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For the past couple of years at El Dorado High School, I have had the privilege of hosting our
high school pep rallies, and have developed morals and understandings that will stick with me
forever. Standing and addressing my entire school, including my peers, can take quite a toll on
the nerves, and any minor mishap or accidental mistake can easily lead to a long time of
embarrassment or trauma. This year, however, I began to recognize the advantages I had with
this significant responsibility. I realized that I had the opportunity to hold the attention of all of my
peers and even more importantly, entertain them. With my schools recent issue regarding
discrimination and bullying, I decided to take action by delivering a speech during our big
Homecoming rally that would hopefully inspire the minds around me to be open-minded and
create a stronger sense of harmony at my school. I discussed our school mascot, the cougar,
and what it truly means to be a cougar. I encouraged my classmates to roar in the face of
judgement and to help others along the way when they can. I applauded their hard work and
efforts in creating a unified community on campus, and assured them that compassion and
sincere kindness would never be frowned upon. Whether a student excels academically or their
talent shines through the arts or sports, we all contribute to a society and tell a story. I asked my
fellow students and teachers to help me make the story of El Dorado High School one that
would not be forgotten. For the sake of our futures, I requested that the atmosphere on campus
remain a positive one, and that each individual who may be experiencing loss, pain, or any
torment may view the campus as a place of refuge and acceptance. I was recently informed by
my teacher that bullying in my school has diminished since the rally. Ive been doing my part by
sharing a smile here and there, and people have been smiling back. Even more, they have been
I have always been a performer, and to be honest I have loved being the center of attention, but
I have found so much more than just glory in performing. I have always cherished the moments
in which I hold the attention and interest of those who care to observe, and have found I have a
natural ability when it comes to acting out and expressing my emotions. For some time, I only
found these skills beneficial when they were used for entertainment, but as I matured and as I
was exposed to lifes challenges, I found other purposes for my skills. I learned to use my
talents for communication and perception. Ironically, with how many opportunities my
scarce. I feel my talents of expression eventually developed into skills of empathy and
compassion with others around me. I am able to learn in my own way, and with that came a
competence to view situations from a pure and unbiased standpoint. Through art and
expression, I have also learned to appreciate the beauty of the world and those who reside in it.
The human mind has so much to offer, and I believe mine can offer an example. I believe that
my talents on a stage and as an actor correlate directly with my talents as a person, and the
ability to commit to ones character is not so different from the power to explore ones
personality. Through art and entertainment, I have learned to communicate and understand
those who are similar to me and also those who are so very dissimilar, and there is still much to
discover.
What is the one thing that you think sets you apart from other candidates applying to the University of
California?
During this application process, Ive struggled to stay optimistic. The feeling of competition
always creates stress for me, and when it comes to deciding the path I will take in life, the
feelings of anxiety and anticipation become even more strenuous. But after extensive thought
and self-examination throughout the years, Ive come to the conclusion that I have truly given
my all to creating a future I want for myself. Although there are plenty of worthy applicants with
similar interests and more impressive academic abilities, my skills and peculiarities lie in
comprehension. I am proud of what I have accomplished this far in my life, and recognize that
everything that has happened to me has shaped me for the better. I am content with failure, and
view failure as an opportunity to improve. To be more clear, I think I am a very quick learner with
a persistent drive for doing what needs to be done for myself and others. I have been raised to
know the importance of compassion, integrity, and patience to understand others and overcome
challenging obstacles. I also know the values of placing others before me in order to create a
better environment. My hometown has provided me with so many adventures and memories
that will always last, but a small hometown can make a person feel pretty small themselves. The
limits of my town and lack of opportunities have weathered my conscience to strive for
something big. Since I was young, I have had very big dreams - dreams of art and film, stories
and poetry, and setting an example greater than the ones I learned from. I am different because
I can take a hit and ask for another as long as I stand for what I love. I can inspire others to do
extraordinary things by simply being ordinary. I am going to make the world a little happier, and
Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and
innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.
I was raised on films, movies, and TV shows of every genre, and from the beginning have
inevitably become fascinated with the work behind the magic. Watching and exploring countless
situations, stories, and character developments have influenced me to produce my own magic.
My parents raised me to always give in to my creative side, and to find creativity and beauty in
everything I do. I have always cherished my ability to highlight the most entertaining elements in
human interaction and daily happenstances. I have always felt that my purpose is to show the
world things that they have never seen before, and help them feel things they have never known
in order for them to understand the world around them. I enjoy creating works of art that
Finding the humor, passion, and raw emotion in words or movement and sharing them with
everyone who needs incentive to expand their horizons is where I am at my strongest. The most
effective forms of my creativity would have to be in my characters. In the stories I have written,
films I have created, and the dreams that cloud my mind, I put forth all my effort into developing
relatable and awesome characters. Beings that others may strive to be like, or ones that
illustrate emotions that one may not have been able to comprehend. I manifest a piece of myself
in everyone and everything I create, so that it may be completely and utterly...me. It could be
said that I express my creativity through vulnerability. I only choose to make myself completely
vulnerable because I have always been a very curious person. Regardless of the risks and pain
that vulnerability might bring, it will always bring growth with it.