ENGL107-017

Liuyun Liang
Project 2 Peer Review for TK Chen

Prompt: 7
Yes. In my opinion, TK answers the assignment prompt very well. When I read his article, I
felt like I was walking into a new world. By reading his essay, I knew more information about
the Cherokee community, who was recognized as a tribal government. And his writing is exact
and formal, which makes him look like a reporter. Whats more, the profile portrays a specific
perspective of community, which is a painting portrait of the Cherokee. Because of that portray, I
know the appearance of the Cherokee. In addition, the whole essay only focuses on the Cherokee
community.

Research: 6
The information from research & interviews is really effectively integrated, and the research
enhances the individuals perspective of the Cherokee, which also provides helpful information,
so the information can enhance the writing. Because before reading his essay, I have no ideas
about the Cherokee community. As I read more descriptive words about the Cherokee
community, I know more information about it. Such as the appearance, the living environment,
the lifestyle. However, I think it can be more detailed.

Context: 6
The contextual information is sufficient for audiences to understand the individuals
community. However, I am still wondering about the influence about the Cherokee community.
Also, the profile and community essay are clearly related, which shows me the appearance of the
Cherokee community. Furthermore, in his essay, he introduces the Cherokee community really
detailed, so the writing provides lots of helpful information to readers to understand the
Cherokee, which is a strange community for them. Whats more, there is a really clear
connection between the community essay and the profile, which both focus on the Cherokee
community.

Organization: 6
The information is TKs essay is focused and organized. However, in my opinion, I suggest
that he should delete some context of the signification of the community. Even though the
Cherokee community was a little hard for audiences to understand, he introduced it in an
engaging way. And I think the organization is suitable for this situation and the connections
between all ideas are really clear.

Conventions: 7
The profile and community follow the genre conventions. Also the writing is revised to be
clear and precise. And I think his writing is cohesive. By reading his essay, I understand the
appearance, the life of Cherokee community.

Citation: 7
All information in the essay is accurately cited. The all in-text citations and the Works Cited
page follow the MLA format.
Total Points: 39/42