Name: __________________

Date: ___________________
Class: __________________
Period: _________________
Peer Feedback: Short Story Papers (Draft 2)

Pass this worksheet and your 1st draft to the left. Dont forget to put your name at the top.

Peer Name: ________________

1. Format: Does this paper include: (Make a check mark in areas that are complete)

Length: 4-6 Pages

Heading
o Name
o Date
o Class
o Period
Title
MLA Format
Double Spaced
1 Inch Margins
12 Point Font
Black text
Last name and page number in top right corner
Works cited page if necessary

Comments/Questions/Feedback:

Peer Name: ________________

2. Conventions (Mark errors): Does this paper include: (Make a check mark in areas that are
complete)

Spelling
Grammar
Punctuation
Standard English

Comments/Questions/Feedback:
Peer Name: ________________

Which section would you like your peer #3 to review? (Choose one of three)

1. Organization: Does this paper include: (Make a check mark in areas that are complete)

a narrative arc that is readily identifiable?

o Exposition
o Rising action
o Climax
o Falling action
o Resolution

2. Narrative Development: Does this paper include: (Make a check mark in areas that are complete)

Well development narration

o Setting
o Plot
o Character
o Conflict
o Theme
o Dialogue

3. Detail and Clarity: Does this paper include: (Make a check mark in areas that are complete)

Point of view is clear (1st or 3rd)

Word choice establishes
o Tone
o Imagery
o Theme
Sensory language is used in order to show, rather than tell

Section _____ Comments/Questions/Feedback: