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Bi mu band 8.

0++ cho thng 7/2015


Topic:
Some people say taxes should be spent on healthcare, others
think more priorities should be invested in. Dicuss both sides and
give your opinion.
Bi mu band 8.0
Many people suggest governments should allocate their financial
budget from taxes to healthcare services while others believe some other
important fields should be more well-funded. In my opinion, every aspect
of a society shares an equal role in the general prosperity of its economy
and needs to be financed properly.
On the one hand, healthcare is of significant essence for the well-being of
people in a country as a whole. In fact, greater influx ofgovernments'
funding in improving the medical utilities would ensure the safety of the
citizens of that country in the event of traffic accidents or natural
calamities. Furthermore, the threat from fatal contagions, Ebola for
example, puts huge strain on the medical systems. An enormous amount
of national resources, therefore, is required for research as well as
experiments facilities establishment to find curative medicines for those
diseases.
On the other hand, other sectors such as education and technology are
also factored in boosting the economy nationwide. Firstly, education is the
key to secure a better future generation. With more state money for
classroom modernization and teacher training, public school and
institutions can provide practical knowledge to young people who will
contribute back to the affluence of their country. Secondly, governments
should focus their investments on technological innovation as well. It is
apparent that modern technology is indispensable in the industrialized
world since human labor is incomparable with that of machinery in term of
efficiency. Thus, an emphasis should be placed on this area to benefit the
overall growth of the economy.
In conclusion, I would argue that not only healthcare but also other
determinants like education and technology should simultaneously receive
the same governmental sponsorships.
Essay analysis
iu quan trng y bn phi bit c taxes (thu) chnh l tin ca
chnh ph, nh vy bi ny c th c vit li nh sau: "Some people
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say governments should spend their money from taxes on healthcare,


others
think
more
priorities
should
be
invested
in"
Mt s cm t hu dng lin quan n ch c nhc n trong
bi vit:
- Financial budget: ngn kh ti chnh
- Governments' funding: Ti tr vn t chnh ph
- National resources: ti nguyn quc gia
- State money: Tin t chnh ph
- Governmental sponsorships: Cc ngun ti tr chnh ph

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