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Ashtyn McDaniel

Christina Giarrusso
ENC 1101-0003
1st May, 2017
Artifact Reflection:
This artifact was the essay that I used in my application for Florida State. I made this
artifact because it was required to get into the school and the prompt was to tell your life story. I
made this article by recalling the important moments in my life, the ones that made me who I am.
I had to be very selective because there was a limit to how many words I could have. Some
things that I talked about in this essay are things I talked about in my projects for this class. Its
interesting to see how much my writing has grown in just one year. I am so much more
descriptive about the memories I am describing, and I am more focused on my target audience. I
also found that in this essay I tried to tone down some of the stories because I didnt want the
essay to be a complete sob fest. In project 1 for this class, I was able to be free and honest. When
writing this piece I went to three different English teachers to revise it because I wanted it to be
perfect. With most of the projects in this class, I was given advice from my peers instead until I
turned in my final or second draft. This artifact also ties into project 1 because I feel like this
essay is most of the reason I got into FSU.

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