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English 335
Dr. Leon
14 September 2016
The exigence driving the argument about the American diet, is the fact
that obesity rates are at an all-time high. Likewise, diseases that are caused
skyrocketed, and has led to an increase in children with type 2 diabetes. The
obesity. So what can be done? Jamie Oliver, a celebrity chef and activist, and
Dr. Dean Ornish, founder of the Preventive Medicine Research Institute, both
address the issue in Ted Talk presentations, but they differ in their approach.
most effective. For this issue, the most effective rhetor, is the one who can
create a sense of urgency, and who has a plan of action that the audience
believes is achievable.
emotional tone and body language that conveyed the urgent nature of his
have to create it by dressing in formal attire. Wearing dark jeans and a plaid
shirt, he opened his 2010 Ted Talk, entitled, Teach Every Child about Food,
emotional connection with the audience, but that was not the case with
Olivers delivery. His tone was not impersonal, but rather emphatic, and the
way he strode back and forth across the stage, gave a sense of urgency to
impact of the statistic. For instance, instead of saying, In the next eighteen
minutes, four Americans will be dead through the food that they eat, which
when I do my chat, four Americans, that are alive, will be dead through the
food that they eat. By qualifying dead with alive, and stressing the fact
that while he was giving his talk, four people would die, he enhanced the
statistic by adding a sense of time, and emphasizing the idea that it was a
and what he is not; in the last seven years, Ive worked fairly tirelessly to
save lives in my own way. Im not a doctor, Im a chef. I dont use expensive
well as his casual attire, gives the audience the impression that he is one of
them, which leads them to reason that they can save lives too. He then asks
they are aunts or uncles, and almost everyone raises their hands. In this
way, he actively engaged his audience, and then he dropped the bombshell;
we, the adults of the last four generations, have blessed our children with
the destiny of a shorter life span than their own parentsbecause of the
giving the audience the message that they were all in the same boat, and
message. Pointing to a big screen with a picture of an obese sixteen year old
girl, he tells the audience that her name is Brittany, and that she has six
years to live. Giving the statistics a name and a face is the most effective
wheel barrel full of sugar on the stage to illustrate the amount of sugar a
chocolate milk. He then employs an enthymeme, and tells the audience that
giving children all that sugar amounts to child abuse, basing his argument on
the bottom, with heart disease, and many other diet-related diseases, at the
top. He points out that the media, and people in general, focus all of their
and begs the question; why arent we doing more to fight diet related
Killer American Diet that is Sweeping the Planet, despite the dramatic title,
lacked emotional appeal. Wearing a blazer, striped shirt, and slacks, and
standing behind a podium, he begins his talk, with all the legitimate
concerns about AIDS and avian flu, and well hear about that from the
brilliant Dr. Brilliant later today, I want to talk to you about the other
but his delivery lacks emotion, and therefore, the message does not resonate
with the audience as much as it could have. Also, Im not sure what he
meant by the brilliant Dr. Brilliant, but it only detracted from the impact of
what he was saying. The fact that he stands behind a podium, and reads off
of his computer the whole time, also detracts from his speech. In other
words, unlike Oliver, Ornish has no stage presence. His delivery seems
rushed, and lacks emotion. Although he has a lot of knowledge about health
and diet, he doesnt engage his audience. He does show a funny cartoon at
one point, getting a laugh out of the audience, but instead of using the
moment to connect, he skips to the next slide, and keeps on talking in his
monotone voice. He utilizes many charts, and graphs, but fails to put a
incorporated more visual aids, including video, pictures, and props, while Dr.
Ornishs only visual was a Power Point presentation which included a few
the same between the two rhetors, however, Oliver was able to present it in
a way that made it seem more urgent, and was the most effective at
motivating his audience to take action. For this reason, Oliver was the best
rhetor.
Cheryl McBryde
English 335
Dr. Leon
Works Cited
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=go_QOzc79Uc. Accessed 12,
October, 2016.
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