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EDCU12039 Assessment 1
Student No. s0286773
Multiple Movement Automaton
Gary Holmes
WEEBLY LINK - jorjachellingsworth@weebly.com
Having a fellow student look over my design project allows you to learn
how others interpret your work and whether your design is being
understood to it full extent. This then improves your communication skills
in the future, showing you what you need to work on. My peer feedback in
this circumstance made me feel more confident about my communication
skills. In her feedback she stated that my Weebly was written in an easy-
to-understand and informative way and that my use of pictures helped
to clearly explain the concept. This came from creating a neat and bare
minimal style Weebly, meaning only putting in what was completely
necessary, making sure not to repeat myself more than needed. The only
communication issue that appeared in my design project was that I did
not have the same understanding of what was supposed to be included as
my peer assessor did. Having someone to communicate with in regards to
what was to be included did help with this evaluation though, and if I were
to repeat the creation of my design project on Weebly I would know what
was to be included and would confidently be able to communicate that in
a way that a wide demographic of people could understand.
Through receiving feedback from my peer, she believed that I had left out
the critical thinking and planning aspect. Her interpretation of the criteria
and Moodle content caused her to believe that we were required to design
and build a unique model of our own as an example. However, I
interpreted the task differently, creating a base model and thoroughly
explaining and providing the participant with my own guidelines of what
was acceptable for the chosen movements and artistic addition on the
top. I used my own critical thinking and creativity to come up with a
unique idea that would suit my project and then had to use it again in
deciding whether I had made the correct judgement, which I believe I
have. With her ideas in mind though I can see how having an example
would have been beneficial. Through this receiving of feedback, I was then
able to analyse another individuals critical and creative thinking skills and
hopefully improve them by doing so.
The evaluation of my design project was very well done and was both
critical but professional, leaving me feeling relatively positive, despite my
poor mark. However, the fact that my peer assessor was a distance
student, did result in some varying views of what was expected in the
assignment. There were certain aspects that were explained differently in
class than to what was in the Moodle which may have influenced the
differences in our assignments. An example of this is having to create our
own unique design. I clearly covered what the base of the design would
look like, giving examples and clear diagrams, then left the artistic,
sustainable theme up to the participant, having them use their
imagination. In the eyes of my peer however, that was not close enough
to the criteria.
Another disagreement was the age aspect of the criteria. I was aware of
having to make it relate to adults and that it did not have to be in an
education setting, however from want I had researched about a multiple
movement automaton, its purpose was too entertain children and teach
them basic mechanics. Then, as it was the only way project made sense to
me, I presented it as if I were explaining to a teacher how to teach it to
her students. This appeared the most practical form of presentation to me
and my learning, however after consideration I can see that this still does
not entirely conform to the criteria.
Tourism and its detrimental effect to certain Aboriginal sacred sites, such
as Uluru is another sustainability topic that can be used. Uluru is
considered the heart of the earth to Aboriginal people and having people
that dont understand or respect its significance climb all over it and
commit other acts of ignorance upon it, degrades its cultural importance
and non-Indigenous peoples consideration for Indigenous cultures
(Creative Spirits, 2016). Other examples that could be used are littering,
the resource industry such as mining in sacred areas, causing damage to
ancient artefacts, and construction and development which can also cause
damage to sacred artefacts (Creative Spirits, 2016). Embedding
Indigenously relevant content in the classroom helps improve the
relationships between Indigenous and non-Indigenous Australians, helping
Indigenous students to feel more connecting to schooling, and helping
non-Indigenous students gain respect for their cultures. It is important
that a range of perspectives are presented to students to enrich their
understanding of Australia and all its people (ALEA, 2013).
In regards to the use of coloured pencils and scissors in the design and
implementation processes, students in grade four should not have trouble
with this and it should be considered a low-level risk. It is possible
however, if this is a concern of a parent or fellow teacher, to purchase
cheap safety glasses for the students, preventing them from poking an
eye with any of the rough cardboards, pencils, scissors, or other pointy
materials (Sciencing, 2017).
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