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Alan Tantiwassadakran
Writing 39B
Greg McClure
3 March 2017
During my ten weeks in Professor Greg McClure s Writing 39B class, I learned
many new attributes that I can take into my future writing classes . Throughout the entire
course, we were challenged to analyze multiple texts and create our own engaging
texts and stories. I learned countless useful tools during the course , but the main take-
aways I received from the course were how to comprehend rhetoric , how to close-text
medias/mediums. We read texts, had discussions, and created our own stories to
sharpen our new knowledge of the take-aways I mentioned . The main novel we read for
rhetorical analysis was I Am Legend, by Richard Matheson, and to learn about the
horror genre we read articles like Nol Carroll s The Nature of Horror. The Rhetorical
our knowledge of rhetoric and how to identify an author s intentions. The Rhetoric in
our knowledge of the horror genre and its expectations . In this reflection essay, I will
own drafting process and experience, how I revised my own work, and how I intend to
When I first entered Professor McClures class I initially felt that I was not
capable of the demands and challenges that Writing 39B brought . Through patience
analyzing rhetoric. In the first few weeks of the course, I felt that I could not grasp the
where we had to analyze Trent Reznors and Johnny Cashs version of the song Hurt, it
was quite evident that I was still unsure of what I was doing and I had no clue of either
of the twos rhetorical situation. It took me about two weeks to get a better
horror film named No Way Out, by Kristoffer Aaron Morgan. This assignment is where I
felt I hit my stride in terms of identifying and understanding an author s rhetoric. I made
assertions not only about what was going on in the film , but also about the underlying
metaphorical messages Morgan was trying to get across to his audience . I think a
combination of things learned in the class gave me more insight to rhetoric . Reading,
writing, and analyzing became common to me and I believe this is a huge reason why
my progress as a writer improved. Articles like The Nature of Horror, by Nol Carroll
gave me a better of the horror genre and its expectation , while the countless
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rhetoric in general.
make drafts before turning in a final product. Drafting was essential for making a
persuasive and adequate essay. I feel that rhetorical analysis, in particular, requires the
writer to draft extensively since the discussed materials are exceedingly dense . In most
new assignments, I started rhetorical analysis with the same set of rules . I would do the
following in order: Read, analyze, re-read, question, then finally write. Every time I read
for the first time, I would think about the superficial aspect of what the author wrote . I
would read with this question in my mind: What would the average person think about
the words I am reading?. In the analyzation phase I, would attempt to start to delve
deeper into the mind of the author. The analyzation phase and questioning phase
symbols, and hidden messages, this is the hardest part in my opinion of this whole
process. Many times, I found myself re-reading the text to re-question and think about
the authors intentions from different angles. When we read, I Am Legend, I caught
myself doing this very process without having prior thought about it , so I stuck with it. I
felt that my methods worked well and kept me engaged while reading . Previously, I
would only read texts superficially and not think twice about an author s intention.
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A key component that Professor McClure incorporated in our class was the
revision process. We had to revise ourselves and our peers works numerous times
during the course. I felt this was an underrated portion of the class . It was important to
revise our work to refresh our thinking and look at it from a different angle overall . I
cannot account for my classmates, but in my own revision process I had a step-wise
structure. It mainly involves questioning my work over and over again , but the steps I
like to start with include: writing, questioning, revising, taking a break, then repeating.
The break portion in revising is crucial, in my opinion, since it gives myself time to sleep
on the subject and refresh my thoughts when I come back to it . It allows for me to
realize mistakes and helps me interpret thoughts differently and have a different and
better understanding.
The techniques and skills I learned throughout the course can no doubt be
applied in my later college years. The most obvious one being analyzing texts, but
another notable thing that I will take me is the revision process. Before this class I
revised my works, but not nearly as extensive like the way I did in this course. I think the
main reason it was not as effective in my previous classes was because I simply did not
do it as much. In Writing 39B, basically all the assignments brought along a revision of
some sort. As I leave this class, I know one thing will stick with me in all my classes. I
know see films, texts, and novels through a different lens due to rhetorical analysis. I no
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longer see things superficially and I instead, actively engage in thinking about and