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26 August 2016
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Seven Sins of Education:
In Seven Sins of Education, Peter Gray explores the issues of the current educational system
and exploits them. Although I can agree with some aspects of his argument, I holistically have to
disagree have with it. Gray consistently bases his argument off of exaggerations. For instance,
Gray states that school emphasizes incessant testing, grading and ranking. Many people can
find fault in this system; however, there is a reason that a system like this is in play. Although I
do agree that students are not defined by a grade or a number, this system is what makes good
students the people they are. The reason for testing is that students can have their opportunity
to show their mastery of the subject. This is comparable to a sports situation, as athletes use big
games to show off their mastery to the masses, yet nobody complains about this. Additionally,
Gray makes skewed links to other subjects, such as fear. He makes this relation through stating
that learning is best in a playful state. Although this can be positive, in higher levels of
education such as college, learning follows a normal procedure and is not necessarily playful.
Since this is the education that actually matters the most in ones life, it clearly seems to be
working.
Comments: Student
Concerns
(Evidence criteria/standards (Improve or
met)
Remediate)
1-2
I needed to analyze the text
more closely and actually
quote details from the
passages to better my
analysis.
I managed to find my
central argument and base
it off the argument of the
author from each of the
texts.
Criteria
(Proficient)
CCSS standard &
Description of mastery
Advanced
Exceeded
Standard
3-4
Standard/Criteria 1
RL8:Delineate and
evaluate the argument
and specific claims in a
text, including the validity
of the reasoning as well
Comments: Teacher
A student who earns a 4 goes beyond what was taught. A student who earns a 3 demonstrates a strong knowledge
of what is explicitly taught. A student who earns a 2 shows a grasp of the simpler concepts and may have errors or
omissions when it comes to the more complex concepts taught. A student who earns a 1 only demonstrates a partial
understanding of simpler concepts taught (Marzano 2006).