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Or doing exactly the thing you were told not to do, even though you know it will
result in your death or the death of a lesser important member of the book.
I understand why this happens. Sometimes a writer wants to have a scene unfold
a certain way and the only way to do it is to have a character act against their
own best interests. People do dumb things sometimes, I get it.
If this ever happens to you, I beg you to reconsider.
Too stupid to live characters lose reader faith as quickly as they lose their survival
instincts. It's hard to root for or even like a character who repeatedly makes
dumb choices, especially when they cry "how could this have happened?" after
disaster strikes (again and again and again). If they make too many of these in a
row, readers are likely to start rooting for the bad guys (if they bother to keep
reading at all).
(Here are some good ways your characters can make bad choices)
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But never fear, there is hope for these poor characters. They can learn those
all-important survival skills and become characters worth rooting for instead of
against.
Just take away the stupid.
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Sounds obvious, right? But anyone who's ever needed a scene to go one way, and
the only way to do that is to make your protagonist a little dumb, knows it's not
as easy as it seems. Sometimes there is no easy way to get your character to
behave how you need them to and fixing it requires some heavy rewrites or
re-plotting.
(Here's more on writing yourself into a corner)
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Heather Button Apr 9, 2014, 10:11:00 AM
I love this. I think with the "following the trail of blood" thing most writers rely on
natural human curiosity, which is true to an extent. And people who don't follow
through make boring stories in that case. But I love your tips about having a
reason to follow through, especially on telling the person who can hurt you that
you'll tell the press.
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There's a fine line between curiosity and TSTL, and that'll certainly
depend on the character and the situation. Characters *can* be stupid
(and often are) when it fits the story.
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But YES, if someone's doing something stupid, make sure it's well built in the
character and situation, not just something needed for the sake of plot.
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http://blog.janicehardy.com/2014/04/are-your-characters-too-stupid-to-live.html
pat Apr 9, 2014, 1:15:00 PM
Wow, is this ever a familiar problem! I've done it over and over but there comes
a point where the character will just balk, refusing to do anything I want done.
Then I realize I've written someone who is too stupid to do what I want
accomplished, and I have to go back and put some brains in.
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Janice Hardy
That's a great example of someone who isn't TSTL, just foolish in some
ways due to their circumstance. If you never learned that impulsive
behavior can cause problems, then it makes sense to dive in.
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Aw, thanks! This one was all my friend Alex. I had dinner with her the
other night and we were talking about TV and tropes and this one came
up. I thought it would make a good addition to the site :)
But usually topic ideas come from things I notice when I'm writing,
questions people ask me, things I see in the RLDs, or random things
that inspire me.
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I've seen a few shows, very popular ones, where I've glared at the TV and
thought, "Really. Really? Did you seriously just do that when you could have done
10 other things" about some character actions/reactions. I've had the same
reactions to some things I've read in books. I will have to review my works in
progress to make sure I don't have any characters doing really dumb things
unless it's like that last example, as in a last resort.
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dumb. He's not ashamed of his intelligence. He just doesn't use it as a means to
feed his ego, but has a tendency to lack healthy confidence in his abilities.
My antagonist is a rough and tumble type, not afraid to be aggressive or bust
chops, but is capable of warmth and emotional nuance, their rocky relationship
works because they're different enough to be their own character, but similar
enough to be open to learning from each other, both directly and indirectly.
I certainly hope that's what some readers will take away when GABRIEL comes
out. I know you helped me get the first chapter to the level that my editor is
helping further streamline and flesh out. Thanks again, Janice.
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Janice Hardy
Characters can be stupid from time to time, and do absurd things when
the story calls for it. It's just helpful to be aware of that line that keeps
them from being believable vs TSTL.
Glad your revisions are going well with your editor!
Janice Hardy
Yeppers.
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Some days so do I. I can forgive them the blood trail thing though in
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most cases, since that's kinda their job (grin). But yeah, after
everything they've seen and know, you'd think they'd be a little smarter
about certain situations and trusting certain demons.
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You'd have to consider what you want from the story. If part of her arc
is to learn to think before she acts, then showing her being TSTL at first
might work well. But if you have another character that might make a
better hero, you could think about giving her a secondary role.
Think about what you want from the story and the character as a whole.
Yes, it's a trope, but that doesn't mean you can't make it work if that's
what you want to do. :)
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Janice Hardy
Never hurts to take a second look :) Characters CAN have reasons to act
like idiots, so if it works for your story, go with it.
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I have a crit partner who's very good at spotting these, so I'm pretty
lucky. But yep, I'm with you, whenever someone mentions a credibility
issue, I fix it.
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