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Professor Cooper
ENG 102-005
1/30/2017
Essay 1 outline
Thesis: Although many women like Cleofilas are clearly not feminists from their
backgrounds, most observe or visit a feminine perspective through their struggles to support
their families.
P1 Cleofilas thinks her neighbors lives are awful in the beginning because they dont have
husbands but then her viewpoint is changed the further she gets into her awful marriage.
A. They were too busy remembering the men who had left through either choice or by
moved on and choose to forget her missing husband almost to the point like he never
even existed. She carried on, on her own perfectly happy of being free from a man.
C. She thought their lives were sad and unfulfilling
P2 Husband is not home or paying attention to them so they have to make do and convince
themselves that its ok that they are practically an independent woman even though they are
married.
A. Women have to give themselves pep talks to continue on in their daily lives
B. this man, this father, this rival, this keeper, this lord, this master, this husband till
widow.
P3 When a womans husband is not home or paying attention to them, such as Cleofilass
situation, they make due and convince themselves that its ok that they are practically an
telenovelas.
B. A doubt. Slender as a hair. (224)
C. She realizes that shes not happy, that shes afraid for herself and her babys
Professor Cooper
ENG 102-005
1/30/2017
In todays society, women are commonly called feminists despite the woman not calling
herself a feminist. Cleofilas background makes her have a view point of your husband is
supposed to take care you. That you are to find a good man who has a good job to provide for
you and the wifes job is to stay home and provide him with many children. I wouldnt classify
Cleofilas as a feminist because its her cultural background that held her back from her finding
herself as her own independent person. Although many women like Cleofilas are clearly not
feminists from their backgrounds, most observe or visit a feminine perspective through their
Cleofilas thinks her neighbors lives are awful in the beginning because they dont have
husbands but then her viewpoint is changed the further she gets into her awful marriage. They
were too busy remembering the men who had left through either choice or by circumstance, and
would never come back. (222), is what Cleofilas thought of her single neighbors in the
beginning. She thought their lives were sad and unfulfilling. Dolores mourned but never
remarried and did her own thing with her garden. Soledad moved on and choose to forget her
missing husband almost to the point like he never even existed. She carried on, on her own
perfectly happy of being free from a man. Her two neighbors are very different women but both
are independent with no man to provide or hold them back from being themselves, which some
Even though Cleofilas is a married woman she soon realizes that she is practically a
widow because her husband is never around for the majority of the day. She is left on her own to
fend for herself and the baby until he comes home, usually buzzed from going to the bar, and
they go to bed with barely a word unless he yells at her for doing something wrong. Women have
to give themselves pep talks to continue on in their daily lives. this man, this father, this
rival, this keeper, this lord, this master, this husband till kingdom come. (224), this is how
Cleofilass culture has brainwashed her. Cleofilas had to reassure herself every day that life was
fine and it was ok that she was at home all alone with the baby while her husband was at work all
day and sometimes didnt come home. Cleofilas begins to wonder about her neighbors not
having husbands but they are still living their lives. She spends time with her neighbors and
learns about what its like to not have to answer to a man or take care of a man. Cleofilas begins
to want that for herself because thats what shes practically doing now.
When a womans husband is not home or paying attention to them, such as Cleofilass
situation, they make due and convince themselves that its ok that they are practically an
independent woman even though they are married. A doubt. Slender as a hair. (224), is when
Cleofilass world begins to crumble, when she begins to question everything shes ever believed
because of the telenovelas. This is what some would consider a feminist point of view of wanting
to take control of their own lives without the dictation of a husband. Cleofilas realizes that shes
the backbone of the household even though its her husband that brings home the money. She
realizes that shes not happy, that shes afraid for herself and her babys safety, so she decides to
leave. This can be considered the most feminist thing Cleofilas has done and may possibly will
ever do.
Feminists today are given a bad name because most assume that being a feminist is all
about just women. Cleofilas wanted to be her own person but still have a husband and a happy
life until she realized that her husband was not the man to live a happy life with. A true feminist
is wants both sexes to be equal. Cleofilas didnt fight for herself until she decided to leave. In
Cleofilass life, men are the money makers and woman are the home makers. I dont consider
Cleofilas to be a feminist because she pitied her neighbors, tried to convince herself everything
was fine, and then left for her babys safety more than anything.
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