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WP1 submission:
An observation or
question I received
from DePiero or a
classmate:
The change(s) I
made to what I
initially wrote:
3. Genre is often
times defined as a
division or separate
class or even things
that are regarded as
having particular
Flow/organization
concern: Im having
trouble understanding
how this sentence (in
which you introduce
genre) builds off/onto
It was useless
information taking up
space
Nothing I changed
several sentences
leading up to this
Helped my paper
flow better and
wasnt out of the
blue
shared
characteristics.
4. In navigating
genre by Kerry Dirk
she mentions genre
is used primarily to
form, which meant
that writing in a
particular genre was
seen as filling in the
blanks.
5. Nursing reports
are written reports
that transfer
information from one
nurse to the other
nursing staff on a
daily basis.
6. A media outlet is
a publication or
broadcast that
distributes news.
the previous
sentence/paragraph,
which was about
Alzheimer's. As I read
this, it's coming totally
out of the blue. How
could you try to improve
that??
I like your use of course
reading here, Troy. Nice
job. Make sure you add
in that page # so I know
where the direct quote
is coming from.
"in the blanks" (205).
(Or whatever page # it
came from.
This sentence/idea is
coming up a bit out of
the blue for me, Troy.
Why are you talking
about nursing reports all
of a sudden?
*I, personally*, know
why because I'm
familiar with the
assignment, but you
need to make that
super-clear. Before you
start telling me about
nursing reports, could
you take a
second/sentence to tell
me... *why* you're going
to be telling me about
nursing reports? If
you're going to be
analyzng them as a
genre, find a way of
telling me that. (And
also think about *where
in the paper* it would be
best to introduce that.)
I feel a bit lost here,
Troy. You were just
starting to tell me about
nursing reports, and
then you told me that
"audience,
In navigating genre
by Kerry Dirk she
mentions genre is
used primarily to
form, which meant
that writing in a
particular genre was
seen as filling in the
blanks (251).
7. Alzheimer's
association
8. Scanning is not
reading a form of
literature word for
word but simply
looking for keywords
and points and then
reading the detail
and elaboration on it.
In a nursing report
for example if the
information was
given and a
breakdown was listed
on what happens
with the Alzheimer's
disease and the
common behaviors a
patient might
display, a nurse on
duty would simply
scan the care plan
and look for
highlighted behaviors
and what to do if the
patient displays
these behaviors.
purpose,context and
tone" are important
rhetorical features.
Now, though, we're
talking about media
outlets. How come?
(You need to find a way
to tell me how/why
you're bringing this up -how/why it relates back
to your argument.)
specific genre
consisting of a lot of
writing.
Alzheimer's
Association
It gave the
organization more
creditability
Scanning is not
reading a form of
literature word for
word but simply
looking for keywords
and points and then
reading the detail
and elaboration on it.
I brought up
scanning because in
a nursing report for
example if the
information was
given and a
breakdown was listed
on what happens
with the Alzheimer's
disease and the
common behaviors a
patient might
display, a nurse on
duty would simply
scan the care plan
and look for
highlighted behaviors
and what to do if the
patient displays
these behaviors.
I stated why I
mentioned scanning
for my readers to
better understanding
my reasoning