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SCENE ONE

EXT. FOREST. NIGHT.


A motorcyclist dressed in all black drives through the
forest with an axe strapped around his back. The man
continues driving deep into the forest.
He pulls up outside a small, forgotten cabin in the middle
of the forest. The place is isolated and the sound of the
wind and hum of the motorbike is all that can be heard.
The man gets off of his bike and begins to approach the door
of the hut. (The door is rotting)
The man pushes the door open.
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SCENE TWO

INT. CABIN. NIGHT.


The interior of the cabin is poorly lit with the only
furniture inside being a wooden chair in the corner and a
wooden table to the side. The table is covered in newspapers
and scraps of paper.
A shot of the corner of the cabin reveals a girl, Elizabeth
Baker, only child of an upper class family, in the corner.
She is dirty and tied up, hugging the corner of the room in
fear of the man.
CUT TO
A newspaper article that reads Serial Killer Strikes Again
CUT BACK TO
The man turns his back on the girl and approaches the table,
axe in hand. We are shown the man from behind and it is
apparent to the audience that he is sharpening his axe.
CUT TO
A newspaper article that reads ...is said to enjoy playing
a game of cat and mouse with his victims before...
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth is shown in the corner panicking, she is crawling
further into the corner of the room, cowering from the man.
The man approaches the girl and she continues to struggle as
he grabs her tightly around her ankles.

2.

The man drags the girl through the cabin. She is making
muffled screaming noises in her state of panic.
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SCENE THREE

EXT. FOREST. NIGHT.


WHIP PAN
The distance from the cabin to the road is shown. The
distance is quite a fair way, but reaching the road in a
about five minutes can be achieved if ran.
CUT TO
A newspaper article that reads Elizabeth Baker, daughter of
wealthy bankers Maude and Albert Baker, has been reported
missing...
CUT BACK TO
CLOSE UP
The mans mouth is seen, but the rest of his features are a
blur.
MAN
We are going to play a game Lizzy.
Do you like games? Silly me, you
cans speak. Of course you like
games, what little girl doesnt?
Elizabeth begins to silently cry in desperation.
MAN
No, no Lizzy. This is a fun game.
The man picks the girl up to her feet and holds her by her
shoulder. He turns her so that she is looking in the
direction of the road.
MAN
You have a thirty second head
start, okay?
The man grabs Elizabeths head and moves it up and down,
gesturing her agreement.
MAN
The game is simple. You have to run
in that direction, if you reach the
road then you win, and you can go
home, if thats what you want. But.
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED:

3.

MAN (contd)
If I manage to catch you. Well.
Ill leave it as a surprise.
The man removes the tape from Elizabeths mouth.
ELIZABETH
Screams
The man clasps her mouth shut with his hand.
MAN
Well Lizzy, that was incredibly
stupid. We didnt agree any rule
about that. You cheated so its
only fair you receive a penalty.
The man cuts Elizabeths tongue from her mouth and she falls
to the floor.
The man unties her feet whilst she is still on the floor,
leaving her hands tied up.
The man turns around dramatically and Elizabeth clambers to
her feet and begins running.
MAN
One
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads A young girl has been found
dead...
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Two
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Patricia Hiddleton has been the
second young girl found dead in...
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Three

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED:

4.

CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Could this be the works of a
serial killer?
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Four
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads ...police concern is growing as
they find another body...
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Five
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Arabella Johnstone found dead
in...
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Six
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads ...police warn for young girls to
remain wary at all times as another body is found...
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Seven
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads ...claimed to be the most
gruesome body found yet...

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED:

5.

CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Eight
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads officials identify girls body
with help from news.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Nine
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Slain woman identified.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Ten
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Corruption clue to axe murder.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Eleven
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Police and villagers in all night
search for missing girl: BODY FOUND IN THE WOODS.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Twelve

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED:

6.
CUT TO

A newspaper article reads Missing teenage girl is sought.


CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Thirteen
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads British girls mystery death
shocks peiping.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Fourteen
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Murdered in home.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Fifteen
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Identify body found in woods.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Sixteen
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads ...locals are furious at the
polices failed attempts to identify...
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED:

7.

MAN
Seventeen
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Anguish drives mums quest for
daughters killer...I will not let this go.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Eighteen
CUT TO
A newspaper article readsNo Killer Doing Time.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Nineteen
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Dead at 15.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Twenty
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Monstrous deed.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Twenty One
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Body found in woods.
CUT BACK TO
(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED:

8.

Elizabeth running.
MAN
Twenty Two
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads murder charges against two men
dropped.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Twenty Three
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads body in barrel identified.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Twenty Four
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Mother seeks revenge.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Twenty Five
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Pair of special police dogs turn
up no murder clues.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Twenty Six
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads Missing.
(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED:

9.
CUT BACK TO

Elizabeth running.
MAN
Twenty Seven
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads ...the polices efforts are
increasingly strong as another body is found...
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Twenty Eight
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads murder hunt missing link.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Twenty Nine
CUT TO
A newspaper article reads ...serial killer still at
large...claims another life...
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
MAN
Thirty
CUT TO
A newspaper article that reads ...Elizabeth
Baker...missing...any information would be helpful...serial
killer.
CUT BACK TO
Elizabeth running.
The man turns around and slowly begins to move forward.

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED:

10.

MAN
Ready or not, here I come.
The man begins to run in the same direction as Elizabeth:
the chase has begun. The man grows closer and closer to
Elizabeth, she is not far from the road.
CLOSE UP
Elizabeth looks directly into the camera before being pulled
to the floor.
The man hits Elizabeth several times with the axe until he
is sure she is dead. He then sits back and sighs heavily.
CUT TO
TITLE - THIRTY SECONDS
CUT TO
A flash shot of Elizabeth Bakers dead body positioned on a
chair is shown.
The flash blurs the camera so that the screen goes white and
when the picture returns it is day time.

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