Norris Mayes Mayes1

College Writing P2

Ms. Netherton

22 April 2017
Conclusion

My biggest strength as a writer is the intellectual reasoning and comprehension. My

intellect is the base of my essay, because the reader can barely understand the essay. I put so

much details and reasoning in the writings that it can barely be comprehended in different ways.

My writing skills are improving every step of the way. For example: I am doing my portfolio at

this moment and my skills of writing are proven to be comprehended for most readers and some

are confusing to the readers. Its better to confuse or tweak the essay a little to make the essay

harder to comprehend for the lower class of intellectual superior. I am an intellectual person who

is a strong reader and to understand text.

The best essay I wrote was the Hero Essay because it explains my religious

background. The background and the hook of the essay are highly impressive. I know so much

about God and Lord Jesus Christ. The essay describes the tone of the essay and Jesus Christ:

birth, teachings, crucifixion, death, rose on the third day, ascended into heaven. Jesus Christ story

was the greatest in the New Testament of the bible. Jesus Christ is the lord and savior that died

for our sins and to save us from eternal punishments.

My biggest weakness when I began college writing was the basic parts of the essay. Each

essay became stronger and harder to comprehend. When I write harder essay, the reader can

figure out what the writer is actually saying to the reader. It takes a large amount of time to

comprehend and to be able to connect with the readers. I overcame it by improving and using

the dictionary to find more impressive words to edit and to improve my essay. Every essay is

stronger the last essay.

The hardest part of this final portfolio is to have a perfect detailed portfolio for the reader

to review. It would be more wise to make sure that I have every detail in hand for others
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College Writing P2

Ms. Netherton

22 April 2017
to gain the reader's review and the ratings of the portfolio as a whole. I am putting so

much effort on this portfolio because it's the best that I have to be successful. The essays I

chose to put in this final portfolio are my best essays of which I have a moderate or high

grade on. The reader can connect with the theme and the motion of the essay. Each time

the readers read the essay, the emotion they feel will contain and connect with each detail

I put in those essays.

I believe the most important lesson I've learned in college writing is that

proofreading and perfecting the essays are the biggest part of being a writer. It lets

the reader know about many sections in the essays or paragraphs that give

different amount of: Assertion, Examples, Explanations, and Significance. The

evidence and reasonings are the biggest part. The reason why it's so important for

a college class because these lessons will go a long way to college success.

Writing classes in college will have a higher standards that we must require to

write essays and to answer prompts in AXES paragraphs. Each paragraph needs to

be work cited in parentheses. When you don't correctly cite the quote, it counts as

plagiarism.

I believe that I still need to improve on the realm of writing is to deplete my wordiness

and irrelevant details in my essays. This confuses the reader when there are many of

synonyms and the same exact words are writing or typed dozens of times in each

paragraph. For instance: I type up an argument or a letter to the teacher. They see that all

I have are the same exact words repeated. Now they don't know if I'm serious about the

incident or not. This causes the reader to pay less attention to the essay that I type. It

confuses many readers and it will be harder for teachers to grade because they don't know
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College Writing P2

Ms. Netherton

22 April 2017
what side I am really on. I can improve this in the future just by improving and

strengthening my thoughts before I start typing. It better to think before doing anything

else.