In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever

before.
Howeveer, they are less happy.

What do you think the causes are and how to solve this problem?

There seems to be a trend of progress towards prosperity and high living standards; however, life
satisfaction does not seem to follow the same tendency. The modern lifestyle is mostly to blame, but the
change must be from individuals themselves.

Em phi paraphrase st hn 1 cht, ti v y ch ni YOUNG PEOPLE

To some, their wealth comes at the cost of low job satisfaction. The ever-escalating competition is
pushing the youth to perform better and achieve more, resulting in either burnouts and elimination, or
overwork for the more capable young. Either way, the monetary or mental reward is hardly worthy of
the effort, and young people come out miserable with their jobs.

Many might also suffer from a lack of real friends, while having to maintain contact with more
acquaintances. This is assisted by social networks, which makes it easier to form instant friends found
on the net. While the convenience seems to do us good, it simplies SIMPLIFIES??? relationships to mere
instant messaging, status updates or comments a detriment to real, profound relationships that needs
real-life interaction.

The situation is far from desperate, however, as solutions are actually well within reach. For one, by
prioritizing job satisfaction over material gain or other benefits, young people are distancing themselves
from the exhausting competition. The better health and positivity are arguably more than enough to
make up for some trade-offs in material and fame. Also, if loneliness on the net is becoming common,
chances are that there are others like you who could do with some of your good, real-life company. It
turns out, therefore, that you are so lonely after all.??? NOT LONELY mi ng ch h

It short, a richer or more comfortable life does not amount to a satisfactory one unless you are happy
with what you do and with others around you. And this lies in the hand of the individuals themselves
not following the crowd into detrimental lifestyles is the key.

C ko thch ch detrimental

Comment:

Bi ny em vit rt sng sa, ch cn bt i my ci t nh detrimental l okay h :v c ngh em c

th t 8.5 vi bi ny, v x l language rt l skillfully.