Peer Reviewer: Tunjns Ys?
Author of Essay:
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Prooftead/revise while commenting on:
Sentence structure (Aze all sentences written in active tense? Are all sentences
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Structure of paragraphs (topic sentence, support, conclusion sentence, etc.)
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‘Thesis (Does the thesis adhere to the paper topic? Is the thesis interesting? Is it
‘vague snd confusing? Is tthe constant focus throughout the writer's piece?)
Logic behind ideas (Do all ideas adhere to paper topic? Is a flow woven
throughout the order of their presentation? Are quotations from essay included?
‘Are ideas concrete examples from the essay or inferences from the writer?)
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Grammer and diction (Punctuation coherent? Are verb tenses appropriate? Is the
language ofthe essay tight and succinct? Is your pieces tone deliberate
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‘Transitions (Are transitions evident in paragraph and essay development?)
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‘Vagueness (Can any substandard language and needless self-references be
climinated {ie. “that”, “more”, “according to my opinion”, “I believe”, etc.]? Are
all pronouns clear references to @ near-by antecedent?)
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