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In short, every human being has a tendency to improve every aspect of his
life if he knows that his efforts are being noticed and rewarded, so a teacher
can shape pupils lives by acquisition of positivity among them which is only
feasible if every student is inspired for his or her initiatives.
Development, structure and coherence: 2 Shows good development and logical structure
Grammar: 1 Shows a relatively high degree of grammatical control. No mistakes which would
lead to misunderstandings
General linguistic range: 1 Sufficient range of language to provide clear descriptions, express
viewpoints and develop arguments
Vocabulary range: 1 Shows a good range of vocabulary for matters connected to general
academic topics. Lexical shortcomings lead to circumlocution or some imprecision
2.
Every individual seeks a shelter to live safely, thereby it makes housing a
basic human requirement. Some people give suggestion that the government
should implement any strategy to construct houses in the rural areas,
however, other critiques outlines the environmental risks involved in it. I
would like to go with the idea of preserving environment by not ruining the
adjoining areas of countryside.
3.
The value of older people cantcannot be neglected because they spent their
entire life in cherishing family and community together by preserving culture,
customs and traditions. Some people suggest that the government should
take care of them while others argue that its is responsibility of their family. In
my views, family should be accountable for caring them as the government
can only provide physical amenities but love and affection can be gained by a
family.
4.
Mankind survives and functions well in groups which fortify mutual respect,
understanding and exchange of ideas among each other. Some people
believe that in todays world we are more independent, while others support
the notion that we are still dependent on each other, I would also go with the
second statement as I believe we still seek each others help and company to
run our lives smoothly.