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Motivation is of paramount significance for every student as it catalyzes the


surge of moving forward towards the goal and rewarding students is one of
the best methods of stimulating them. However, there is an emerging debate
about which student should be rewarded, but according to my views every
student who has shown even a slight degree of improvement in any area of
curriculum should be inspired.

In context to the first notion, providing incentives or prizes to bright students


amplifies their enthusiasm and self confidence which provokes them to do
uphill struggle to achieve their desired objectives. Even a little appreciation
can lead to a huge improvement in their grades and make the students
accountable for their studies. But sometimes it demotivates other average
students by instilling a sense of inferiority in them and results in decline in
their learning.
On the other hand, if little efforts and struggle of every student are
acknowledged and stimulated, whole class will perform better because every
pupil is unique in his intellectual capabilities. Sometimes a little token of
appreciation brings fruitful outcomes in students career as it strengthens
their self esteem. It will also minimize bullying of average students in class by
the toppers and negligence of teachers. This trend will significantly decrease
stress and anxiety among students when their parents will not criticize them
negatively for never winning any prize.

In short, every human being has a tendency to improve every aspect of his
life if he knows that his efforts are being noticed and rewarded, so a teacher
can shape pupils lives by acquisition of positivity among them which is only
feasible if every student is inspired for his or her initiatives.

Content: 3: Adequately deals with the prompt

Form: 2: Length is between 200 and 300 words

Development, structure and coherence: 2 Shows good development and logical structure

Grammar: 1 Shows a relatively high degree of grammatical control. No mistakes which would
lead to misunderstandings

General linguistic range: 1 Sufficient range of language to provide clear descriptions, express
viewpoints and develop arguments

Vocabulary range: 1 Shows a good range of vocabulary for matters connected to general
academic topics. Lexical shortcomings lead to circumlocution or some imprecision

Spelling: 2 correct spelling Overall: 12/15

2.
Every individual seeks a shelter to live safely, thereby it makes housing a
basic human requirement. Some people give suggestion that the government
should implement any strategy to construct houses in the rural areas,
however, other critiques outlines the environmental risks involved in it. I
would like to go with the idea of preserving environment by not ruining the
adjoining areas of countryside.

3.
The value of older people cantcannot be neglected because they spent their
entire life in cherishing family and community together by preserving culture,
customs and traditions. Some people suggest that the government should
take care of them while others argue that its is responsibility of their family. In
my views, family should be accountable for caring them as the government
can only provide physical amenities but love and affection can be gained by a
family.

4.
Mankind survives and functions well in groups which fortify mutual respect,
understanding and exchange of ideas among each other. Some people
believe that in todays world we are more independent, while others support
the notion that we are still dependent on each other, I would also go with the
second statement as I believe we still seek each others help and company to
run our lives smoothly.

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