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Programming of asset allocation models containing equity, fixed income and options
Trade capture, verification and fail review in order to minimize Firm exposure
Now I am a first year MBA student at Boston University concentrating on Finance with a focus in
Capital Markets. This program at boston University, which contains a specialized curriculum in Capital
Markets, is allowing me to leverage not only my undergraduate education where I had a dual
concentration in Finance and Accounting but also my prior work experiences. I currently hold Series 7,
63 and 65 securities licenses and I am studying for the CFA level 1 exam.
Most recently I worked for Fidelity Investments where I was the primary liaison on a new Bond trading
software program linking the inventories of over 70 Brokers and Dealers. The project allowed me to
work directly with internal and external Traders, Portfolio Managers and technology teams. Prior to
that I was in Lehman Brothers Analyst Program where I worked on their Institutional Equities trading
desk in a middle office role. Working with both Trading and Sales I ensured proper post-trade
positions, prices and confirmations.
I thrive in a fast paced, results driven environment; I bring a passion for Capital Markets along with a
hands on atention to detail. I am looking to apply my analytical and quantitative skills, along with my
commitment to constant improvement to a Sales and Trading internship where I can immediately
contribute and personally continue to grow professionally.
I appreciate the time you will take to review my rsum, and hope you find, as I do, that I have
excellent skills and background.
Thanks alot!
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Phyllis Steen
Boston, MA 02215 | 617-353-2834
PhylS@bu.edu | LinkedIn.com/in/PhyllisSteen
September 1, 2010
The 2010 American Express online campaign featuring humorous short films of Seinfeld and Superman
changed the way I view the American Express brand. I am very interested in being a part of a brand that
has been so successful in creating new and exciting ways to connect with people. That core value
influences all aspects of my life, from my work in traditional and online media to my improvisational
comedy background. My professional goal is to apply my commitment to service, excellence and creativity
to the American Express brand.
After hearing you describe the challenges and opportunities at AXPi, I believe the environment there
directly aligns with my strengths and experiences. In my most recent position at Google, I took it upon
myself to revise my teams sales approach to more accurately address our consumer packaged goods
customers needs. That strategy was successful enough for me to be invited to consistently collaborate
with clients on new approaches to their online strategies.
While I was regularly challenged in my work, I returned to school to further develop my leadership skills.
In my first semester at Boston University, I was selected by the MBA faculty to represent the first-year class
on the Program Development Committee, a taskforce comprised of faculty and administrators charged with
evaluating and shaping the curriculum. Additionally, I, along with a classmate, developed and presented a
proposal for an online business targeted to the needs of urban American women, aged 22 to 34. A panel
from BUs Entrepreneurial Management Institute recently selected us as the winner of its $1000 Business
Concept Competition, and we are in the process of drafting our initial business plan.
I hope you will take the time to review my resume as I believe it will provide you with additional
information on how I could contribute to AXPis goal of delivering a best in class experience for its online
customers. Thank you in advance for your time.
Sincerely,
Phyllis Steen
Justin Thyme
U.S. Citizen
LinkedIn.com/in/JustinThyme
595 Commonwealth Avenue Boston, MA 02215 617-353-2834 JustinThyme@bu.edu
Brooke Lasky
Global Commercial Banking/Treasury Services
Bank of America
335 Madison Avenue, 5th Floor
New York, NY 10017
October 2, 2009
Dear Ms. Lasky:
Please consider my candidacy for the Global Commercial Banking/Treasury Services MBA Leadership Program
with Bank of America. My conversations with Kathleen Kenslea and Harry Curtis at the information session at
Boston University on September 18th reinforced my interest in the program. I am eager to be part of an
organization that values passion and teamwork as functions of its core business strategy.
The Global Commercial Banking/Treasury Services MBA Leadership Program will serve as an excellent
opportunity to leverage my existing strengths to support Bank of Americas global business growth initiatives.
My professional experience in brand strategy consulting and the arts and entertainment industry has equipped
me with the unique ability to be process-driven and strategic, yet flexible and innovative. These experiences
have also allowed me to establish a record of achievement through multiple leadership roles in marketing,
business development and project management.
My creativity, entrepreneurial spirit and proven ability to flourish in dynamic, fast-paced environments are
consistent with the qualities of leadership that can contribute to Bank of Americas future success. I would very
much like the opportunity to discuss how the depth and dimension of my credentials can benefit the strategic
goals of your company. Please feel free to contact me for any additional information or for an interview at
617-353-2834. Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Justin Thyme
LinkedIn.com/in/RolandRock
United States Citizen
RRock@gmail.com
December 1, 2010
Ms. Ani Greville
Program Officer, Executive Office
Global Business Coalition to fight HIV/AIDS
1230 Avenue of the Americas, 4th Floor
New York, NY 10020
Dear Ms. Greville:
This letter is to express my interest in the Director, Geneva Office position at Global Business Coalition on
HIV/AIDS. I feel I am well qualified for this position because of my successful work in African development,
and belief in the power of business for a sustainable solution to the HIV/AIDS crisis.
In a recent Net Impact Case Competition, my teams presentation, titled AIDS in Africa: Can big Pharma
win?, argued for an approach that necessarily included business in the fight against HIV/AIDS. My passion
to fight against this scourge stems from first hand experience as a Peace Corps Volunteer in Niger and as
Administrative Officer for Africare/Niger.
As professional strongly committed to using the power of business to fight HIV/AIDS, I can contribute my
skills and experience as the Director of the Geneva office.
YOUR NEEDS
MY QUALIFICATIONS
Sincerely,
Roland Rock
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sure the cover letter header and rsum header are identical, providing you
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MARK ETTING
Boston, MA 02215
888.555.1212 MarkEtting@gmail.com
LinkedIn.com/in/MarkEtting
April 23rd, 2010
Art Fuldodd, Jr.
Medical Devices R Us
100 Main Street
Framingham, MA 00000
Dear Mr. Fuldodd,
I am writing to express my interest in the Product Manager position in the Framingham office of
Medical Devices R Us.
I am an ardent Marketing professional with a proven track record of delivering revenue-generating
results in a variety of corporate settings. I will significantly contribute to the benefit of your operation by
providing innovative approaches to problem targeting, and cost effective solutions. I offer the following
relevant qualifications for your current needs:
YOUR KEY NEEDS
Bachelors Degree required; Masters
preferred.
MY QUALIFICATIONS
BS Mechanical Engineering; MBA candidate
Boston University (2010)
Continuing is my rsum which further details my qualifications for the Product Manager position. I
look forward to speaking with you soon to learn more about this role and the opportunity to further
impact Medical Devices R Uss performance.
Sincerely,
Mark Etting
Anne Tena
LinkedIn.com/in/AnneTena
595 Commonwealth Avenue Boston, MA 02215 617-353-2834 Atena@bu.edu
Anne Tena
Anne Tena
JUAN ANATU
My value proposition embraces all key metrics including significant sales, profit and market share growth,
increased consumer awareness, and enhanced brand value for the key product lines and brands involved.
Continuing is my rsum which further details the merit of my efforts. I will follow-up with you shortly and look
forward to speaking with you to discuss how we may develop a collaborative association.
Sincerely,
Juan Anatu
Juan Anatu