh.
Tipu grabs her from behind, trying to snatch the gun but she can
manage to fire it.
INSERT
Cops see the fire.
Lady cop hear the sound and starts running.

The three goons starts running away now, scared, but she does not let
them go...jumping in front. Holding them. and then torch light fall in
the dark ground from different direction.
TIME LAPSE
The three goons are taken away by the cops. As Sahana is being
escorted by her brother...she is covered in a shawl then she runs away
from her brother to the goons. And slaps Raghu hard on his face. The
lady cop simply nods at her.

ANCHOR LINK 3
Kya mujhe aur kuch batane ki jarurat hai, es sab ke baad bhi? Ji nahi,
seewaye ek cheez ke. Ki sahana ke jagah pe kal ham mein se koi bhi
ho sakta hai. Isliye saavdhan rahiye... satark rahiye...kyunki savdhani
aapki suraksha aapki.

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