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Candidate ID Number:
I grant permission for the School of Education to use my Teacher Work Sample as an exemplary
(outstanding) model for teacher candidate and university supervisor training purposes in the future. I
understand my name will remain on the document for proper credit.
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Description
A Teacher Work Sample (TWS) is designed to assess the impact of teacher candidates instruction on
students learning as well as provide evidence of candidates teaching performance during the
Student Teaching Experience. The TWS assignment includes the following tasks:
Format
Ownership: Complete the cover page verifying the TWS to be your own authentic work.
References and Credits: If you refer to another persons ideas or material (such as theorists), cite
these in a separate section at the end of the TWS under References and Credits. (APA is
recommended)
Font and Spacing: Use Arial size 12 font, double space all narrative portions, and print on both
sides.
Anonymity: Do not include the names of individual students, teachers, or staff as well as
participating schools in any part of the work sample in order to insure the anonymity of all involved.
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Task I: Professional Goal Setting (Goal Statement and Action Plan due week 2; Goal
Reflection due week 10).
Objective: Candidates set a professional goal, identify the action strategies they will use to achieve
that goal, and reflect on their learning and growth (as it relates to that goal) near the end of their
student teaching experience.
Resources: Candidates will use the NSU Conceptual Framework (see table below) as a guide for
determining their professional goal.
Knowledge of Self as an Respect and Concern for Students Knowledge of Self as an Individual
Individual recognizes the educators influence in the
lives of students and emphasizes the
importance of building trust relationships,
Commitment to Health and Safety and setting positive examples.
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Knowledge of Self as a Parent and Community Involvement Knowledge of Self as a Teacher and
Teacher and Member of a Member of a Learning Community calls for
Learning Community Commitment to Teaching a collaboration among teachers, students
and their families and communities that
Interpersonal Relations embraces diversity, promotes a positive
sense of personal identify, and enhances
Professional Growth and Development
the possibilities for academic success.
Knowledge of Pedagogy
Identify the specific Category Outcome you will use to determine your goal:
Based on the outcome you selected, write a specific goal for this experience. After your goal
statement, provide a brief narrative explaining the reasons as to why you chose this goal.
teaching.
changing. I have had little experience independently using technology in the classroom.
technology. I believe all types of learners can benefit from technology and therefore it is
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Describe the action plan (steps/strategies and resources) required to accomplish this goal:
The school provides each classroom with a Promethean Board placed at the
front of the classroom. My action plan is to incorporate technology in every lesson plan I
create and teach. I will prepare parts of my lessons to be presented from the
Promethean Board. I will use this technology to aide and guide my lessons as I teach.
Technology can spark interest in students and make lessons more exciting. As an
educator it is important to be up to date with technology and use it to its fullest potential.
Reflect on your progress/growth toward achieving this goal (this section due by week 10):
I successfully incorporated technology into all of the lesson plans. I have become more
confident with technology over the past 10 weeks. I have witnessed first hand how
Board to aide all of the lessons. I presented practice problems and story problems from
the Promethean board on a daily basis. It was great to be able to prepare the flipcharts
ahead of time for lessons at home. Students were able to interact with the guided
practice during my lessons because of the Promethean Board. I was able to make
flipcharts on the board that were colorful and inviting, catching the students attention. I
was able to learn extras the board had to offer; such as hiding question answers or
making them appear. The extras always got the students excited, engaged, and
anticipating questions and answers. I value my new knowledge of technology and cant
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Task II: Contextual Information (due week 2); see rubric for scoring details
Objective: Candidates gather contextual information and discuss factors that may influence the
teaching and learning process.
Resources: Use a variety of resources to gather contextual information including Census data for the
community, school Improvement Plan, cooperating teacher, Title I/SPED teachers, principal, school
counselor, Infinite Campus, student files (with administrative approval), school data available online.
http://doe.sd.gov/reportcard/listnew/
**The below information and resource is taken from Educational Testing Service Praxis Performance
Assessment for Teachers (PPAT) Candidate and Educator Handbook, copyright 2015. All rights reserved.
Contextual Information: This chart is designed to help you understand the many factors that affect teaching
and learning. Such factors include the community, classroom procedures, student demographics, and the
physical environment in which teaching takes place. Understanding these factors as they relate to your
teaching will help you determine the instructional strategies and approaches that will support your students
learning. In this chart, address any factors listed as they pertain to your teaching assignment. The
subcategories listed under each category are just suggestions; there may be other subcategories that you
would like to address, or there may be a subcategory listed that does not apply to your situation.
Math:
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Begin Geometry
Working with measurements, division,
multiplication, fractions, and decimals
Social Studies:
South Dakota History
Science:
Matter and its states, the Solar System,
Forms of Energy
Community Rural school district
(e.g., whether the area is urban, suburban, or rural;
Total Schools: 1
socioeconomic information; census data for the Population: 1,833
community) Estimated per capita income:
Approximately $21,500
Unemployed: 4.5%
Caucasian: 94.8%
District Rural school district
(e.g., enrollment; percent of students receiving free or
Enrollment: 587
reduced-priced lunches; graduation rates; ethnicities; % receiving Free or Reduced lunches:
percent of students with IEPs; percent of students who are 25.7%
ELLs; per-pupil expenditures) Graduation Rate: 97-100%
Ethnicities: 17.71%
Students on IEPs: 14%
ELL students: 0%
District Attendance Rate: 96.3%
School Enrollment Pre-K 12th grade: 587
(e.g., enrollment; percent of students receiving free or
reduced-priced lunches; ethnicities; percent of students % Receiving free or reduced lunches:
with IEPs; percent of students who are ELLs; teacher-to- 25.7%
student ratio)
Ethnicities:82.29% Caucasian, 42
students/17.71% Other (Native American,
Hispanic, Asian)
97% Caucasian
2% Native American
1% Other
Knowledge of Students 6 Total Title Students: Students are pulled
(in terms of the whole class and individual students)
for an hour a day to work with Title
teachers on Math and Reading
3 Students: Math and Reading
(e.g., language needs; approaches to learning; prior 2 Students: Reading
learning and experiences; academic 1 Student: Math
proficiencies/behavioral differences; areas of interest).
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To complete this task refer to the Common Lesson Plan Template. You will complete the Common
Lesson Plan Template (below) for 5 different lessons, 3 of which must be lessons that were observed
by your university supervisor.
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Teacher Candidate Emma Wik
Name:
PLANNING
List the Common Core/State Standard(s) to be addressed in this lesson:
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.L.4.2
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.L.4.2.a
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.L.4.2.b
Use commas and quotation marks to mark direct speech and quotations from a
text.
List the Learning Objective(s) to be addressed in this lesson. Use the following
format: Students will be able to
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Students will be able to use correct punctuation within their writing. Students will
List the words relevant to the content area that you will either introduce and/or
review during your lesson.
ASSESSMENT
Pre-Assessment: Describe the instrument or process you will use to measure
students level of understanding toward the learning objective(s) prior to teaching
the lesson.
I have attached my pre-assessment at the end of the lesson plan. The pre-
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assessment consists of four sentences that all contain one or more punctuation
errors. Students will be asked to find the errors and rewrite the sentences using
correct punctuation.
Create and insert a table/chart/graph that shows the pre-assessment data results.
(if applicable)
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Describe how the results of the pre-assessment (what the students have
demonstrated they know) will be used to design the lesson objectives, instruction,
and post-assessment.
I learned from grading the pre-assessment that each student has had some form
assessment was 6 out of 10. Four students scored 100%. Though the students
have had some prior practice with the punctuation, I witnessed a similar pattern of
mistakes while grading the pre-assessment. This helped me to know which rules of
Post-Assessment: APPENDIX: Include a blank copy of the lesson post-assessment you will
use to measure students level of understanding toward the learning objectives after teaching the
lesson.
APPENDIX: Include a copy of a Key/Product (completed by you, the teacher) which provides a model
of the desired outcome.
TECHNOLOGY
Describe the instructional and/or assistive technology that you plan to incorporate
into the lesson to enhance instruction and student learning.
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I will use the Promethean Board during my instruction. I will use it to present
Board will assist me with introducing new vocabulary and giving visual examples
ACCOMMODATIONS
Describe the accommodations/differentiation/modifications you will use to meet
the needs of all learners and accommodate differences in students learning,
culture, language, etc. * Be sure that these accommodations are based on what
you identified/described in your contextual information (Task II).
There are no significant accommodations for any students in my class as they are
not needed.
A students desk is placed at the front of the room for visual purposes. If I am
concerned about any other students hearing or visual needs I will be prepared to
make an accommodation.
MANAGEMENT
Identify the management and motivational strategies you will use to meet student
behavioral/developmental needs in order to keep students on task and actively engaged throughout
the lesson.
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During instruction I will watch for the engagement of each student. I will make
During the students independent work time I will be walking around answering
any questions.
I will be monitoring students work and making sure they are on task and working
efficiently.
I will also be monitoring their progress. If I see a student struggling I will give them
encouragement to move forward with their work. I will make myself available for
help or reminders the students may need on rules and concepts we have just
learned.
LESSON IMPLEMENTATION
I Do
Describe how you will activate student interest and present the learning objective
in an engaging way (this is your lesson opening).
asking the students to share examples they have seen or used in the past. (books,
I will present the slideshow I have developed introducing new vocabulary on the
Promethean Board.
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Describe how you will communicate (to students) how the objective is relevant to
their lives.
these examples on the Promethean Board. They will be able to visually see how
instruction. I will give students the support and guidance they need to
Describe how you will check for students understanding before moving on to
guided practice.
I will ask the students to remind me of the punctuation rules we just learned. We
We Do
Describe the learning activities you will use to provide students multiple opportunities to practice the
skills and content needed to meet the learning objective(s).
The students will be asked to turn to their desk buddy. (They are in pods of two.)
Every students will have a personal marker board and marker. Each student will
have a chance to say a few short sentences to their partner. The partner who is
listening will write down on their board what the other partner says. They will be
sure to use correct punctuation. We will take a few minutes to discuss the
experience.
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Describe how you will check for students understanding before moving on to independent practice.
I will review example questions on the Promethean Board before having the
see incorrectly and correctly punctuated sentences. We will go on the fix the
I will be sure to go over the instructions of the assignment to make sure the
You Do
Describe what the students will do to independently practice the knowledge and skills required by the
lesson objectives? (this is the post-assessment)
assessment/attached below)
Students will also be given a short assignment to complete out of their textbook.
To complete the assignments student will need to add quotation marks, commas, capital
Is your BLANK COPY of the post-assessment included at the end of this lesson
plan?
Lesson Closing
Describe how you will reemphasize the lesson objective and any skills/content that
were taught in an interactive manner (whole/small group, etc.).
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I will ask for students to give me examples of why punctuation is important.
I will ask the students to tell me the three main rules we just learned.
1. Quotation marks are the beginning and end of a persons exact words.
ANALYZE
(This portion may only be done after the post assessment is collected/scored.)
Describe the results of the Post-Assessment and be sure to address the following:
How the results of the post assessment highlight what areas of the lesson will
require re-teaching (if any).
If applicable, insert a table/chart/graph (below) that shows the post-assessment data results. If you
used the same document for both the pre and post assessments, it is strongly encouraged that you
show the comparison.
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Description:
assessment. 19 out of 24 students scored 100%. The rest of the students only
that were not taught within my lesson. Example: Dad said, Its a nice day out.
Students were missing the comma after Dad said. This was not a punctuation rule
covered in my lesson, but it is a rule students should have known. I will be sure to
REFLECT
List and describe two things you feel you did well to plan, implement, or assess instruction
(successes).
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questions before beginning their homework assignment. It was a great way to
marker boards kept the students active and focused during my lesson.
I feel that I did a better job of managing the classroom compared to past
experiences. In the past I have been concerned with myself and my own actions
during instruction. I felt that I was able to better manage what the students were
doing and focus less on my own actions. I was able to watch who needed help or
who was not paying attention, while also focusing on my own instruction. I felt
List and describe two things you feel were challenges during the planning, implementation and/or
assessment of the lesson.
I had technical difficulties during my lesson that I was not prepared for. My
slideshow was presented on the Promethean Board but would not register my
touch. I had to manually flip to the next slide by going over and hitting the arrow
I feel I could have given clearer instructions about the white board activity. I felt
prepared beforehand but noticed some of the students were confused. I had to
instructions clearer and the students would have felt less confused and ready to
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participate. We did not have much time to work with the white boards so it would
have been beneficial for me to have had more evident instructions from the
beginning.
List and describe two ideas for redesign you would make if you were to teach this lesson again.
I would have liked to give students more time for practice and sharing. It would
have been nice to hear from the students and given them more time to ask me
questions. I would have liked to have given them more time to work with their
white boards as well. We were crunched for time as they had a large assignment
due. If I would redesign my lesson and do it again I would account for more
practice and sharing with the white boards as I believe it is a great learning tool for
the students.
If I could redesign my lesson I would fit in time to review old punctuation rules.
None of the new punctuation rules were missed on the post-assessment but past
punctuation rules were. I could have prevented these errors by reviewing and
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Pre-Assessment/Post-Assessment
Name_____________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
4. We have been looking forward to this trip all year, Mom said.
____________________________________________________________
Pre-Assessment/Post-Assessment Key
Name_____________________
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Correct the punctuation errors in each sentence. Rewrite each
sentence on the lines given.
___ That will work out well for us, Dad answered.__________________
4. We have been looking forward to this trip all year, Mom said.
___ We have been looking forward to this trip all year, Mom
said.____
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Teacher Candidate Emma Wik
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Name:
Subject: Math
PLANNING
List the Common Core/State Standard(s) to be addressed in this lesson:
4.G.1
Draw points, lines, line segments, rays, angles (right, acute, obtuse), and
List the Learning Objective(s) to be addressed in this lesson. Use the following
format: Students will be able to
Students will be able to learn geometric terms to describe parts of lines and types
of angles.
Students are surrounded by angles in everyday life. Student will find importance in
learning about angles as they are used for navigation, architecture, and geometry.
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List the words relevant to the content area that you will either introduce and/or
review during your lesson.
ray, angle, right angle, acute angle, obtuse angle, straight angle
ASSESSMENT
Pre-Assessment: Describe the instrument or process you will use to measure
students level of understanding toward the learning objective(s) prior to teaching
the lesson.
I developed a pre-assessment that introduces the new vocabulary with its visual
match. Students will be instructed to draw a line from the vocabulary term to its
correct match. Terms include: straight angle, obtuse angle, ray, line segment, right
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(Recommended timeline is a minimum of two days prior to teaching your lesson).
Students will receive and complete their pre-assessment on Monday. I will teach
Create and insert a table/chart/graph that shows the pre-assessment data results.
(if applicable)
Description:
Describe how the results of the pre-assessment (what the students have
demonstrated they know) will be used to design the lesson objectives, instruction,
and post-assessment.
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According to the pre-assessment results, students had some background with the
geometric terms. Students were introduced to these terms last year in 3rd grade.
or more wrong. I will take note of students who missed a majority of the pre-
assessment and make sure they have clear understanding during my instruction. It
is clear to me which terms are more confusing than others. I will be sure to go over
Post-Assessment: APPENDIX: Include a blank copy of the lesson post-assessment you will
use to measure students level of understanding toward the learning objectives after teaching the
lesson.
APPENDIX: Include a copy of a Key/Product (completed by you, the teacher) which provides a model
of the desired outcome.
TECHNOLOGY
Describe the instructional and/or assistive technology that you plan to incorporate
into the lesson to enhance instruction and student learning.
I will have a slideshow prepared to bring up on the Promethean Board. I will have
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pictures of real life examples relating to the new terms. (example:
windmill=obtuse angle) As a class we will decide which term fits with each picture
and why.
ACCOMMODATIONS
Describe the accommodations/differentiation/modifications you will use to meet
the needs of all learners and accommodate differences in students learning,
culture, language, etc. * Be sure that these accommodations are based on what
you identified/described in your contextual information (Task II).
One student is specifically placed at the front of the room as they have a hard time
giving their full attention during instruction. When needed, nonverbal cues will be
A students desk is placed at the front of the room for visual purposes. If I am
concerned about any other students hearing or visual needs I will be prepared to
make accommodations.
MANAGEMENT
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Identify the management and motivational strategies you will use to meet student
behavioral/developmental needs in order to keep students on task and actively engaged
throughout the lesson.
During instruction I will watch for the engagement of each student. I will make
During the students independent work time I will be walking around answering
any questions.
I will be monitoring students work and making sure they are on task and working
efficiently.
I will also be monitoring their progress. If I see a student struggling I will give them
encouragement to move forward with their work. I will make myself available to
give help and reminders the students may need on rules and concepts we have
learned.
LESSON IMPLEMENTATION
I Do
Describe how you will activate student interest and present the learning objective
in an engaging way (this is your lesson opening).
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the students excited to learn when I explain that we will be finding real life
examples within our classroom. Students will also be excited when I tell them they
Describe how you will communicate (to students) how the objective is relevant to
their lives.
I will take time to explain to the students how the vocabulary words we are
learning are an introduction to geometry. I will mention how what we are learning
now will be the foundation to what they learn in future classes. I will state the
learning today for the rest of the year.(and into the future)
Students are in Piagets Concrete Operational Stage. I will consider the students
skill level and give them tasks suitable for this stage of development.
Describe how you will check for students understanding before moving on to
guided practice.
I will ask the students to draw each type of angle and line on their whiteboard. I
will check each student's answers/drawings and check for understanding. I will
make sure students have a clear understanding of the vocabulary before moving
on to guided practice.
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We Do
Describe the learning activities you will use to provide students multiple opportunities to
practice the skills and content needed to meet the learning objective(s).
I will make different types of angles with the large hands-on clock. As a class we
will decide which type of angles I make on the clock each time.
We will take time as a class to find each type of angle and line within our
classroom. Each student will have a chance to find a type of angle or line in the
classroom.
Describe how you will check for students understanding before moving on to independent
practice.
Finally, I will present my slideshow on the Promethean Board. Real life examples of
angles will be pictured. We will discuss each slide together as a class. I will check
for understanding and make sure each student is engaged before moving on to
independent practice.
You Do
Describe what the students will do to independently practice the knowledge and skills
required by the lesson objectives? (this is the post-assessment)
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Students will complete the post-assessment. This is the same as the pre-
assessment. Students will also complete questions 1-22 on pages 424 and 425 in
Is your BLANK COPY of the post-assessment included at the end of this lesson
plan?
Lesson Closing
Describe how you will reemphasize the lesson objective and any skills/content that
were taught in an interactive manner (whole/small group, etc.).
I will close my lesson by telling the students to go home and find angles and lines
in their own home. I will challenge the students to share what they have learned
today with their family at home. I will be sure to reemphasize the importance of
ANALYZE
(This portion may only be done after the post assessment is collected/scored.)
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Describe the results of the Post-Assessment and be sure to address the following:
How the results of the post assessment highlight what areas of the lesson will
require re-teaching (if any).
If applicable, insert a table/chart/graph (below) that shows the post-assessment data results.
If you used the same document for both the pre and post assessments, it is strongly
encouraged that you show the comparison.
Description:
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REFLECT
List and describe two things you feel you did well to plan, implement, or assess instruction
(successes).
the new vocabulary to show the students. I had real life examples that the
Students were engaged during my lesson. Students were able to be active during
the lesson by finding examples of angles and lines within the classroom. Students
were engaged as they were not simply listening to me but participating in the
lesson.
List and describe two things you feel were challenges during the planning, implementation
and/or assessment of the lesson.
I ran out of time to have every individual student share an example they found of
angles and lines within the classroom. Between sharing and discussing every
student was actively engaged but not every student was able to share a specific
example. It would have been nice to have more time to discuss items found in the
classroom.
I was faced with the challenge of students talking to their neighbors during my
instruction. The students were excited about the activities and began talking to
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before telling the students about the activities. I should have stated to the
students that they must listen quietly or they will not be participating in the
activities.
List and describe two ideas for redesign you would make if you were to teach this lesson
again.
If I could redesign my lesson I would have the students make angles and line types
with their bodies. Students would use teamwork and make the different types of
angles and lines on the floor. This would be a great way to get students actively
learning.
vocabulary. We verbally talked about the words and the students had the list of
words with their definitions in their textbooks. I would add to this and have a visual
slideshow. I would have the definitions with visuals next to them. It may be
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Teacher Candidate Emma Wik
Name:
Subject: LA/Phonics
PLANNING
List the Common Core/State Standard(s) to be addressed in this lesson:
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RF.4.3
Know and apply grade-level phonics and word analysis skills in decoding words.
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RF.4.3.a
patterns, and morphology (e.g., roots and affixes) to read accurately unfamiliar
List the Learning Objective(s) to be addressed in this lesson. Use the following
format: Students will be able to
Students will be able to spell words accurately applying grade- level phonics.
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Describe how the objective is relevant to students lives.
Students must have a clear understanding of phonics rules to further their development in
reading and spelling.
List the words relevant to the content area that you will either introduce and/or
review during your lesson.
ASSESSMENT
Pre-Assessment: Describe the instrument or process you will use to measure
students level of understanding toward the learning objective(s) prior to teaching
the lesson.
For the pre-assessment I will give the students a spelling test consisting of the
ornament, placement, torment, culture) All of the spelling words contain a phonics
rule or word ending that I will be teaching about during my instruction. The pre-
being covered.
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APPENDIX: Include a blank copy of the lesson pre-assessment. (if applicable)
Create and insert a table/chart/graph that shows the pre-assessment data results.
(if applicable)
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achieved a score of 8/10, while the remaining 5 received a score of 7/10.
Describe how the results of the pre-assessment (what the students have
demonstrated they know) will be used to design the lesson objectives, instruction,
and post-assessment.
Post-Assessment: APPENDIX: Include a blank copy of the lesson post-assessment you will
use to measure students level of understanding toward the learning objectives after teaching the
lesson.
APPENDIX: Include a copy of a Key/Product (completed by you, the teacher) which provides a model
of the desired outcome.
TECHNOLOGY
Describe the instructional and/or assistive technology that you plan to incorporate
into the lesson to enhance instruction and student learning.
I will have slides prepared to present on the Promethean Board. As students develop and
create words I will have them appear on the board. By doing this students will be able to
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check their work and visually see the correct way to spell each word.
ACCOMMODATIONS
Describe the accommodations/differentiation/modifications you will use to meet
the needs of all learners and accommodate differences in students learning,
culture, language, etc. * Be sure that these accommodations are based on what
you identified/described in your contextual information (Task II).
One student is specifically placed at the front of the room as they have a hard time
giving their full attention during instruction. When needed, nonverbal cues will be
A students desk is placed at the front of the room for visual purposes. If I am
concerned about any other students hearing or visual needs I will be prepared to
make accommodations.
MANAGEMENT
Identify the management and motivational strategies you will use to meet student
behavioral/developmental needs in order to keep students on task and actively engaged throughout
the lesson.
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During instruction I will watch for the engagement of each student. I will make
I will be monitoring each students work and making sure they are on task and
working efficiently.
I will also be monitoring their progress and watch for any students who are
struggling. I will make myself available to answer any questions and to clear up
any confusion.
LESSON IMPLEMENTATION
I Do
Describe how you will activate student interest and present the learning objective
in an engaging way (this is your lesson opening).
I will model the instructions for the work making game. I will make it clear to the students
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After the activity I will go over several phonics rules found in their list of words.
-Rhyming words
Describe how you will communicate (to students) how the objective is relevant to
their lives.
I will explain the importance of phonics and how it helps us decode and spell words.
Phonics is vital in the process of learning to spell and read the English language.
I will use Vygotskys Zone of Proximal Development and Scaffolding. I will give
students just enough instruction to get them started working independently on the
Describe how you will check for students understanding before moving on to
guided practice.
I will ask students to give me examples of words containing the phonics rules being
learned. By asking the students to give me example words not on their list I will be able to
see if the students are absorbing what is being taught and if they are ready to move
forward.
We Do
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Describe the learning activities you will use to provide students multiple opportunities to practice the
skills and content needed to meet the learning objective(s).
class. Students will be given ten paper letters. With these letters students will
make words using hints I give them as a class. By the end of the activity students
will have made 15 different words using the letters in front of them.
Describe how you will check for students understanding before moving on to independent practice.
Students will be asked to write down each word they make as they complete the activity.
(separate sheet of paper) Students will refer back to this list when the activity is over. As a
class we will discuss phonics rules, patterns, rhyming, and word endings found in the list
words.
I will check for understanding by having the students write similar words using the same
phonics rules as the list words. (students will use personal white boards)
You Do
Describe what the students will do to independently practice the knowledge and skills required by the
lesson objectives? (this is the post-assessment)
Students will complete a spelling test using words they have made and practiced
in the lesson and activity. This post-assessment will give me a clear view on what
phonics rules and patterns need more practice and which rules and patterns
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Is your BLANK COPY of the post-assessment included at the end of this lesson
plan?
Lesson Closing
Describe how you will reemphasize the lesson objective and any skills/content that
were taught in an interactive manner (whole/small group, etc.).
I will take a few moments to discuss the test. I will do a quick overview of the
lesson and the lesson objective. I will give students a chance to comment and ask
questions over the lesson. I will reemphasize the importance and purpose of
ANALYZE
(This portion may only be done after the post assessment is collected/scored.)
Describe the results of the Post-Assessment and be sure to address the following:
How the results of the post assessment highlight what areas of the lesson will
require re-teaching (if any).
If applicable, insert a table/chart/graph (below) that shows the post-assessment data results. If you
used the same document for both the pre and post assessments, it is strongly encouraged that you
show the comparison.
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Students showed significant improvement from the pre-assessment to the post-
students scored 9/10. Alls students showed improvement in the content area.
REFLECT
List and describe two things you feel you did well to plan, implement, or assess instruction
(successes).
I believe I had great examples and models of the content. Students were able to visually
see correct answers and spelling words on the Promethean Board. Students were actively
I believe my communication skills were good. I spoke with a confident voice and
explained instructions clearly. Students knew exactly what was expected of them when it
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came time for the activity and independent work.
List and describe two things you feel were challenges during the planning, implementation and/or
assessment of the lesson.
I felt like I had to rush the end of my lesson. I was running out of time and crunched the
Materials could have been distributed more efficiently. There was slight chaos when
retrieving white boards from the back room and cutting out letters for the activity. I could
have had a better plan when it came to the distribution of the materials. For example, I
could have handed the white boards out before the students entered the classroom. Doing
List and describe two ideas for redesign you would make if you were to teach this lesson again.
If I could redesign my lesson I would break it up into two sections. I would have the
students do the activity earlier in the day and complete the lesson at a later time.
The activity took more time than I anticipated. We were rushed for time and I
could not go into detail on sections I normally would during the lesson. I wish I
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done. It would have been great to have enough time to pull a story from their
reading book and go through it finding words that fit the phonics rules we cover.
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Teacher Candidate Emma Wik
Name:
Date: 4/7/2017
PLANNING
List the Common Core/State Standard(s) to be addressed in this lesson:
4.H.4.1 Explain probable causes and effects of events and developments in South
Dakota 4.H.4.2 Explain factors affecting the growth and expansion of South Dakota
List the Learning Objective(s) to be addressed in this lesson. Use the following
format: Students will be able to
Students will be able to tell about the growth of South Dakota through fur trade and the
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Students will be able to tell about conflict, war, and treaties between the Native
It is important for students to know the history of the state they are living in.
Everything we have today was developed through events in the past. Students
should be able to know and tell about how their way of life came to be.
List the words relevant to the content area that you will either introduce and/or
review during your lesson.
Pierre, Yankton, Battle of Little Bighorn-Custer, Fort Pierre, Manuel Lisa, Fur
Traders, John B.S. Todd, Red Cloud, Struck-by-the-Ree, Treaty of 1868, Pony
ASSESSMENT
Pre-Assessment: Describe the instrument or process you will use to measure
students level of understanding toward the learning objective(s) prior to teaching
the lesson.
I have set up learning targets to discuss with the students before beginning the
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Unit. (attached at end) Each students will have their own sheet.
We will go over each target individually and students will check Green, Yellow, or
Red on their target sheets based on their own understanding. (Example Target: I
can tell about Dakota Territory's Pony Congress and the debate over the location of
the capital.)
Students will mark green for high understanding, yellow for moderate, and Red for
no understanding of the target. I will check for understanding based on how the
I will go over the learning targets I have prepared with my students the day before
I present the unit.
Create and insert a table/chart/graph that shows the pre-assessment data results.
(if applicable)
Describe how the results of the pre-assessment (what the students have
demonstrated they know) will be used to design the lesson objectives, instruction,
and post-assessment.
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85% of the students marked either red or yellow on all of their learning targets. All
areas of the unit need to be clarified and covered.I will take into account all
Post-Assessment: APPENDIX: Include a blank copy of the lesson post-assessment you will
use to measure students level of understanding toward the learning objectives after teaching the
lesson.
APPENDIX: Include a copy of a Key/Product (completed by you, the teacher) which provides a model
of the desired outcome.
TECHNOLOGY
Describe the instructional and/or assistive technology that you plan to incorporate
into the lesson to enhance instruction and student learning.
will be presenting Unit 4 from the website. I will use the Promethean Board to
present my lesson along with pictures of places, people, and objects we are
learning about.
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ACCOMMODATIONS
Describe the accommodations/differentiation/modifications you will use to meet
the needs of all learners and accommodate differences in students learning,
culture, language, etc. * Be sure that these accommodations are based on what
you identified/described in your contextual information (Task II).
One student is specifically placed at the front of the room as they have a hard time
giving their full attention during instruction. When needed, nonverbal cues will be
A students desk is placed at the front of the room for visual purposes. If I am
concerned about any other students hearing or visual needs I will be prepared to
make accommodations.
MANAGEMENT
Identify the management and motivational strategies you will use to meet student
behavioral/developmental needs in order to keep students on task and actively engaged
throughout the lesson.
During instruction I will watch for the engagement of each student. I will make
I will be monitoring each students work and making sure they are on task and
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working efficiently.
I will also be monitoring their progress and watch for any students who are
struggling. I will make myself available to answer any questions and to clear up
any confusion.
LESSON IMPLEMENTATION
I Do
Describe how you will activate student interest and present the learning objective
in an engaging way (this is your lesson opening).
I will activate the students interests by asking about experiences students have
had regarding our state and its history. (example: visiting Mt. Rushmore, the
Badlands) I will get the students interested by explaining how we will be learning
about important people and events from our states history and the impact they
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Describe how you will communicate (to students) how the objective is relevant to
their lives.
understanding events from the past and how they have impacted our lives today.
Describe how you will check for students understanding before moving on to
guided practice.
In a discussion format I will have students review and answer questions over the
content learned. I will make sure every students has an understanding of the
We Do
Describe the learning activities you will use to provide students multiple opportunities to
practice the skills and content needed to meet the learning objective(s).
After reading about all the events that took place in South Dakota we will take
some time to talk about the major changes. (Examples: scarce buffalo, adding
towns)
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After discussing these changes we will take time as a class to develop a map
showing before and after the changes took place. Each student will have a piece of
paper; they will fold their paper in half and use one half to draw and color a map
of South Dakota before White settlers came. Students will use the other half to
draw and color a map including all of the changes that took place in South Dakota
after white settlers came. We will complete the maps step by step as a class.
Describe how you will check for students understanding before moving on to independent
practice.
Students are responsible for completing and including each step we go through as
a class on their map. I will check each student's map before allowing them to
move into independent practice. I will be checking the maps for neatness and
completion.
You Do
Describe what the students will do to independently practice the knowledge and skills
required by the lesson objectives? (this is the post-assessment)
Students will be completing a test for independent practice. I have attached the
test below.
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Is your BLANK COPY of the post-assessment included at the end of this lesson
plan?
Lesson Closing
Describe how you will reemphasize the lesson objective and any skills/content that
were taught in an interactive manner (whole/small group, etc.).
I will remind the students of the importance of knowing our state's history. We
should take pride in our history and where we are from. It is important for us to be
able to answer questions other people may have about our state and its history.
I will leave time for any questions or comments over the test.
ANALYZE
(This portion may only be done after the post assessment is collected/scored.)
Describe the results of the Post-Assessment and be sure to address the following:
How the results of the post assessment highlight what areas of the lesson will
require re-teaching (if any).
If applicable, insert a table/chart/graph (below) that shows the post-assessment data results. If you
used the same document for both the pre and post assessments, it is strongly encouraged that you
show the comparison.
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Description:
they had gained a tremendous amount of knowledge and understanding over the
content from their pre to post- assessment. 29% of the students received 100% on
their test. 34% of the students only made one mistake on their test, giving them a
score of 17 out of 18. All students passed and showed great evidence of
understanding.
REFLECT
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List and describe two things you feel you did well to plan, implement, or assess instruction
(successes).
cues with a few students during my instruction. Students picked up on these cues
and the instruction flowed smoothly. I was quick to adjust my teaching and
manage students who blurted or disrupted the class at some point during my
instruction.
I feel that I did a good job of using formative and summative assessment during
and artwork. I observed and graded students in a variety of ways. This left the
students with many chances to prove to me that they had acquired the content.
List and describe two things you feel were challenges during the planning, implementation and/or
assessment of the lesson.
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There was a large amount of group and class reading required for the unit. It was
hard to keep all 24 of the students focused during the reading time. Eyes often
wandered and many students had to be reminded to focus at some point during
instruction. It was challenging to keep students engaged during this portion of the
lesson.
have done better in engaging the students to participate in discussion and share
their thoughts and views. All students were listening during this time but not all
students shared in the actual discussion. I should have had specific guidelines for
List and describe two ideas for redesign you would make if you were to teach this lesson
again.
Looking back at my lesson I believe it would have been beneficial for students to
complete their maps independently rather than as a class. I would have been able
to evaluate each student and their results. It would have been a great constructive
thinking activity for the students as they would have developed their own ideas to
complete the map. I could have developed another activity to replace the map for
guided practice.
Although pictures were available online with the unit, it would have been great to
have some artifacts or pictures for the students to handle at their seats. If I could
redesign my lesson I would gather extra pictures and artifacts to share with the
class as we go through the reading section of the unit. Pictures and artifacts would
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have been a great way to keep the students attentive and focused as well.
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Pre and Post- Assessments
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Teacher Candidate Emma Wik
Name:
Subject: Math
Date: 4-21-2017
PLANNING
List the Common Core/State Standard(s) to be addressed in this lesson:
List the Learning Objective(s) to be addressed in this lesson. Use the following
format: Students will be able to
Rounding and place value are a skills necessary for everyday life.
List the words relevant to the content area that you will either introduce and/or
review during your lesson.
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Rounding
Whole number
Digit
Place Value
Decimals
Promethean Board
Paper/Pencil
ASSESSMENT
Pre-Assessment: Describe the instrument or process you will use to measure
students level of understanding toward the learning objective(s) prior to teaching
the lesson.
first 6 problems the students have to round each number to the place of the
underlined digit. There are 2 story problems that both ask the students to answer
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Through the variety of questions on the pre-assessment I will be able to thoroughly
see the skills and concepts that need extra attention during my instruction time.
Create and insert a table/chart/graph that shows the pre-assessment data results.
(if applicable)
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Describe how the results of the pre-assessment (what the students have
demonstrated they know) will be used to design the lesson objectives, instruction,
and post-assessment.
common errors on the pre-assessment. I will be sure to cover the mistakes made
Post-Assessment: APPENDIX: Include a blank copy of the lesson post-assessment you will
use to measure students level of understanding toward the learning objectives after teaching the
lesson.
APPENDIX: Include a copy of a Key/Product (completed by you, the teacher) which provides a model
of the desired outcome.
TECHNOLOGY
Describe the instructional and/or assistive technology that you plan to incorporate
into the lesson to enhance instruction and student learning.
I will be using the Promethean Board to assist my instruction. I have a flip chart
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prepared with practice and example problems to practice as a class. For guided
practice students will answer the practice problems on their individual white
boards.
ACCOMMODATIONS
Describe the accommodations/differentiation/modifications you will use to meet
the needs of all learners and accommodate differences in students learning,
culture, language, etc. * Be sure that these accommodations are based on what
you identified/described in your contextual information (Task II).
One student is specifically placed at the front of the room as they have a hard time
giving their full attention during instruction. When needed, nonverbal cues will be
A students desk is placed at the front of the room for visual purposes. If I am
concerned about any other students hearing or visual needs I will be prepared to
make accommodations.
MANAGEMENT
Identify the management and motivational strategies you will use to meet student
behavioral/developmental needs in order to keep students on task and actively engaged throughout
the lesson.
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During instruction I will watch for the engagement of each student. I will make
I will be monitoring each students work and making sure they are on task and
working efficiently.
I will also be monitoring their progress and watch for any students who are
struggling. I will make myself available to answer any questions and to clear up
any confusion.
LESSON IMPLEMENTATION
I Do
Describe how you will activate student interest and present the learning objective
in an engaging way (this is your lesson opening).
I will begin my lesson by asking the students if they are familiar with rounding
decimals. I will remind the students that we cover the topic briefly earlier in the
Describe how you will communicate (to students) how the objective is relevant to
their lives.
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The skill of rounding decimals is used in everyday life.I will discuss with the
students how we most commonly round decimals when estimating and using
mental math.
instruction. I will give students the support and guidance they need to
Describe how you will check for students understanding before moving on to
guided practice.
As a class we will discuss place value and rules of rounding numbers. (example: 5
I will know through discussion if students are ready to move on to guided practice
We Do
Describe the learning activities you will use to provide students multiple opportunities to
practice the skills and content needed to meet the learning objective(s).
I will present my flip chart on the promethean board. The flip chart consists of a
variety of practice questions related to the lesson. The students will have a chance
students have had time to develop an answer we will discuss the correct answer
as a class.
Describe how you will check for students understanding before moving on to independent
practice.
I will be checking each student's practice question answers. I will make corrections
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where they are needed. I will be prepared with extra practice problems if I feel
You Do
Describe what the students will do to independently practice the knowledge and skills required by the
lesson objectives? (this is the post-assessment)
assessment/attached at end)
Students will also be completing 28 math problems located in their text book on
Is your BLANK COPY of the post-assessment included at the end of this lesson
plan?
Lesson Closing
Describe how you will reemphasize the lesson objective and any skills/content that
were taught in an interactive manner (whole/small group, etc.).
I will leave time for any questions or comments the students may have.
I will reemphasize the importance of rounding decimals and how it can make math
I will also mark the importance of knowing how to round decimals for future math
concepts.
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ANALYZE
(This portion may only be done after the post assessment is collected/scored.)
Describe the results of the Post-Assessment and be sure to address the following:
How the results of the post assessment highlight what areas of the lesson will
require re-teaching (if any).
If applicable, insert a table/chart/graph (below) that shows the post-assessment data results. If you
used the same document for both the pre and post assessments, it is strongly encouraged that you
show the comparison.
Description:
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the post-assessment. 18 of the 24 students scored 100% on the post-assessment.
The other 6 students only received 1 wrong on their post-assessment. All students
REFLECT
List and describe two things you feel you did well to plan, implement, or assess instruction
(successes).
I feel that I did a great job of implementing active learning into my lesson.
Students were engaged in their learning as they used their white boards and
answered practice questions. Students had the chance to be involved and figure
way. Instructions for guided practice and independent practice were clear.
Students did not feel overwhelmed and had plenty of time to complete their
independent work.
List and describe two things you feel were challenges during the planning, implementation and/or
assessment of the lesson.
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I believe I could have done a better job of adapting. There were a few unforeseen
questions I received from the students. I adapted my lesson to these questions but
I wish I would have given the students more time to work on the guided practice
problems. Looking back I felt rushed and did not give the students as much time
as I should have to work out the guided practice problems on their white boards. I
need to work on slowing down my instruction even when I feel rushed for time.
List and describe two ideas for redesign you would make if you were to teach this lesson again.
If I could redesign my lesson I would have the students work in partners and
develop practice problems with a key. Students would be able to share the practice
rounding, but a large amount of the students homework was story problems
only know how to round a decimal but round a decimal in a story problem setting.
Story problems relate the math concept to real life situations. I should have used
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Pre-Assessment
Name____Key__________
Rounding Decimals
1. 23.7 = 24
2. 23.2 = 23
3. 22.4 =22
4. 457.02 =457
5. 444.799 = 44.8
6. 97.225 = 97.23
7-8. To round 64.81 to the nearest tenth which digit do you look at? What is 64.81
rounded to the nearest tenth?
The 1 in 64.81 and 64.8
9-10. The tallest giraffe in the zoo measured 17.45 feet. Round 17.45 feet to the
nearest whole number and to the nearest tenth place.
18 AND 17.5
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Teacher Work Sample Scoring Rubric
Student Teaching
4 3 2 Needs Work
Candidate identifies one Candidate identifies one Candidates identifies one Candidate does not
well-planned goal and goal and communicates goal but does not identify a well-planned
effectively communicates reasons/justifications for why adequately provide goal nor provide a reason
reasons/justifications for why s/he chose the goal. reasons/justifications for for the selection of the
s/he chose the goal. the selection of the goal. goal.
Candidate provides an
Candidate provides an Candidate does not
Candidate provides a action plan for the
action plan for the provide an action plan for
detailed action plan for the achievement of the goal and
achievement of the goal the achievement of the
achievement of the goal and cites resources s/he will use but needs to work to goal.
Professional Goal cites any specific resources to enhance goal develop a more specific
Setting and Reflection s/he will use to enhance goal achievement efforts. list of resources to be
achievement efforts. used for achievement of
that goal. Candidate is not clearly
able to reflect on his/her
Candidate effectively performance in the area
Candidate is highly effective communicates any of goal
at communicating any progress/growth made Candidates reflection on setting/achievement.
progress/growth made toward the goal in the goal achievement is
toward the goal in the reflection. minimal and needs
reflection. development.
4 3 2 Needs Work
Candidate clearly identifies Candidate identifies several Candidate identifies very Candidate does not
numerous contextual factors contextual factors contextual few contextual factors identify the contextual
which may impact the factors which may impact which prohibits his/her factors.
instructional strategies, the strategies, approaches, ability to fully recognize
approaches, and and assessments used to any impact those factors
Contextual Factors assessments used to support support their students would have had on
their students learning. learning. potential strategies,
approaches, and
assessments used to
support their students
learning.
4 3 2 Needs Work
All lessons contains Most lessons contains Lessons contain minimal Lessons contain no
evidence of setting evidence of setting evidence of setting evidence of setting
measurable objectives that measurable objectives that measurable objectives measurable objectives
are clearly aligned with are aligned with specific that are only somewhat and are not aligned with
specific state and/or national state and/or national aligned with specific specific state and/or
standard(s). standard(s). state and/or national national standard(s).
standard(s).
Lessons allow for numerous Lessons allow for Lessons allow for no
Standards/Objective connections across the connections across the Lessons allow for very apparent connections
s curriculum which serve to curriculum which serve to few connections across across the curriculum;
build understanding, and build understanding, and the curriculum which do students are not able to
encourage application to real encourage application to real not build understanding, build an understanding or
world issues. world issues. nor encourage apply to real world issues.
application to real world
issues.
Purposefully and consistently Incorporates the use of Is still developing the Does not incorporate the
incorporates the use of available technology to ability to incorporate the use of available
available technology to somewhat enhance use of available technology to enhance
further enhance instruction in instruction in ways that technology to enhance instruction nor provide an
ways that authentically engage most of the students instruction in ways that explanation for why
engage all students in the in the learning experience. engage the students in technology is not utilized.
Technology learning experience. For For cases where technology the learning experience.
cases where technology is is not utilized, candidate For cases where
not utilized, candidate provides an explanation. technology is not utilized,
provides a logical candidate provides an
explanation. explanation.
Purposefully adjusts Adjusts instruction during Attempts to adjust Does not adjust
instruction during lesson lesson planning and instruction during lesson instruction during lesson
planning and implementation implementation in order to planning and planning and
in order to significantly meet meet some of the identified implementation but the implementation in order to
Differentiation, all of the identified needs of needs of individuals, small differentiated instruction, meet the identified needs
Accommodations, individuals, small groups or groups or the class by accommodations and of individuals, small
and Modifications the class by including including general methods of modifications used do groups or the class. No
specific methods of differentiation, not fully meet the differentiation,
differentiation, accommodations and identified needs of accommodations and
accommodations and modifications. individuals, small groups modifications present.
modifications. or the class.
Lesson Purposefully activates Activates student interest by Attempts to activate There are no clear
student interest by including an student interest but attempts to activate
Implementation
consistently including a effective/engaging needs to work to develop student interest.
(I Do/We Do/You Do) highly-effective/engaging introduction and closing. a more effective lesson Candidate does not
introduction and closing. opening and closing. include evidence of an
effective opening and/or
closing.
Introduces and reinforces
Effectively introduces and the learning objective(s) so Needs to be more
repeatedly reinforces the that students are cognizant purposeful about
learning objective(s) so that of expected outcomes. introducing and Learning objective is not
students are cognizant of reinforcing the learning reinforced throughout the
expected outcomes. objective so that the lesson.
students are cognizant of
Presents all content in a expected outcomes. Content is not presented
sequential manner and in a sequential manner
Presents all content in a provides opportunities for and candidate does not
sequential manner and modeling and practicing the provide evidence of
provides numerous skills and content needed to Content is not always allowing opportunities for
opportunities for modeling meet the learning presented in a sequential modeling and practicing
and practicing the skills and objective(s). manner and candidate the skills and content
content needed to meet the needs to provide more needed to meet the
learning objective(s). opportunities for learning objective(s).
modeling and practicing
Checks for student the skills and content
understanding throughout needed to meet the
Consistently checks for most of the lesson cycle and learning objective(s). Candidate does not check
student understanding provides evidence of re- for student understanding
throughout the entire lesson teaching/remediation where throughout the lesson
cycle and provides detailed necessary. cycle and there is no
evidence of re- Checks for student evidence of re-teaching
teaching/remediation where understanding /remediation.
necessary. throughout most of the
Includes reasons for why the lesson cycle and
instructional strategies and provides little evidence of
learning activities chosen for re-teaching/remediation Does not includes
Includes numerous detailed the lessons are where necessary. reasons for why the
reasons for why the developmentally appropriate instructional strategies
instructional strategies and (claims are somewhat and learning activities
learning activities chosen for supported by relevant chosen for the lessons
the lessons are theory/research that is Includes reasons for why are developmentally
developmentally appropriate cited). the instructional appropriate (claims are
(claims are supported by strategies and learning not at all supported by
relevant theory/research that activities chosen for the relevant theory/research
is clearly cited). lessons are nor sufficiently cited).
developmentally
appropriate (claims are
not sufficiently supported
by relevant
theory/research nor
sufficiently cited).
Identifies, describes, and Identifies, describes, and Identifies, describes, and Fails to adequately
explains more than two explains two successful explains only one identify, describe, or
relevant successful teaching teaching strategies and/or successful teaching explain successful
Lesson Reflection: teaching strategies and
strategies and provides provides supporting strategy and/or provides
Successes detailed supporting evidence evidence for why they were only minimal supporting provides no supporting
for why they were effective. effective. evidence for why it was evidence.
effective.
Identifies and describes Identifies and describes two Identifies and describes Fails to adequately
more than two challenges challenges encountered only one challenge identify, describe, or
Lesson Reflection: encountered throughout throughout the lesson. encountered throughout explain challenges
Challenges lesson. the lesson. encountered throughout
lesson.
Identifies and describes Identifies and describes two Identifies and describes Fails to identify and
more than two significant ideas for redesigning the one idea for redesigning describe an idea for
Lesson Reflection: ideas for redesigning the lesson and provides details the lesson and provides redesigning the lesson
Improvements lesson and provides full to support the redesign. very minimal details to and/or provides no details
details to support the support the redesign. to support the redesign.
redesign.
4 3 2 Needs Work
1
Content Organization: Content Organization: Content Organization: Content Organization:
All formatting requirements All formatting requirements Most formatting Few formatting
followed: (Cover page, followed: (Cover page, requirements followed: requirements were
references/credits, font and references/credits, font and followed: (Cover page,
spacing, anonymity) spacing, anonymity) (Cover page, references/credits, font
references/credits, font and spacing, anonymity)
and spacing, anonymity)
Writing has very few errors in Writing has only occasional Writing has frequent Writing has numerous
spelling, grammar, errors in spelling, grammar, errors in spelling, errors in spelling,
punctuation, and/or sentence punctuation, and/or grammar, punctuation, grammar, punctuation,
structure. sentence structure, but does and/or sentence and/or sentence
not significantly detract from structure, and this structure, errors which
overall quality. somewhat detracts from significantly detract from
overall quality. overall quality.
Professionally written, high- Adequately written, average Writing and quality of Poorly written, low-quality
quality paper. quality paper. paper are in paper. Resubmission
development but required.
resubmission is not
required.