Elizabeth Ruiz

Professor batty
May 29, 2017
Visual Rhetoric Reflection
The first thing I revised in my essay was the thesis statement. In my first graded essay
the thesis statement I used did not capture the entire message I was trying to put out. I
reworded it in order for it to be more understanding and in relation with my message. Aside from
that I went back and corrected a few grammar mistakes and rearranged a couple of phrases.
Overall I think I am the most proud of this essay. Of all the three we were assigned this one was
by far my favorite. I really enjoyed doing the research for this mural and it actually opened up
my eyes on a subject I didn't know a lot about before. After looking through so many murals I
decided on this one because I thought the message behind it was so strong as compared to
others. The world around us, especially in the US is not accustomed to hearing about stories
like this. Because we come from a first-world country people don't believe things like sex
trafficking are actually happening. Aside from my revisions i am proud of the grade I received for
this essay and glad I was able to learn so much from it.