HOW TO WRITE A THESIS STATEMENT

JANUARY 1, 2015 REGONIEL, PATRICK A.

Once you have made observations, conferred with experts, discussed issues and
concerns with friends and read a great deal of literature on your chosen research topic,
you should be ready to write your thesis statement. But do you already understand well
enough the meaning of a thesis statement? Or are you one of those who find these two
words difficult to comprehend?

If the thesis statement concept is quite vague to you, then this should be defined clearly
first to foster understanding. Once this is done, then you can proceed to the process of
writing those statements. Thus, this article will define thesis statement then provide you
with detailed tips on how to write one. Examples are also given.

What is a Thesis Statement?

A thesis statement is essentially a synthesis of what you have read and observed
regarding the phenomenon that you are trying to explain. It is a statement that serves as
your anchor in advancing your argument about say, the causality of things. Among other
things, the thesis statement serves as the focus of your discussion.

The statement that you make is not just a random position but a well-thought one,
based on objective judgment and empirical evidence. Empirical means verifiable by
observation or experience. It is your educated point of view. It is your proposed
explanation of the phenomenon after a critical examination of evidence at hand. Are
there convincing evidences that can support your contention?

Based on the definition given above, it is therefore necessary that you read a great deal
of literature to understand how other people viewed, explored, tested and verified the
phenomenon that you are trying to understand. Reading a lot not only broadens your
horizon but also helps you pinpoint exactly the problem areas you need to address or
look into, in the process, narrowing down your research topic.

If someone wrote a review of literature on the subject, then thats the ideal starting point.
A good thesis statement arises from how well you have familiarized yourself about the
research topic. You should aim towards becoming an authority in the research area you
have decided to focus on.
How to Write a Thesis Statement
Before you present your thesis statement, you should describe first the setting or
situation which served as basis or foundation of your statement. This is called
contextualization. You may refer to the article How to Write a Good Thesis
Introduction on details on how to do this. You should be able to present your thesis
statement at the end of the first paragraph of your exposition. State your point of view in
a sentence or a few sentences.

In the ensuing paragraphs, provide examples and existing evidences to support your
argument. Your research paper will supply the needed method or methodology to test
your point of view or thesis. Your conceptual framework will serve as your map in
conducting the investigation.

Examples of Thesis Statement

The following are examples of thesis statement in different fields of specialization.

1. Overfishing continues to occur due to a generally poor understanding among

fishers on the link between fishing intensity and the reproductive capacity of
target fishes.
2. Adolescents and young adults devoting at least six hours a day in front of
their computer screen become obese in their adult years.
3. Urban dwellers are better off using conventional over-the-counter drugs than
herbal remedies due to problems of accessibility.
4. Employees walking at least 30 minutes a day are able to accomplish their
tasks on time compared to their sedentary colleagues.
5. Chronic exposure to blue light from LED screens (of computer monitors and
television) deplete melatonin levels thus reduce the number of sleeping hours
among middle aged adults.

Notice in the above examples that the specific variables of the study are described.
This defines the scope of the study and makes analysis easy, focused, and doable.

Further, the thesis statement is not carved in stone. While more information is gathered
along the way, the thesis statement may be revised or rewritten for better treatise of the
subject. This is where your thesis advisers suggestions, assuming he or she has a
better grasp of the subject, come in handy.

2015 January 1 P A Regoniel