What you need to have in the introductory paragraph

1. Hook
2. Stand
3. 3 Thesis statements (do not elaborate, just state them)

For instance:

Men are from Mars and women are from Venus. We heard this quote a lot before and still
could not understand what it actually means. In todays modern family, the main
breadwinners are not only men, but also women. Men and women are sharing the
responsibilities nowadays which leave question of who is going to do the house chores? Based
on the question, the writer believes that men should also do the house chores and will prove
why they need to do so. So, in the next three paragraphs, the writer is going to give three
arguments to support the motion which are as a way to share the responsibility, a way to
show love and appreciation and also men are stronger than women and have to take care on
heavy works.

What you need to have in the body paragraphs

1. Connectors + Topic sentence (1 sentence only)

2. General statement that supports the topic sentence (1 sentence only)
3. Supporting details (3-4 sentences)
4. Examples

For instance:

First and foremost, men should do house chores because to share the responsibility with
their spouses. As we know, most men are the main breadwinners in their family so, they have to
provide everything from basic needs to necessities such as foods, clothes and so on. But, this should
not be an excuse because men have to be responsible in helping their spouses too. While their
spouses are taking care of the dishes, men can do another works such as cleaning the bathroom and
sweeping the floor.

Secondly, men should do house chores because it is how they can show their love and
appreciation to their spouses. Love and appreciation do not only need to be shown by giving their
spouses surprise birthday party or taking them on vacation but, it can also be shown by helping
them doing the house chores.

Last but not least, doing the house chores also means