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English 11B / Zimny

Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury Total packet worth: 150


AGENDA: Unit Essay QUOTATION LOG DUE NOW!

Montags Metamorphosis: Formal Essay

Montags Metamorphosis Quotations: DUE NOW (minimum of one per section) (Zimnys initials: and score: /35

Thesis Statement (DUE DATE: 4/10/17 ) Day One (Zimnys initials: and score: /5)
Thesis statement (Mondays version, approved by Zimny):

OUTLINE #1--Choosing quotations: (DUE DATE: 4/11/17) Days One/Two (Zimnys initials: and score: /5)
Thesis statement
Topic sentence for body paragraph #1
Three quotations for body paragraph #1
Topic sentence for body paragraph #2
Three quotations for body paragraph #2
Topic sentence for body paragraph #3
Three quotations for body paragraph #3
OUTLINE #2Introduced quotations (DUE DATE: 4/12/17 due 4/13/17) Day Three (Zimnys initials: and score: /15)
Thesis statement
Topic sentence for body paragraph #1
Three introduced quotations for body paragraph #1 with parenthetical citations for each
Topic sentence for body paragraph #2
Three introduced quotations for body paragraph #1 with parenthetical citations for each
Topic sentence for body paragraph #3
Three introduced quotations for body paragraph #1 with parenthetical citations for each
OUTLINE #3Commentary (DUE: 4/13/17 due 4/1417 @ end period) Days Four/Five(Zimnys initials: ___and score: /20)
Thesis statement
Topic sentence for body paragraph #1
Three introduced quotations for body paragraph #1 with parenthetical citations and two woven commentaries
Topic sentence for body paragraph #2
Three introduced quotations for body paragraph #1 with parenthetical citations and two woven commentaries
Topic sentence for body paragraph #3
Three introduced quotations for body paragraph #1 with parenthetical citations and two woven commentaries
INTRODUCTION / CONCLUSION (DUE: 4/14/17 to 4/17/17 @ end period) Days Five/Six(Zimnys initials: _and score: /20)
The introduction must include the thesis + additional background information.
The body paragraphs must include topic sentences, introduced quotations, page citations, and commentary.
The conclusion must include a re-stated thesis + reflective information emphasizing the essays basic ideas and points.
Include a hook/statement of interest in the introduction, as well as the authors name and the title of the book
Include a big idea and final conclusive end statement to conclusion tie all topic sentences together to give conclusion a finished feeling

ROUGH DRAFT: (DUE DATE: 4/18/17) Day Seven (Zimnys initials: __and score: /25)
All parts of rough draft are double-spaced and hand-written, NOT TYPED.
The rough draft must be written in this packet.
Peer Editing and Self-Revision must not occur before rough draft is finished.

Peer Review: (DUE DATE: 4/18/17 and 4/19/17 ) Days Eight and Nine (Zimnys initials: and score: /10)
Must be revised twice by two peers in different writing/colors. All sets of check marks must be checked off twice and all comments filled in twice.
Author Revision/Editing: (DUE DATE: : 4/20/17 ) Day Ten (Zimnys initials: and score: /10)
The rough draft must be revised by author of essay AFTER peer review and self-editing. Use the Revision, Proofreading, and Editing Checklist to
revise your own writing. A third set of revision marks must appear on rough draft (your own).
MLA CHECKLIST (DUE DATE: : 4/20/17 ) Day Ten (Zimnys initials: and score: /5)
MLA format must be checked and adjusted.
SECOND DRAFT: To be written on the day of the final exam (improvement must be notable and obvious from rough draft to second draft )

NOTE: Second drafts will be accepted only if ALL SECTIONS are COMPLETED and SIGNED OFF.