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Kathryn McCallion
Dr. Cummings
ENG 314
8 December 2016
In Jim Porters essay Why Technology Matters to Writing," he discusses the distinction
between the different outlooks that he believed separated people from seeing the computer as a
revolution for writing or not. Those who did not, merely saw writing from a formal view
emphasizing style, syntax, coherence, and organization (Porter 386). Others who viewed
writing in a scenic/contextual view, revered the computer as a revolutionary object in the writing
field because they not only saw the words that formated the paragraph, but all of the mechanisms
Technology has changed writing socially and rhetorically because we are able to
communicate on global levels at lightning speed. Not to mention, different social platforms
technology not as a static set of devices, but as a system unfolding over time, including human
and non-human agents in a developmental dance. The revolution lies in use, which guides
technological innovation (Porter 385). I find myself agreeing with Porters view; writing has
evolved. This is just as important in all types of medias and for different purposes. In Anne
Frances Wysockis article The Multiple Media of Texts, she wrote, Learning to compose
pages or screens that fit effectively into a reader/viewers expectations can be, then, a matter of
learning to observe well (Wysocki 29). Taking that into consideration, we can achieve this goal
as writers by observing the multimedias around us as well as thinking of the audience in our
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process. It is no longer just pencil to paper. Being a writer in todays world means being a digital
composer. If one aspires to be a good professional writer, they must too be a digital composer.
When rhetoric was first studied, many scholars took different approaches to how the
message should be delivered. Aristotle taught his students that delivery should be focused on
(1) emphasizing the role of the body in rhetorical action and (2) stressing the importance of
emotional impact (Aristotle 3). It was like acting out a role in the best way to achieve
persuasion. Through the Renaissance, delivery was more focused on what the speaker was
wearing, how their hair looked, the way they spoke, walked, talked, the ethical stance, and moral
obligations. Fast forward hundreds of years and now delivery is no longer just focused on the
body, or the physical man. We now have to take into consideration a digital delivery.
In our final project, we were to work collaboratively to produce a multimodal text best fit
to promote the Bellamy House and what it has to offer. While walking through the Bellamy
Mansion I could imagine the sounds, the smells, and the constant movement going on throughout
the house. It felt as if I was part of the history of the house itself. The goal of this project is to
use the many ideas, analyses, and theories found in multimodal texts that we have learned and
reflected on thus far to create an effective rhetorical work to benefit the museum by showing
When my group decided to create a promotional video for the mansion focusing on the
slave quarters, we anticipated using various forms of film grammar. These proponents of film
provide approaches that allow different variations when creating a video to express a story in the
best way. Film grammar is a detailed collaboration of camera techniques, editing processes, time
elements, sound effects, lighting positions, and more (Chandler). By using these techniques
effectively, a producer can tell the story to an audience using rhetorical properties.We intended
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on incorporating black and white cinematography to draw attention to the historical significance
of the site, specifically the slave dwellings. We also wanted to apply a voice over relaying a
script to further describe the highlights of the Bellamy. Once we began working on the project,
we discovered that neither of these things would've been useful in our final video. Despite this,
we did use various camera angles to show the grandeur and past prosperity of the Bellamy and
All in all, when we actually began to create our promotional video we discovered that our
primary vision was not what the video actually needed. The black and white cinematography was
not necessary, and the voice over would have offered too much information in a short amount of
time. By physically doing the project, we began to realize what was more appropriate. The
shortened text offered little information, but kept an audience intrigued and wanting to know
more. And the music in the background established a whimsical and magical environment that
history can sometimes create. The benefit of using music for rhetorical pull in multimodal
compositions is that it is something most people are familiar with, especially to establish tone
and atmosphere. The music we listen to is shaped by and shaping of our moods (McKee 343).
With these ideas in mind, we were able to adapt and create the video in a way that it suited it
The applied learning project in this class was beneficial in more ways than one. For one,
it offered students real life experience. This project forced us to look critically at what we had
learned and put it to good use for a real client. Secondly, it was beneficial for the Wilmington
community as well. This project allowed students to draw attention to a historical landmark
downtown that may get overlooked otherwise. And lastly, this project was beneficial for myself
as a professional writer. I was able to see what my strengths and weaknesses were both digitally
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and with written word. For one, I realized that I have the ability to teach myself how to use
various editing tools if I just allow myself the time and patience to do so. Also, I need to work
harder on trying to see visually. This project has proven to me that the written word is not the
only way to communicate ideas, and sometimes it is better to create a visual interpretation of it.
Learning when one thing is better than another is a weakness of mine that I anticipate working
on. But out of everything I have learned, being a digital composer is vital for any type of job
once college is over. Even though I have a background with writing, I can take these skills
Works Cited
Aristotle, and George A. Kennedy. On Rhetoric: A Theory of Civic Discourse. New York:
McKee, Heidi. Sound Matters: Notes toward the analysis and design of sound in multimodal
Porter, Jim. Why technology matters to writing: A cyberwriters tale. Computers and