Mi, Yuchao

33B
LDP 5
12 DEC 2016
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Boycott
To Change the Oscar, We Must Change Hollywood
Par6
Actors and directors like Will Smith and Jada
Pinkett-Smith and Lee were absolutely right to
boycott the Academy Awards.
Boycott means to refuse something.
It means take part in Hollywood as a way of
protesting.
Verb
He called for a boycott of election.
Plagues
Project 3 par5
It is plagues the America society especially the
Hollywood industry
It means a very infectious disease that usually
results in death.
In this text means unpleasant things continually
trouble you a lot.
Verb( intransitive)
He has been plagues me with silly questions
Fossillized
To Change the Oscar, We Must Change Hollywood
Par8
Its about challenging and changing the fossilized
culture of Hollywood, once and for all

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If the remains of an animal or plat are fossil, they

become hard and form fossil instead of decaying
completely.
It means criticizing the fact that are fixed and
unlikely to change
Adjective
This country has too much fossilized policies, it
must be change soon.
and Explanation of Solution/Correction/Str
the Problem
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1,Because
the
differences in each
states and their
tradition,
blacks
and women did not
have the right to
vote
at
the
beginning of the
nation found. (Draft
of Project 3)

The word Because

if put the beginning
of a sentence, then
it must be phrase
as
because
of
something
or
somebody.
Tradition here not
single, it must be
plural. (G-P. 286290)

According to Guidelines and

the video, I made Over
organization and Sentence
Fragments errors here. I need
put a of after because, and
put a s after tradition. The
black should give a capital to
b.
(G-P. 286-290, verb form
Video).
Because of the differences in
each
states
and
their
traditions, Blacks and women
did not have the right to vote
at the beginning of the nation
found.

2.Since then, racial

discrimination
became a sensitive
issue but never
disappear (Draft of
Project 3)

I cant only put a

became in this
sentence since it
still
happen
in
current time. Before
but
there
lost
some word, or the
but here is make
no sense.

By Guidelines, I know this is a

mistake of run-on sentence
and sentence fragment, I
should
put
has
before
became, and change but
to and(G-P 297)
Since
then,
racial
discrimination has became a
sensitive issue and never

disappear