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TABLE OF CONTENTS
Songwriting 4
Poetic Devices 17
Odds and Ends 22
Songwriting Advice From The Pros 23
References
Songwriting Assignment 29
Recording Process & Information Sheet 30
CD Project Job Descriptions 31
Clich List 32
SONGWRITING AND PRODUCING FOR WORSHIP
WS325E-03
Instructors: Denis Campos
SYLLABUS
A. COURSE DESCRIPTION
Lessons and workshops aimed at developing and stretching students ability to write,
arrange, and produce songs for congregational worship. We will train students in
conceiving and polishing songs musically and lyrically, then arranging instrumentation,
rhythm, and dynamics to bring the best out of their writing. Each student will demo a
verse and chorus for two submissions, from which we will choose the songs for the
semesters studio recording.
B. TEXTBOOKS
1. Songwriting notebook
2. Tests
3. Completion of TEN required songs
4. Attendance
These four components make up a total of 50% of the overall grade for the course.
The final 50% is based upon attendance.
E. METHOD OF INSTRUCTION
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F. FINANCIAL AID
None
G. DISABILITIES
The student has the responsibility of informing the course instructor of any disabling
condition that will require modifications to avoid discrimination. Christ For The
Nations provides academic adjustments and auxiliary aid to meet the institutions
academic requirements.
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Songwriting
Art should not reflect culture; it should subvert it. Bob Dylan
2. The expression is from you a song will not surpass the level of your ability.
a. Gods message must filter through your skill (with melody and language)
of expression
b. Craft is, knowing how to more effectively communicate the inspiration.
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Addendum II: Worship songs must express universal sentiments they are
songs of the people, not of individual experience
Worship songs have one common goal and thats to help people worshipif
youve written a worship song, make sure its defined by its results.
- Jared Anderson, Rescue
D. Verification - Now you need to be critical. Take your time. Look at the
song objectively as a product. Rewrite, polish, put it down and let it
marinate for a while.
E.g. Alabaster Jar stayed in this stage for 3 years
C. Remember the K.I.S.S. method. Keep your melody and lyrics simple.
Who am I trying to impress? -
e.g. self-impressed musician man
Song is an art form, but its primary goal is communication, not expression!
When Raphael was asked how he sculpted such a magnificent horse from
a piece of stone, he said that he simply liberated the horse from the
marble. I just cut away everything that wasnt a horse.
Julius Caesar wrote, If I had had more time, I would have written to you
more briefly.
e.g. Still as stone in mending wall as Quiet Ones in autumn hue when
shaking mane indifferent come like God with humming fingers
Still as storm on barren lips ensconced on solitary dune as dew from
beetle carapace so I shall sip contented
Worship leaders are servants. The same should be true of worship song lyrics.
The words should serve those singing them. Our words should explain, reveal,
inspire - even occasionally startle - but they should only do so as a means of
helping people into worship. They are not for showing off rich vocabulary or
technical virtuosity or even how many scriptures the writer has read. They are
servant-lyrics, aiming to serve the church by leading it into a greater
understanding, truth and worship.
-Nick Page
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And Now Lets Move Into a Time of Nonsense
Why Worship Songs are Failing the Church
2. Not show off its wit or technique for the sake of technique
5. Encourage us to go deeper!
Novelist Truman Capote sat at his typewriter all day once and came away
with only one word. A friend found him there and asked, Truman, youve
been here all day and youve only written one word? Capote replied, Yes,
but its the right word.
Ecclesiastes 12:10
The teacher searched to find just the right words, and what he wrote was upright and true.
The teacher didnt write down the first thing that popped into his head and say, Thatll do.
C. Focus - can you sum up the emotional/mental state of the song in one
word?
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c. This builds lyrical tension and release into the song - dynamics
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Application: Answer the following questions concerning a song you are
currently working on.
1. What is the point of view?
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IV. Titles - Concept and title are partners
B. Some writers dont even start to write a song until after they have a good
title.
Application:
Take three minutes and brainstorm as many titles as possible.
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V. First lines - another 1st impression
A. Do I want to hear more, or do I turn it off? Is this song compelling?
B. NEVER settle for a clich in the first line!
Im just sittin here, Woke up this morning, Walking down the avenue, I love you,
Hallelujah, etc.
C. The 1st line sets the tone and makes you want to hear more - lyrical bait
D. The 1st line answers the questions, who, what, where, when?
2. Does the time of day enhance the emotional impact of the song? -
Morning, day, and night all evoke different emotional responses.
4. If the song is about someone, can you say something that immediately
gives a picture or personality sketch?
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Application: Write down the first line of a song you are currently working
on or have completed.
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VI. Hooks - A hook grabs the listeners attention and helps them remember the
song
A. The hook line is stronger if it includes the title: I Could sing of Your Love
Forever, Shout to the Lord
B. Try starting a song with a hook: Great is Thy Faithfulness, Lord I Lift
Your Name on High, Open the Eyes of My Heart
C. A hook that comes at the beginning and end of a chorus is called book
ends - helps with song identification and strengthens emotional impact
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D. The imagination cannot image abstractions (subjective or general
information) - e.g. grace, belief, faith, wonderful, beautiful, love
E. Listeners want the real thing - abstractions are convenient for labeling
lifes experiences, but they are not life itself.
H. If the image is too complex your imagination may abandon it (give up)
e.g. a broken arrow is easier to imagine than
I. Focus on one truth, one moment, one action - SIMPLIFY. - Cut narrow.
Cut deep.
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Application: Listen to Rich Mullins song The Color Green and take note of
his use of images.
And the moon is a sliver of silver like a shaving that fell on the floor of a carpenters shop and every house
must have its builder and I awoke in the house of God where the windows are mornings and evenings
stretched from the sun, across the sky north o south and on my way to early meeting, I heard the rocks crying
out, I heard the rocks crying out.
Be praised for all Your tenderness by these works of your hands
Suns that rise and rains that fall to bless and bring to life Your land
Look down upon this winter wheat and be glad that You have made
Blue for the sky and the color green that fills Your fields with praise
And the wrens have returned and are nesting in the hollow of that oak where his heart once had been and he
lifts up his arms in a blessing for being born again
and the streams are all swollen with winter winter unfrozen and free to run away now and Im amazed when I
remember who it was that built this house
and with the rocks I cry out
Classroom Application:
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Application: Use the following questions for your song.
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Poetic Devices
I. Poetic Devices - when used correctly, they go unnoticed - subtly enhance
without drawing attention to themselves.
C. Simile - a comparison using the words as or like - e.g. sleep like a log, hard
as a rock, gentle as a lamb - FLEE FROM CLICHES!
The TRICK: to say for the 1st time the thing that everyone has always wanted
to express as simply and naturally as if it had always been expressed that way .
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Application: Read back through Mullins The Color Green and underline poetic
devices. Note which device is being used beside each line.
And the moon is a sliver of silver like a shaving that fell on the floor of a carpenters shop and every
house must have its builder and I awoke in the house of God where the windows are mornings and
evenings stretched from the sun, across the sky north o south and on my way to early meeting, I
heard the rocks crying out, I heard the rocks crying out.
Be praised for all Your tenderness by these works of your hands
Suns that rise and rains that fall to bless and bring to life Your land Look down upon this winter wheat
and be glad that You have made blue for the sky and the color green that fills Your fields with praise
And the wrens have returned and are nesting in the hollow of that oak where his heart once had been
and he lifts up his arms in a blessing for being born again and the streams are all swollen with winter
winter unfrozen and free to run away now and Im amazed when I remember who it was that built this
house and with the rocks I cry out
C. If you think its too hard to rhyme and still sound natural, study the
masters - musical theater, hymns, pre-modern poetry
D. Types of rhyme:
4. Feminine or two rhyme - 2 syllable rhyme with the stress on the first
syllable. Vowels and inner consonants must match.
maker/faker, masquerading/degrading
E. Rhyme schemes - the same scheme through the entire song gets old fast.
Try to use different schemes for the verse, chorus and bridge.
a more
a for
a poor
c night
b must
b trust
b just
c might
F. Singing consonant sounds from the same family can closely approximate
perfect rhyme.
1. Plosive family - b, d, g, p, t, k
The trick to saying what you mean with rhyme is expanding your alternatives
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Example: You need to find a rhyme for the word cut - First find the perfect
rhymes:
G. Rhyme problems
3. Slang - dates your song and guarantees it will not transcend your
generation
a. If you are not writing for the public, do whatever you want
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Application: Read Mullins the Color Green with rhyme in mind.
The chorus?
And the moon is a sliver of silver like a shaving that fell on the floor of a carpenters shop and every
house must have its builder and I awoke in the house of God where the windows are mornings and
evenings stretched from the sun, across the sky north o south and on my way to early meeting, I
heard the rocks crying out, I heard the rocks crying out.
Be praised for all Your tenderness by these works of your hands
Suns that rise and rains that fall to bless and bring to life Your land Look down upon this winter wheat
and be glad that You have made blue for the sky and the color green that fills Your fields with praise
and the wrens have returned and are nesting in the hollow of that oak where his heart once had been
and he lifts up his arms in a blessing for being born again and the streams are all swollen with winter
winter unfrozen and free to run away now and Im amazed when I remember who it was that built this
house and with the rocks I cry out
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Odds and Ends
I. Use Pronouns with care - take the place of a proper or common noun
He, she, it, you, we, us, etc
B. Make sure that your use of pronouns makes sense to listeners and needs
no interpretation
C. Keep the songs perspective straight and be clear about what the pronoun
is being substituted for.
II. Avoid putting a word that ends in a consonant before a word that begins
with the same consonant. - teach children
III. Be sure that your lyrics, when sung, say what you want them to say: -
Scuse me while I kiss this guy. Your love blows like Fabreeze What a whino
IV. If you really want to write good songs, sing them to harsh critics and take
their suggestions seriously.
V. You are not your song. If you take criticism personally you will:
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Songwriting Advice From The Pros!
Advice from Denis Campos:
STEP 1:
Pick a way to start.
1. Poetically- Start with lyrics, poem, a thought, a scripture, preaching, idea,
theme
2. Melodically- Start with a melody, a melodic hook, a lick
3. Harmonically- Start with a progression, chords, a chord idea
4. Rhythmically- Start with a Rhythm, a groove, a loop, a drum beat
STEP 2:
1. Fill in the rest of the prior steps that are missing
2. Just write the song dont worry about the arrangement
3. By the end of this step you should have a sing-able melody
4. For worship songs, make sure anybody can grab an instrument and play
the song and sing it - Make it simple
5. Re-write, re-write, re-write!!!
STEP 3:
1. Play it for honest friends - Those who will tell you what is wrong with the
song
2. Take suggestions seriously
3. Dont play it in public until you are sure it is finished!!
Get alone and be quiet with the Lord. Dont even think about writing a
song.
Begin to sing to the Lord. Dont try to write verses. Just express the
stirring of your heart.
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Ignore the craft of songwriting, but keep one ear open to what is coming
out. - This is the raw material for sincere worship songs.
Note: I almost never record ideas. I pray that if it is good and pleasing to
God, Ill remember it. If its not good enough for me to remember, why
should I expect anyone else to remember it?
Now take the idea and brainstorm, free associate, sit back and visualize
the imagery.
I will only continue with editing and rewriting if she is impressed by the
song. If she says its pretty good, I put it up.
IF it passes the initial hearing, I have Jen read the words and point out
any problem areas: fuzzy imagery, confusing references, clichs.
Pray about rewrites and improvements and let God inspire you to pull
more out of the song.
Give the song time to mature and grow. The song is only done when it is
on a CD
3. Listen for comments like, Whered that song come from? I really like
it. Man, that new song blessed me.
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Advice from Paul Baloche:
I have submitted over 400 songs in 10 years & about 100 were recorded
Listen to great songs, not bad ones, songs that move you
Proverbs 14:23 All hard work brings a profit, but idle words bring poverty
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Songwriting is just like music, it requires practice, hard work, & discipline
If you want to write worship songs, Worship, then let songs be the bi-
product
Great songs come from the Word, your walk with the Lord, peoples
conversations, your prayers
Try to write songs away from your instrument, your melodies will be
more original
As an exercise, ask your pastor what hes preaching on, then try to write
a song to enhance the message
Melody is king (well, really Jesus is King, but you get the idea!)
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Advice from Walker Beach:
You should be able, in one word, to describe the emotion or mental state
that a song expresses.
One of the greatest guidelines in writing Praise & Worship songs is:
The notes in the chorus of a song should be higher than the notes
in the verse!!!!
This gives the chorus an uplifting feel
If the bridge builds up to or over the high note of the chorus, it
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builds anticipation
WHY?
E or F is comfortable for most people to sing
B or C pushes people to sing out!
e.g. E or F: You Alone, All in All, Open the Eyes of My Heart
A or Bb: Shout to the Lord, Breathe, Draw Me Close
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Songwriting Assignments:
Assignment 1: Write 5 original songs
All lyrics and chords must be typed, and each song on a separate page.
You must show each change with a highlight or notation on each rewrite.
All lyrics, chords & changes must be typed, each rewrite on a separate
page.
You must have a typed cover page and the original song with the
assignment.
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Recording Process & Information:
____________________ is project manager this semester. He/she is in charge of all
scheduling (demos, scratch tracks, etc) and will be there to assist.
Everyone in SOW must demo at least 1 song (you do not have to summit your demo
for the recording please tell your engineer, if you do not want to summit for
recording)
You cannot sing or play on your demo or final song (if it gets chosen). Only CFNI
current students, 1st, 2nd or 3rd year, are eligible to sing or play on SOWTA projects (if
they are currently on probation, they are not eligible).
Anyone from SOW or SOTA can summit a song for the project.
B) Choosing the songs: We will listen and vote on songs Friday, ______________ 2nd &
3rd hour.
The 10-12 chosen songs will be announced on the following Tuesday morning.
(NOTE: A song can be dropped from the project at any time, for any reason by Denis
Campos.)
Every song needs to do a scratch track, even if you do not plan to use a drummer!
Production Dates/Deadlines:
Demos: Wednesday, ___________ & Thursday, ____________
Scratch Track: due Monday, ________________ by 8am
Final song recording begins: Monday, __________________
Mastering/Graphics finished: _______________________
Delivery of Finished Product: last Monday of the semester
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CD Project Job Descriptions
Use this as a guide for the job you are given for the Student Project!
Project Manager: He or she has been hand picked for this role! They will oversee the scheduling
of all recording sessions, work with the Recording 201 Instructor(s) to make sure equipment and studios
are in proper working order and available, and guide the process along, keeping everyone on track.
They need to be available for questions or problems that may arise in the studios. If an issue arises,
whatever the Project Manager says is final. They have been given the authority by the director
of the SOWTA to make sure everyone and everything works in proper order.
Songwriter: The songwriter is responsible for writing the music and lyrics. (This may be done with
assistance from others.) The songwriter is primarily responsible for the arrangement. However, the
producer should be involved in this as well. The songwriter and producer must complete a production
chart for the full arrangement of the song prior to the beginning of the recording process. The songwriter
helps the producer in choosing vocalists and instrumentalists for the song.
Producer: The producer works directly with the songwriter and engineer. They must first speak
with the songwriter and analyze the song to look for possible issues, improvements, hooks, style, etc.
Once this has been done, the songwriter and producer must complete a production chart for the full
arrangement of the song prior to the beginning of the recording process. It is the job of the producer
to contact and schedule everyone participating in the recording. The producer must then distribute
the production chart, scratch track and chord charts to all vocalists and instrumentalists (the engineer
needs to given a production chart as well)! Also, they need to communicate to the vocalists and
instrumentalists the direction and feel of the song. During the actual recording, they will communicate
with the engineer. If any problems arise (other than technical), it is their job to solve the issues.
They are the voice for the songwriter! NOTE: Dont be afraid to ask for input from the engineer.
Depending on the background and experience, the engineer may have some valuable suggestions!
Assistant Producer: To assist the producer & songwriter in anyway possible. This person
needs to be available for all meetings and recording sessions. If the producer is not available or
drops the ball, this person would need to be able to step in and take charge of the situation. (If he
or she has not been involved in the whole process, they will not be able to do this!) For the most
part, this is a behind the scenes role, but it doesnt have to be!
Engineer: The engineer works directly with the producer. They must be available for all recording
sessions. They are responsible for the technical end of the song; making sure the studio and equipment
(i.e. keyboards/pedals, mics, cables, headphones & jacks, etc) is available and in proper working
order (this should be done prior to the session), laying of tracks, editing, and mixing. The engineer
can give input into the song, if their opinion is asked for.
Assistant Engineer: To assist the lead engineer in anyway possible. This person needs to be
available for all recording sessions. If the engineer is not available or drops the ball, this person
would need to be able to step in and take charge of the situation. (If he or she has not been involved
in the whole process, they will not be able to do this!) For the most part, this is a behind the scenes
role, but it doesnt have to be!
Praise&WorshipSongwritingClichList
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Asanexercise,trytowriteapraise&worshipsongnotusinganyofthesephrases.
(Notbecausetheyarenotgood,manyareinthebible!BEFRESH,ORIGINAL,PRAY!!!)
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