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This will carry over in equal importance to the kind of feedback I give my students, and
the kind of feedback I encourage my students to give each other. It goes without saying that
feedback ought to be encouraging and respectful, but on a very fundamental level it will be
important to myself to effectively communicate with the student on the terms of the composition.
With comments on papers, I will be sure to not use empty binaries like good or bad, but will
instead leave written feedback that is in line with the kind of language I expect the students to be
using in their own writing: clear, strong language that is not falsely trying to hide personality
behind artifice.
This written feedback, and the kind of conversation I foster in conferences, will not be
anomalous in my relationship with my students. In the classroom, too, I will always be working
towards group discussion and actual communication. These sorts of conversations will of course
oftentimes be bound in the context of the coursegenre, research and compositionbut I hope
to also enable conversation outside of the context of the curriculum, conversations about
humanity and life. These sorts of tangential conversations are not mutually exclusive from
compositionin fact, I believe they are are crucial towards bettering oneself as a composer.
That will be my first major goal as an educator: getting the students to think of
composition as communicationnot as an act of self-expression or an effort merely to receive a
grade. Communication is the purpose of composition. My second major goal will be to
demonstrate to the student that in order for composition to be effective, the composer needs to
have empathy. Whether it is for her subject, topic, or fictional creations, without empathy,
composition will always fall flat. I hope to impart this on students in tandem with the idea of
composition as process by maintaining a standard of respect, inclusivity and openness,
encouraging discussion about what matters both inside the classroom and outside the classroom.