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Project 2 - Peer Review to Yonghao Yan

Prompt:(0-7) Rate average: 7


How well does the writing answer the assignment prompt?
He developed correctly the assignment prompt. He did a great job writing as a reporter and giving information about a community.
Rate:7
Does the writer follow the role of a reporter?
Yes, he followed correctly the role of reporter. He speaks in third person in his community essay. Rate: 7
Does the profile portray a specific perspective of community?
Yes, the portray is very helpful to understand the perspective of the community. Rate: 7
Does the writing focus on a specific community?
Yes, he is specific in a CESL community. Rate: 7

Research: (0-7) Rate average: 1


Is information from research & interviews effectively integrated?
No, he did not do a research in this community. He did the interview and the information is clearly stated. Rate: 5
Does research enhance the individuals perspective of their community?
No, he didnt do research of the community. Rate: 0
Does primary and secondary research provide helpful information and unique insight into the community?
No, he did not provide any primary or secondary research. It will be helpful to add some research in the essay. Rate: 0
Does the information enhance the writing?
No, he didnt provide any external information. Rate: 0

Context: (0-7) Rate Average: 7


Is there sufficient contextual information for this audience to understand the individuals community?
Yes, he did use sufficient contextual information that helps the reader to understand the function of the individuals community.
Rate: 7
Are the profile and community essay clearly related?
Yes, he clearly related the individuals profile and the essay. Rate: 7
Does the writing provide helpful, relevant context for readers to understand this community?
Yes, the writing is very helpful to understand the community. It helps you to understand its function. Rate: 7
Is there a unique, clear connection between the community essay and the profile?
Yes, he connected clearly the information that is in the profile to the community essay. Rate: 7
Organization: (0-7) Rate Average: 7
Is information focused and organized?
Yes, he did a great job organizing the ideas and concepts. The essay is focused and organized. Rate: 7
Are the community essay and profile focused and developed in a logical, purposeful, and engaging way?
Yes, the community essay and profile are related to each other making the reader to understand everything of the information.
Rate: 7
Is the organization suitable for the rhetorical situation?
Yes, the organization is suitable for the rhetorical situation. Rate: 7
Are there clear connections between all ideas?
Yes, there are clear connection between all the ideas making the reading interesting. Rate: 7

Conventions: (0-7) Rate Average: 7


Do the profile and community essay follow genre conventions?
Yes, the profile is formal and it helps the reader to understand that it is a community essay. Rate: 7
Is writing revised to be clear and precise?
Yes, the writing is revised, clear and precise. Rate: 7
Are the conventions (point of view, formality, and layout/design) consistent and appropriate for the genre?
Yes, he does a great job being consistent and appropriate with the conventions. Rate:7
Is writing clear, cohesive, concise, and precise as a result of thorough proofreading?
Yes, the writing is clear, cohesive, concise and precise. He does a great job following this aspects in his writing. Rate: 7

Citations: (0-7) Rate Average: 0


Is all information accurately cited?
No, he did not cite any information in his essay. Rate: 0
Are all in-text citations present and formatted in correct MLA format where needed?
No, he didnt do any in-text citations. Rate: 0
Is a Works Cited page present with all entries formatted correctly?
No, he didnt do a work cited page. Rate: 0

Total Points: 29/42

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