Académique Documents
Professionnel Documents
Culture Documents
You must select a real organisation for this, not a fictional one, and the
issue or decision under investigation must also be real.
The Commentary
Your commentary must not exceed more than 1,500 words. A word count
must be included as part of the commentary.
You must attach three to five supporting documents from which the
majority of the information for the commentary has been obtained. All
supporting documents and additional sources must be fully referenced and
included in bibliography.
Requirements-SL
Select
a
real
business
issue
or
problem
for
a
written
commentary
but
it
must
relate
to
the
SL
syllabus.
Refer
directly
to
a
single
business
organization
but
may
consider
industry
wide
impact.
Written
commentary
based
on
secondary
research
but
can
use
primary
research
as
support.
Provide
a
title
that
gives
focus
and
direction
must
be
framed
as
a
question
Written
commentary
doesnt
exceed
1500
words
Attach
3-5
supporting
documents
from
which
the
majority
of
your
information
has
been
gained.
Fully
reference
all
supporting
documents
and
additional
sources
and
include
them
in
a
Bibliography
Examples
of
appropriate
questions:
Can
Airline
X
successfully
target
segment
Y?-uses
market
segmentation,
consumer
profiling,
promotion
and
measure
of
financial
success
Should
company
Y
outsource
its
manufacturing
uses
operations
management
and
human
resources
Supporting
documents:
Should
represent
a
range
of
views
and
ideas
for
example
a
selection
of
3-5
documents
published
by
a
single
company
or
3-5
surveys
of
similar
populations
would
not
provide
balance
or
objectivity.
Supporting
documents
must
be
within
a
maxiumum
of
3
years
prior
to
the
submission
of
the
IA.
A
maximum
of
one
of
the
supporting
documents
may
be
the
transcript
of
a
video/audio
file.
The
transcript
must
be
of
the
relevant
parts
only.
Only
video
from
a
reliable
organization
should
be
used.
The
commentary
must
be
based
on
secondary
sources
and
may
include
primary
data.
Secondary
sources:
Articles
Business
accounts
Business
Plans
Extracts
from
websites
TRanspripts
from
video
Financial
reports
Government
or
other
statistics
Journal
publications
Market
Research
publications
Mission
Statements
Web
based
surveys
Primary
sources:
Responses
to
questionaires
(include
a
blank
copy
of
the
questionnaire
and
a
tally
of
responses)
Results
of
survey
Transcript
of
interviews/discussions
with
focus
groups
Students
must
select
their
own
source
material
Students
must
highlight
any
part
of
the
supporting
documents
that
relate
directly
to
their
commentary.
Students
should
label
each
supporting
document
Supporting
Document
1
Format:
1. Introduction-set
the
scene
2. Presentation
of
data
3. Analysis
of
data
4. Discussion
of
findings
5. Conclusion
that
answers
the
commentary
question
Presentation:
1. Title
page
2. Table
of
contents
3. Appropriate
headings
and
sub
headings
4. Consistent
referencing
5. Complete
bibliography
6. Numbered
pages
INTRODUCTION
Provide
a
brief
background
information
about
the
business,
give
a
clear
outline
of
the
problem
or
issue
and
explain
the
methodology
used
to
investigate
the
issue
or
problem.
COMMENTARY
Findings
from
supporting
documents
should
be
presented
and
analysed
with
the
help
of
relevant
business
tools,
techniques
and
theories.
The
findings
should
also
be
interpreted:
What
main
themes
emerge
from
the
analysis
of
the
supporting
documents,
and
why
and
how
are
they
helpful
or
not
in
answering
the
commentary
question?
An
evaluative
approach
to
this
discussion
of
findings
should
be
pursued:
for
example
what
are
the
strengths
and
weaknesses
of
the
various
positions
on
the
issue
or
problem
and
what
are
the
implications?
CONCLUSION
In
the
Conclusion
the
commentary
question
should
be
explicitly
answered.
There
should
not
be
facts
or
arguments
included
that
have
not
been
already
covered
in
earlier
parts
of
the
commentary.
Evaluate
what
parts
of
the
commentary
that
it
would
be
good
to
investigate
further.
WORD
COUNT:
Must
not
exceed
1500
words-if
the
word
limit
is
exceeded
it
will
be
marked
based
on
the
first
1500
words.
Not
included
in
the
word
count:
Acknowledgements
Contents
page
Tables
of
statistical
data
Diagrams
or
figures
Equations/formulae/calculations
Citations
(must
be
in
body
of
commentary)
References
(if
used
must
be
in
footnotes
or
endnotes)
Bibliography
CRITERIA:
A:
supporting
documents
B:
choice
and
application
of
business
tools,
techniques
and
theories
C:
choice
and
analysis
of
data
and
integration
of
ideas
D:
conclusions
E:
Evaluation
F:
Structure
G:
Presentation
HL:
Introduction:
The
HL
researah
project
is
designed
to
allow
students
to
demonstrate
their
application
of
skills
and
knowledge
to
business
issues
or
decision
making.
Requirements:
Design
and
undertake
research
that
either
addresses
an
issue
facing
a
business
or
a
range
of
organisations
or
analyses
a
decision
to
be
made
by
a
business
organization
or
a
range
of
organisations.
Select
a
real
business
and
a
real
decision
or
issue.
Base
all
research
on
primary
research
gathered
from
the
organization
investigated.
Secondary
research
may
be
used
for
support.
Provide
a
title
for
the
project
that
gives
it
focus
and
direction
and
it
must
be
framed
as
a
question.
Produce
a
research
proposal
of
maximum
500
words,
including
an
action
plan
to
be
used
as
the
primary
planning
document.
Produce
a
written
report
that
doesnt
exceed
500
words
Write
the
report
in
a
style
of
a
useful
document
for
management.
CHOICE
OF
TOPIC
Students
should
chose
their
own
topic/organization.
Research
question
should
be
forward
looking
targeted
at
an
issue
still
relevant
for
the
business
and
should
require
the
student
to
make
recommendations
for
further
action.
Confirm
before
starting
that
they
will
be
able
to
obtain
the
necessary
data
from
the
chosen
organization.
Be
aware
of
ethical
issues
especially
those
surrounding
confidentiality.
RESEARCH
PROPOSAL
Research
question
Methodology-rationale,
areas
of
syllabus
covered,
possible
sources
of
information,
organisations
and
individuals
to
be
contacted,
methods
to
be
used
to
collect
primary
data
and
the
reasons
for
choosing
them,
Order
of
activities
and
timescale
of
project,
Anticipated
difficulties,
action
plan.
The
proposal
should
be
a
planning
document
and
should
be
regularly
reviewed/modified.
WRITTEN
REPORT
Title
page
Acknowledgements
Contents
page
Execuitive
abstract-max
length
200
words
Introduction-background
knowledge
of
company,
outline
of
issue
or
decision
Research
question
Methodology
employed-any
changes
made
should
be
explained.
Main
results
and
findings-clarify
raw
data
has
revealed-summary
of
data
and
of
findings
made
and
should
be
supported
by
tables,
graphs
and
statistics.
Analysis
and
discussion-results
interpreted
with
use
of
tools,
techniques
and
theories.
What
are
the
main
issues
that
emerge?
And
how/why
are
ethey
helpful
or
not
to
answering
the
research
question?
An
evaluative
approach
to
the
discussion
should
be
pursued-strengths
and
weakneses
of
various
postions
on
the
issue
or
decision
and
what
are
their
implications.
Conclusion
and
recommendation-no
new
facts/ideas
should
be
presented.
Recommendations
should
be
precise,
answer
the
question
and
be
practical
for
action.
If
the
results
are
inconclusive,
further
research
should
be
recommended.
WORD
COUNT:
2000
words
maximum-examiner
will
stop
marking
after
2000
words.
CRITERIA:
A:
research
proposal
B:
Sources
and
data
C:
use
of
tools,
techniques
and
theories
D:
Analysis
and
evaluation
E:
conclusions
F:
Recommendations
G:
Structure
H:
Presentation
I:
Reflective
thinking