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Ricky Baker has been through alot in his life with finding a family. He also doesn't know
who his parents are so he doesn't know the feeling of being loved. In Hunt For The
Wilder People , people should admire Ricky Baker because Ricky is brave,helps loved
Ricky is brave. For example he runs away from child welfare even though he
knows he will eventually be caught . Most people wouldn't run away because you
wouldn't want to get in trouble with the police. Secondly he also killed the wild pig so
hec wouldn't get hurt. This was brave because a child and he was risking his life and
most 13 year olds wouldn't dare kill a wild animal or even go in front of one . Not only he
with Bellas death. Hector went through a lot with Bellas death so if ricky wouldn't have
took Bella's ashes with him and Hec wouldn't have been able to say his final goodbyes
and put her ashes in the river. He also help hector with his leg when he sprained it once
in the movie or when hurt it. Ricky and hector stayed in the same spot in the woods for
weeks because hank had hurt his leg and couldn't walk and Ricky tried his best on
getting food and even comforting hector. This is how Ricky helps loved ones but he also
is very strong.
Ricky is strong. Ricky is strong by knowing his mom gave him away or she couldn't
take care of him and by not knowing how his dad looked like or even who he was. Plus
he is going through a lot in one point in the movie he didn't care because he knew that
no one likes him and he's been through rejection with other foster parents so he doesn't
have hope anymore and that's a lot for a teenage boy. Ricky is also strong by going
through Bella's death and know that he might have to go to child welfare. So he doesn't
want to go to child welfare and he has been having a good time in bellas and hec house
and he never thought that he was going to have to go back to child welfare until Bella
died.
This is why Rickys is brave, helps loved ones, and is strong even though he
hasn't had a family his whole life until bella and hec adopted him. Also Bella,Hec,Ricky
show the quote a happy family is but an earlier heaven.( George Bernard Shaw) on how
happy they are. This is why you need to appreciate you family because others might be
Introduction The essay begins The essay begins The essay begins The essay simply
Paragraph with a strong with an with an begins with only a
Your score: 3 introduction introduction introduction thesis statement
paragraph and paragraph that paragraph but is and not a fully
contains the contains the missing either the developed
following parts: required elements: attention-grabber introduction
attention-grabber, attention-grabber, or the bridge paragraph OR the
bridge, and thesis bridge, and thesis and/or the introduction
statement. The statement. attention-grabber paragraph is
thesis statement However, the is clich or the missing entirely.
appears as the attention-grabber transition does not
last sentence of may not be as actually lead into
the introduction. effective and/or the thesis
the transition may statement. The
not be as smooth. introduction
The thesis paragraph
statement appears contains a thesis
as the last statement that is
sentence of the located at the end
introduction. of the introduction
paragraph.
Supporting Details All supporting Supporting details One supporting Supporting details
(x2) details are logical are mostly logical detail may be may not be
Your score: 4 and connect to the but might exhibit missing and/or present or logical.
thesis . weak connectors may contain a
Supporting details to the thesis . direct quotation or Supporting details
are broad enough Supporting details specific evidence may be random or
to effectively summarize the that should appear off topic.
summarize the content of the in the body
content of the body paragraphs paragraph.
body paragraphs and do not contain Supporting details
and do not contain specific evidence. may not connect
specific evidence. to the thesis
statement or
effectively
summarize the
paragraph.
Analysis/ Body paragraphs Body paragraphs The writer has Body paragraphs
Commentary contain effective contain included plot lack analysis and
(x2) explanation of explanation of summary in some contain mostly plot
Your score: 3 evidence in your evidence in your places instead of summary.
own words. Each own words, and analysis/
piece of evidence each piece of explanations, OR, There is little
is explained in at evidence is the writer has not evidence of logic
least two explained in at explained each and/or reasoning.
sentences that least two piece of evidence
analyze how the sentences. with at least two
piece of evidence However, the sentences
proves the thesis analysis may be consistently. OR,
and supporting more obvious and the writers
details Analysis lack depth, analysis/
shows depth and therefore, not fully explanations may
goes beyond the proving the claim only state the
obvious. presented in the obvious.
thesis or topic
sentences.
Conclusion The essay ends The essay ends The essay ends The essay simply
Paragraph with a strong and with a conclusion with a conclusion ends with only a
Your score: 3 memorable paragraph that paragraph but is rephrased thesis
conclusion contains the missing either the statement and not
paragraph and required elements: link back to hook, a fully developed
contains the link back to hook, rephrased thesis conclusion
following parts: rephrasing of statement or the paragraph OR the
link back to thesis, thesis statement so-what statement conclusion
rephrasing of and key points, is weak paragraph is
thesis statement transition, and so- missing entirely.
and key points, what statement.
and so-what However, the so-
statement what statement
may not be as
effective or logical
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