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1. Read and understand the question carefully.
2. Find the key words :- IDIOM S IN ESSAY
What IsAn Idom...? A
n idiomis an expression
o For example : snatch theft, incident, witnessed, walking back to consisting of a
combination of words
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meaning. The f...
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3. In your essay you need to :- How I spent my holidays
o how the snatch theft happened
o your feelings about the incident SPM DIRECTED WRITING - TALK / SPEECH
Question : Your school has received a
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4. Use the technique to arrange and to write your ideas/points. THE RAILWAY CHILDREN-
CHARACTER
ROBERTA (BOBBIE)
Roberta is 12 years old.
She has a brother named
5. Introduction Paragraph ( 30 50 words ) Peter and a younger
sister named Phyllis.She is fondly known
as Bo...
o Last week I walking to school
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o 8.00am football practice PT3 'READING ALOUD' and
'SPOKEN INTERACTION'
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o saw neighbour Miss Siti opposite road waiting for bus
28 August 2015 , whereas,
your 'LISTENING T...
o she holding a big brown handbag
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Body - First Paragraph ( Describe what you saw happen)
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o saw a motorbike two men THE RAILWAY CHILDREN -

SYNOPSIS
Roberta(Bobbie), Peter
o snatch Miss Sitis handbag fell down screamed for help and Phyllis lived in a
comfortable home in
London. Their father was
o shocked gave chase got away a civil servant while their mother was a
hous...
Body - Second Paragraph ( Describe what happened after )
o checked on Miss Siti hand and leg bruises
o father came took her home made a police report
o I felt angry and sad
Body - Third Paragraph ( Suggest ways to prevent... )
o People more careful / alert - alone
o More street lights - bright roads / safe
o Police patrol in / around housing areas
Sample Essay
Cases of snatch thefts are reported almost daily in our local
dailies. In some incidences innocent lives have been lost due this
unspeakable act.I recently was an eye witness to this dastardly
act. The horrifying incident unfolded right in front of my eyes as I
was walking to school for my football practice last week.
The football practice was scheduled at 8.00 in the morning.On
that fateful morning, I decided to walk to school instead of taking
the bus as I normally did. As I was striding along the brick
pavement, my eyes caught Miss Siti, my neighbour, standing on

the opposite site of the road waiting to catch a bus to work. She
was gingerly holding a big brown handbag in her hand.I waved to Friends Follow ing This Blog
her and she waved back to me with an angelic smile.I looked at
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my watch, it was 7.oo a.m.
As I strode past her, I saw two men on a motorbike riding slowly
towards her.Both were wearing full face helmets. I didn't give
much thought about it and just moved on.Suddenly, without
warning, they zoomed past her snatching her handbag in the
process.Miss Siti fell down onto the pavement. She was shocked Follow
but managed to scream for help. It all happened so fast.I gave

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chase but the thieves managed to escape. They just sped off into
I want to kill myself
the horizon.
I quickly dashed to Miss Siti's aid. There was a look of
bewilderment on her pained face. I helped to check on
her.Fortunately, only her hand and leg were bruised but overall
she was alright. I immediately called and informed her father

about the incident.He drove there as fast as lightning and took
her home. Later, they went to the police station to make a
report.The barbaric action of the snatch thieves just made me
angry. At the same time, sad when I thought about all
the unfortunate victims who had fallen prey to them.
In order to prevent from becoming a victim of snatch theft,
people need to be more careful. For example, when they are alone
at a bus stop or walking back home alone- alertness plays an
important role in ensuring their safety.In addition, the
government should put up more street lights so the streets and
dark alleys can be bright and safe for the public.Lastly, I strongly
believe police presence in and around housing areas would boost
public confidence whereby their safety can be assured by the
police.
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39 comments:
Anonymous 16 M arch 2015 at 02:59

Thank you for the very useful tips. I'm wondering about the word limit though. The question says
to write between 120 to 150 words. How closely do we have to follow it?
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Kopitiam English 16 M arch 2015 at 05:33
This is a bit tricky because it all depends on your school teacher. M y advice is ask your
teacher what to do and listen to her. M OE has given the guide lines but it's still up to
the respective school teachers to allow the number of words for students to write
because at the end of the day it is they who are going to mark the papers....
As for my students I ask them to write 250 words.
Anonymous 1 April 2015 at 19:54
Thank you
Kopitiam English 1 April 2015 at 22:08

You're welcome...
Anonymous 22 August 2015 at 23:27
my teacher said we can use more than 150 words.. I wrote 319 words on the pt3 trial
Kopitiam English 23 August 2015 at 02:52
cool...
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sathya gana 2 April 2015 at 17:59

Teacher can I send my essays to this blog for marking?
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I'm quite busy with my work right now.....but, you can send your work and I can check
it for you when I have the time....ok! Send it to this email add
edu888841@yahoo.com
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casual _girl 30 M ay 2015 at 07:39

teacher, may I ask your opinion on what should I do in order to widen my vocabs? M y teacher
told me that my vocabs seems to be limited,though.afterall, I'm not a person that can read a
dictionary. Plus, if I've got questions regarding this subject, may I email you?
Reply
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Kopitiam English 1 June 2015 at 00:14
Reading is one way you could increase your vocab base.For example, read the local
STAR newspaper. Look for news about crimes, road accidents, flood etc and jot down
the terms used for describing the incidents. You can a scrap book to write down the
vocabs...later, go through them and try to use them in your writing...
All the best...!
***You may email me for personal development only not for your school work or school
assignments...ok!
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Huda 11 June 2015 at 22:45
Teacher could please teach me full format for article? :)

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Kopitiam English 14 June 2015 at 01:14
Hi Huda,
There is no specific format for an article. Writing an article is just like writing a normal
essay. Give a 'TITLE' for your article and depending on the question, you can write for
example....
by
Huda
at the left end corner of your article.
Anonymous 9 July 2015 at 06:59

Teacher~~~~~where r u now
Kopitiam English 14 July 2015 at 09:37

I was busy, therefore no time to check on my blog....I'm still quite busy with my lesson
plans....Yes, is there anything I can help you with, Huda...?
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Can teacher show how to write Tis essay?

To make it interesting I mean.
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Teacher show M e full essay pls because although there are notes but teacher wants us to write
this essay interesting to be pass up to her.sorry you can don't do it but I need a interesting and A
essay so that I can complete my work THX
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Hi how to write the third paragraph ?

Help me pls
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Kopitiam English 14 July 2015 at 09:49
Dear student, let me be firm here....I do not believe in giving fish to my students-no
matter how hard they ask for it- I believe in giving them the fishing rod. I just tell them
to go fish themselves for I have taught them how to fish and also given one or two fish
to them....In current global scenario, one must learn to be independent and not rely
too much on teachers for help.
Therefore, I would strongly encourage all you students out there to give your best and
learn from mistakes---to be an expert angler one needs to be very patient and skillful --
same goes with writing an essay....!
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Help
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Teacher where r u ?
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Milk Ink 4 September 2015 at 05:12
I wrote 403 words for my PT3 Essay trials today. The word limit is the same and 4 points were
given but they required us to give two more points of our own aswell. I'm wondering if any marks
would be deducted? If so, how many and will it effect my grade a lot?
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Kopitiam English 7 October 2015 at 08:04

You have written a very long essay - I am sure your teacher will penalize you because
the required words are roughly 180 - depending on your teacher's discretion it can be
200-250 words. Anything more than that is way too long....but, it all depends on your
teacher.
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Su 23 October 2015 at 04:16

Hi. I would like to ask , what will happen if the picture given is just a normal picture of a family
spending time together. And the instructions were 'you and your family is spending time by the
beach' and I wrote my own story as in like I made my own story that is not shown in the picture
but still relates to the people in the picture. Will my mark be deducted?
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Kopitiam English 23 October 2015 at 21:54
Did you write anything about the beach.....?
wafi aiman 15 M arch 2016 at 21:34
Teacher how can i remember my new vocabs..?for example,when i am reading for a

book...the wimpky book.i found one word that i normally seen it before but do know
its meaning...i find it in the dictionary but tomorrow i lost everything about it....i'm
trying to remember it but i can't..why teacher..?how i can fix my problem to improve
my english for my pt3 this year??can you help me??
Reply
wafi aiman 15 M arch 2016 at 03:12

Teacher how can i remember the vocabs...sometimes when i don't know about the meaning of
the words..i search it in the dictionary but i'm still cannot remember it until tomorrow...why...i
don't think that i must always chek out it in the dictionary when i'm gonna to use that word..i
mean hear not just one word but more than that...i don't know what i'm suppose to
do...especially for my essay...if my vocabs are limited and lack..how can i make the good essay for
pt3 this year...can you help me teacher(helpful teacher)..?
Reply
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From what you have mentioned I can see that you do really put a lot of hard work to
improve your English vocabularies...it's a good start Aiman....but, as you know there's
no short cut to success...therefore, in order to improve your vocab-do a lot of reading
and writing essays in English and ask someone to check them for you...the best person
would be your teacher....All the best Aiman...
Reply
sathya gana 15 M arch 2016 at 23:51
Good afternoon,teacher.I am writing essays recently and posted them on my blog.I hope teacher
can check and comment about them.
This the link:
http://studytogether1234.blogspot.my/search/label/PT3%20Essay
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I write this essay and hope teacher can check it.
Snatch theft cases have been bandied about by the public.Local dailies also shows that the
number of snatch theft cases escalating and ringing alarm bells across the country.Recently,I
became an eye witness of this cruel action.The incident just occurred right in front of my eyes.
It was a windy day and I was walking to my school for my extracurricular activities.I was striding
on a leisurely way as the weather was favourable.On the opposite road,M rs. Tan,my neighbour
was waiting to catch a bus for work.I waved to her but she did not notice me as she was
engrossed texting on her handphone.I continued my walk to school.
On the opposite direction of road,there was a motorcycle coming furiously.Their faces were
covered with helmets.I did not give much thought about them as I was going to late to my
school.Out of blue,the motorcyclist zoomed past her and the pillion rider snatched M rs. Tan's
handbag.She had butterflies in her stomach when she felt a strong tug on his handbag.She tried
to get back her handbag.He held her handbag strongly.M rs. Tan screamed at the top of her voice
for seeking help.The pillion rider kicked her in cold storage and they successfully snatched her
handbag.
I was stunned at that moment.I could not think of anything.However,I managed to note the
registration number of the motorcycle.I quickly ran to M rs. Tan and tried to lend a hand to
her.She was in trauma.Her arms were bruised.I quickly decided to call the police and lodged a
complaint.I also called M r. Tan,her husband to bring her back home.M r. Tan,drove his car as fast
as lightning and arrived at the scene in the nick of time.He brought his wife to the clinic which is
a stone's throw from that place.
I was frightened by the incident.Upon walking to school,I was thinking about the incident.I was
sad for M rs. Tan and at the same time angry with the thieves.They were willing to harm the other
for money without humanity.I hoped not to be a witness of this incident again in the future.
Safety precautions have to be taken in order to prevent from being a snatch theft victim.Snatch
thieves usually home in women who become a sitting duck.In order to be safe,women should
learn martial arts to protect them.Besides,we should not walk in deserted lanes alone.We should
also be on the lookout of suspicious people.Lastly,do not flaunt money and valuable in public
places.As the saying goes,prevention is better than cure.
Reply

Edited:
Snatch theft cases have been bandied about by the public.Local dailies also shows that the
number of snatch theft cases escalating and ringing alarm bells in this dog-eat-dog
world.Recently,I became an eye witness of this cruel action.The incident just unfolded right in
front of my eyes.
It was a windy day and I was walking to my school for my extracurricular activities.I was striding
on a leisurely way as the weather was favourable.On the opposite road,M rs. Tan,my neighbour
was waiting to catch a bus for work.I waved to her but she did not notice me as she was
engrossed texting on her handphone.I continued my walk to school.
On the opposite direction of road,there was a motorcycle coming furiously.Their faces were
covered with helmets.I did not give much thought about them as I was going to late to my
school.Out of blue,the motorcyclist zoomed past her and the pillion rider snatched M rs. Tan's
handbag.She had butterflies in her stomach when she felt a strong tug on his handbag.She tried
to get back her handbag.He held her handbag strongly.M rs. Tan screamed at the top of her voice
for seeking help.The pillion rider kicked her in cold storage and they successfully snatched her
handbag.
I was stunned at that moment.I could not think of anything.However,I managed to note the
registration number of the motorcycle.I quickly ran to M rs. Tan and tried to lend a hand to
her.She was in trauma.Her arms were bruised.I quickly decided to call the police and lodged a
complaint.I also called M r. Tan,her husband to bring her back home.M r. Tan,drove his car as fast
as lightning and arrived at the scene in the nick of time.He brought his wife to the clinic which is
a stone's throw from that place.
I was frightened by the incident.Upon walking to school,I was thinking about the incident.I was
sad for M rs. Tan and at the same time angry with the thieves.They were willing to harm the other
for money without humanity.I hoped not to be a witness of this incident again in the future.
Safety precautions have to be taken in order to prevent from being a snatch theft victim.Snatch
thieves usually home in women who become a sitting duck.In order to be safe,women should
learn martial arts to protect them.Besides,we should not walk in deserted lanes alone.We should
also be on the lookout of suspicious people.Lastly,do not flaunt money and valuable in public
places.As the saying goes,prevention is better than cure.
Reply
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You have written quite a lenghty essay. Good for you Sathya...
1)Snatch theft cases have been (bandied) about by the public- what is "bandied" in this
context.
2)Some of the words used do not fit in or are inappropriate.
3)Sentence structure and grammar needs improvement.
4)Use appropriate adjectives...
*Overall it is nicely written...keep up the good work and all the best...!
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Bandied means discussed by the public
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ain yusoff 11 April 2016 at 01:21
dear madam, thank you for your sharing. i want to ask you on the last question in pt3 exam. it is
on the novels. is it a compulsory question? as in my school, we never have a single question on
the novel in our previous exams. i hope you may clarify on this. thank you.
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Yes, it is a compulsory question and I am not a madam(lol).
Anonymous 9 M ay 2016 at 10:36
Thank you for your sharing, it is really helpful. M ay i ask you a favor? i have a problem,
which i do not understand clearly about the novel, how i met myself. how should i
write it to get full marks? thank you in advance.
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Unknown 14 September 2016 at 22:31

Sir/madam can i know?? Article essay same with another essay or not
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Kopitiam English 15 September 2016 at 00:46

Article
1. M ust have a 'TITLE'

2. Writer's Name/Signature
3. 5 paragraph essay
That's all....
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Anonymous 19 September 2016 at 00:45

hello madam is there any tips for pt3 this year
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emma nina 10 October 2016 at 04:08

article?
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Thurs day, 5 M arch 2015

PT3 ESSAY- DESCRIPTIVE Searc h This Blog

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PT3 ESSAY - INFORM AL

PT3 ESSAY - ARTICLE FOR

PT3 ESSAY- DESCRIPTIVE

PT3 Descriptive Essay-

o how the snatch theft happened

o saw a motorbike two men THE RAILWAY CHILDREN -

Body - Second Paragraph ( Describe what happened after )

o checked on Miss Siti hand and leg bruises

o father came took her home made a police report

o I felt angry and sad

Body - Third Paragraph ( Suggest ways to prevent... )

o People more careful / alert - alone

o More street lights - bright roads / safe

o Police patrol in / around housing areas

act. The horrifying incident unfolded right in front of my eyes as I

was walking to school for my football practice last week.

The football practice was scheduled at 8.00 in the morning.On

that fateful morning, I decided to walk to school instead of taking

the bus as I normally did. As I was striding along the brick

pavement, my eyes caught Miss Siti, my neighbour, standing on

her and she waved back to me with an angelic smile.I looked at

towards her.Both were wearing full face helmets. I didn't give

much thought about it and just moved on.Suddenly, without

warning, they zoomed past her snatching her handbag in the

but managed to scream for help. It all happened so fast.I gave

I quickly dashed to Miss Siti's aid. There was a look of

bewilderment on her pained face. I helped to check on

she was alright. I immediately called and informed her father

her home. Later, they went to the police station to make a

report.The barbaric action of the snatch thieves just made me

angry. At the same time, sad when I thought about all

the unfortunate victims who had fallen prey to them.

In order to prevent from becoming a victim of snatch theft,

at a bus stop or walking back home alone- alertness plays an

important role in ensuring their safety.In addition, the

government should put up more street lights so the streets and

believe police presence in and around housing areas would boost

public confidence whereby their safety can be assured by the

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Anonymous 16 M arch 2015 at 02:59

Kopitiam English 16 M arch 2015 at 05:33

As for my students I ask them to write 250 words.

Anonymous 1 April 2015 at 19:54

Kopitiam English 1 April 2015 at 22:08

Anonymous 22 August 2015 at 23:27

Kopitiam English 23 August 2015 at 02:52

sathya gana 2 April 2015 at 17:59

Kopitiam English 5 April 2015 at 09:32

casual _girl 30 M ay 2015 at 07:39

Kopitiam English 1 June 2015 at 00:14

All the best...!

Huda 11 June 2015 at 22:45

Teacher could please teach me full format for article? :)

Kopitiam English 14 June 2015 at 01:14

at the left end corner of your article.

Anonymous 9 July 2015 at 06:59