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Table of Contents
Introduction .................................................... 4
Marking Guidelines for Section 2 ...................... 8
Marking Guidelines for Section 8 and 9 .......... 10
Focus of the Marking Criteria ................................. 10
Response Format Requirements............................. 11
Section 8 ........................................................................... 11
Section 9 ........................................................................... 12
Marking Scales....................................................... 14
Formal Item Traits ............................................................... 14
How to assess Formal Requirement........................ 15
Individual and Qualitative Item Traits ..................................... 16
Word limits ............................................................ 17
Possible Marking Issues and Solutions ................... 18
Marking Grids Levels A1-L5.................................... 19
Level A1............................................................................. 20
Level L1 ............................................................................. 21
Level L2 ............................................................................. 22
Level L3 ............................................................................. 23
Level L4 ............................................................................. 24
Level L5 ............................................................................. 25
Marking Criteria and Comments ............................. 26
Level A1............................................................................. 26
Level L1 ............................................................................. 28
Level L2 ............................................................................. 30
Level L3 ............................................................................. 32
Level L4 ............................................................................. 34
Level L5 ............................................................................. 36
Benchmark Samples ...................................... 38
Level A1 ................................................................ 38
Section 8 Sample A1.1 ......................................................... 38
Section 8 Sample A1.2 ......................................................... 39
Level A1 ................................................................ 40
Section 9 Sample A1.1 ......................................................... 40
Section 9 Sample A1.2 ......................................................... 41
Level 1................................................................... 42
Section 8 Sample L1.1 ......................................................... 42
Section 8 Sample L1.2 ......................................................... 43
Level 1................................................................... 44
Section 9 Sample L1.1 ......................................................... 44
Section 9 Sample L1.2 ......................................................... 45
Level 2................................................................... 46
The revised PTE General will be administered from the November 2010 session
onwards. It is intended for teenagers and young adults of all nationalities whose
first language is not English.
Test format
The test consists of two parts: a written component to assess the skills of
listening, reading and writing, and a separate oral component to assess speaking.
There are nine sections in the written part of the test. The oral part of the test
consists of three (A1-L1) and four (L2-L5) sections respectively.
Sections Skill
1 Listening
2 Listening and writing
3 Listening
4-7 Reading
8-9 Writing
10 13 Speaking
Scoring
Items for assessing receptive skills are scored dichotomously, i.e. each answer
will either be correct or incorrect with no half marks. A test takers performance
in writing and speaking will be evaluated by means of analytical scales derived
from scales within the Common European Framework.
Scores for each of the four skills are given equal weighting. For each test form
appropriate cut scores for the grades of Pass, Merit and Distinction are calculated
based on the difficulty values of the constituent items. Grades are determined on
the basis of total scores according to a fully compensatory model. In other words,
a test taker does not have to reach a threshold score in any one part or skill in
order to pass or to achieve a given grade.
Score reporting
All test takers receive a performance report showing their score profile for all four
skills and one of the following overall grade provided they did not fail the test.
Section 2
Sections 9
Component Purpose
Term Definition
Names each testing point in a test which is given a
Item trait or trait
separate mark.
A brief description which summarises the degree of
Descriptor proficiency or type of performance expected of a test
taker to achieve that particular level.
Several ranked categories used for making judgements
Marking criteria of performance. They name all item traits and provide
descriptors to allow marking.
Scoring
Points are allocated according to two categories:
D = Dictation: number of words that appear to have been understood correctly
S = Spelling: number of correct words that are spelled correctly
The maximum score for D and S indicates the total number of words, for
example:
Total word count = 40
D maximum score= 40
S maximum score = 40
a) Dictation (D)
One point is awarded for each word that matches the key.
Points should be awarded if the TT (test taker) has attempted to write the
word phonetically (e.g., solution vs solusion).
If the word is recognisable and makes sense in the context, one point
should be awarded.
If the word is a word which makes no sense in the context, no points
should be awarded.
b) Spelling (S)
One point is awarded for each correct spelling of a word that matches the key.
Spelling must be 100% correct (variations accepted e.g. colour / color).
If you are in town this Saturday, // come along to the Home Entertainment
Centre // in Park Street.// The store is holding a one day sale event. // Were
offering huge savings on all flat-screen TVs // and a range of computer games.
(Word count =40 words)
Issue Solution
TT crosses out a word or phrase that is The crossed-out word should not be
correct. scored.
Trait Focus
*The CEF descriptor for accuracy does not explicitly refer to lexical accuracy
which was consequently added to all level descriptors for accuracy.
Section 8
Response
Level Formal Requirement
format
Level A1 Email Informal, appropriate opening (e.g., Hello, Hi,
Hey, How are you? or name) and closing (e.g.,
Bye, See you, Love or name)
Postcard Informal, appropriate opening (e.g., Hello, Hi,
Hey, How are you? or name) and closing (e.g.,
Bye, See you, Love or name)
Blog entry Informal
No opening or closing required
Letter Informal, appropriate opening (e.g., Hello, Hi,
Hey, How are you? or name) and closing (e.g.,
Bye, See you, Love or name)
Level L1 Email Informal, appropriate opening (e.g., Hello, Hi,
Hey, How are you? or name) and closing (e.g.,
Bye, See you, Love or name)
Postcard Informal, appropriate opening (e.g., Hello, Hi,
Hey, How are you? or name) and closing (e.g.,
Bye, See you, Love or name)
Blog entry Informal
No opening or closing required
Letter Informal, appropriate opening (e.g., Hello, Hi,
Hey, How are you? or name) and closing (e.g.,
Bye, See you, Love or name)
Level L2 Email Informal or semi-formal depending on target
reader and topic
Appropriate opening (e.g., Hello, Hi, Hey, How are
you?, Dear or name) and closing (e.g., Bye, See
you, Love, Best or name)
Informal letter Appropriate opening (e.g., Hello, Hi, Hey, How are
you?, Dear or name) and closing (e.g., Bye, See
you, Love, Best or name)
Formal letter Appropriate opening (e.g., Dear, or name) and
closing (e.g., Bye, See you, Love, Best or name)
Level L3 Email Semi-formal
Appropriate opening (e.g., Dear, or name) and
closing (e.g., Regards, Best (wishes), Yours, or
name)
Informal letter Appropriate opening (e.g., Hello, Hi, Hey, How are
you?, Dear or name) and closing (e.g., Bye, See
you, Love, Best or name)
Section 9
Response
Level Formal Requirement
format
Level A1 Diary entry Informal style
First person narrator
Photo story Creative or descriptive text about a picture. It
can be written in present or past tense.
Short story Creative text
First or third person narrator
Description Descriptive text using present progressive and
simple present
Level L1 Diary entry Informal style
First person narrator
Photo story Creative or descriptive text about three
pictures. It can be written in present or past
tense.
0 = A score of zero is given if there is no engagement with the prompt with regards to content.
1 = A score of one is given if there is partial engagement with the prompt with regards to content, i.e. not all aspects of the prompt
have been considered.
2 = A score of two is given if there is full engagement with the prompt with regards to content, i.e. all aspects are referred to.
Task Engagement functions as GATEKEEPER, i.e. if the response is given a score of zero, the response is no longer scored on Formal
Requirement, the individual and qualitative item trait. The test taker is given a score of zero for the relevant item.
0 = A score of zero is given if the response neither complies with the word limit nor the response format.
1 = A score of one is given if either the word limit or the response format is correct.
2 = A score of two is given if both word limit and response format are correct.
Formal Requirement (word limit) functions as partial GATEKEEPER, i.e. if the word count is below the word limit tolerance (see below for
each level & section), the response is no longer scored. The test taker is given a score of zero on Task Engagement, Formal
Requirement, and the individual and qualitative item trait. If the word count is above the word limit tolerance, the part that exceeds the
word limit tolerance is not scored.
Mark Comment
0 Is given if the test taker receives a score of 0 on Task Engagement or Formal Requirement: Word count below the tolerance.
1 The response does not meet the level requirements. The test takers English language proficiency is below the level.
2 The response meets some of the level requirements. The test takers English language proficiency is just at the level.
3 The response meets all level requirements. The test takers English language proficiency is at the level.
The response exceeds some of the level requirements/meets some of the requirements of the level above. The test takers
4
English language proficiency is almost at the next level.
The response fully exceeds the level requirements/meet the requirements of the level above. The test takers English language
5
proficiency is at the next level.
Mark Comment
0 Is given if the test taker receives a score of 0 on Task Engagement or Formal Requirement: Word count below the tolerance.
1 The response does not meet the level requirements. The test takers English language proficiency is below the level.
2 The response meets some of the level requirements. The test takers English language proficiency is just at the level.
3 The response meets all level requirements. The test takers English language proficiency is at the level.
Please Note
1. The levels are cumulative, that is everything that applies to one level also applies to the next higher one.
2. An A1 test taker can be below level A1.
3. To award score points 2/4/5 appropriately, examiners must be familiar with the marking criteria of the level above and below.
4. There is no level above L5. Therefore, score points 4, 5 are not used.
5. When in doubt between two scores, use the best fit criterion and if still in doubt give the LOWER score.
1. Acceptable use of input material (<25%): copying individual words and/or short phrases (<5
words); sentences with substitution; and sentences with a different word order. There is clear
evidence of test takers own language production. Mark as usual.
Lifting 2. Lifting 1 (25%-75%): coping longer phrases (5 words) and/or complete sentences; some
evidence of test takers own language production. Formal Requirement and Task Engagement are
scored as usual. On all other traits the maximum score a test taker can be given is 2.
3. Lifting 2 (75%): copying series of sentences/ full paragraphs: only a few minor changes have
been made to copied sentences; hardly any or no evidence of test takers own language production.
Formal Requirement and Task Engagement are scored as usual. On all other traits the maximum
score a test taker can be given is 1.
Section Formal Requirement Task Engagement Individual Traits Overall Qualitative Aspects of Written
(word limit, (content) Language Use
response format) (to be scored for section 8 and 9
independently)
Orthographic Control
Can copy familiar words and short phrases,
e.g. simple signs or instructions, names of
everyday objects, names and set phrases
used regularly. Can spell his/her address,
nationality and other personal details.
1, 2, 3, 4, 5
Section Formal Requirement Task Engagement Individual Traits Overall Qualitative Aspects of Written Language
(word limit, (content) Use
response format) (to be scored for section 8 and 9
independently)
1, 2, 3, 4, 5 1, 2, 3, 4, 5
Orthographic Control
Can copy short sentences on everyday subjects.
Can write with reasonable phonetic accuracy
(but not necessarily fully standard spelling)
short words that are in his/her oral vocabulary.
1, 2, 3, 4, 5
Section Formal Task Engagement Individual Traits Overall Qualitative Aspects of Written
Requirement (content) Language Use
(word limit, (to be scored for section 8 and 9
response format) independently)
Section Formal Task Engagement Individual Traits Overall Qualitative Aspects of Written
Requirement (content) Language Use
(word limit, (to be scored for section 8 and 9
response format) independently)
Section Formal Task Engagement Individual Traits Overall Qualitative Aspects of Written
Requirement (content) Language Use
(word limit, (to be scored for section 8 and 9
response format) independently)
1, 2, 3, 4, 5
Accuracy
Consistently maintains a high degree of
Section 9 0 = neither fulfilled 0 = no engagement Overall Written Production
grammatical and lexical accuracy; errors are
Can write clear, well-
rare and difficult to spot.
1 = either fulfilled 1 = partial engagement structured texts of
complex subjects, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5
2 = both fulfilled 2 = full engagement underlining the relevant
salient issues, expanding Coherence and Cohesion
and supporting points of Can produce clear, smoothly flowing, well-
WLT 120-275 view at some length with structured text, showing controlled use of
subsidiary points, reasons organisational patterns, connectors and
and relevant examples. cohesive devices.
1, 2, 3, 4, 5 1, 2, 3, 4, 5
Orthographic control
Layout, paragraphing and punctuation are
consistent and helpful. Spelling is accurate,
apart from occasional slips of the pen.
1, 2, 3, 4, 5
Section Formal Requirement Task Engagement Individual Traits Overall Qualitative Aspects of Written
(word limit, (content) Language Use
response format) (to be scored for section 8 and 9
independently)
Accuracy
Maintains consistent grammatical and
lexical control of complex language.
Section 9 0 = neither fulfilled 0 = no engagement Overall Written Production
Can write clear, smoothly 1, 2, 3
1 = either fulfilled 1 = partial engagement flowing, complex texts in an
appropriate and effective Coherence and Cohesion
2 = both fulfilled 2 = full engagement style and a logical structure Can create coherent and cohesive text
which helps the reader to find making full and appropriate use of a
significant points. variety of organisational patterns and a
WLT 150-330 wide range of cohesive devices.
1, 2, 3
1, 2, 3
Orthographic Control
Writing is orthographically free of error.
1, 2, 3
Level A1
Accuracy
Shows only limited control of a few These structures include simple
simple grammatical and lexical present, present progressive, active
structures and sentence patterns in a voice, SV, SVO sentence patterns.
memorised repertoire.
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Orthographic Control
Can copy familiar words and short Spelling mistakes within words
phrases e.g. simple signs or outside the stated repertoire must
instructions, names of everyday not be penalised. In terms of
objects, names and set phrases punctuation, TT is expected to use
used regularly. Can spell his/her full stops and question marks
address, nationality and other correctly.
personal details.
Range
Uses basic sentence patterns with TT is expected to write in some detail
memorised phrases, groups of a few about a given situation using simple
words and formulae in order to sentences giving general information
communicate limited information in about what, who, where, when,
simple everyday situations. how.
Section 8
Range
Has enough language to get by, with This includes describing experiences
sufficient vocabulary to express and events, dreams, hopes &
him/herself with some ambitions and briefly giving reasons
circumlocutions on topics such as and explanations for opinions and
family, hobbies and interests, work, plans.
travel and current events.
Accuracy
Uses reasonably accurately a Most simple sentence patterns and
repertoire of frequently used frequent words are used correctly.
routines and patterns associated
with more predictable situations.
Section 9
Range
Has sufficient range of language to be The complex sentence forms include
able to give clear descriptions, conditionals, relative clauses, passive
express viewpoints on most general constructions and adverbial adjuncts.
topics using some complex sentence
forms to do so.
Accuracy
Shows a relatively high degree of TT must not be penalised for
grammatical and lexical control. Does mistakes that do not cause
not make errors which cause misunderstandings.
misunderstanding.
Orthographic Control
Can produce clearly intelligible TT must use paragraphs if
continuous writing which follows appropriate for the response format.
standard layout and paragraphing If the occasional spelling and/or
conventions. Spelling and punctuation punctuation mistake do not lead to
are reasonably accurate but may misunderstanding, TT should not be
show sign of mother tongue penalised.
influence.
Section 9
Range
Has a good command of a broad
range of language allowing him/her
to select a formulation to express
him/herself clearly in an appropriate
style on a wide range of general,
academic, professional or leisure
topics without having to restrict what
s/he wants to say.
Accuracy
Consistently maintains a high degree
of grammatical and lexical accuracy;
errors are rare and difficult to spot.
Section 8
Section 9
The word count (50) is within the word limit. There is no opening or closing which
is inappropriate for this response format (postcard).
TT is able to pass on basic information about his/her stay in Niederau and thus
meets the level requirements.
Range Mark 3
TT uses simple present and one auxiliary verb, I can see, correctly. The lexical
range consists of a basic repertoire that is sufficient to deal with the task. TT
adds vocabulary not provided in the text, e.g., boyfriend, cafe, flowers, pretty,
very long. TT manages to use complete sentences. TT does not use present
progressive, though appropriate.
Accuracy Mark 2
TT uses simple present - I'm in Niederau. It's winter - and SVO sentence
structure - I can see the mountains; It's a very pretty place correctly. There
are several mistakes regarding word order a rive very long; prepositional
phrases in this travel, We are in to a cafe near of the mountains; and the use
of direct objects come with my, its opposite of my. Overall TT just meets the
level requirements.
TT starts off with a very good example of cohesion: Im in Niederau. Its winter
in this beautiful place. However, TT does not sustain this and two sentences are
rather incoherent: We are in to a cafe near of the mountains. He looks the
flowers, its opposite of my. Overall TT is just at level.
There are only a few of spelling mistakes: rive, cafe in to. Punctuation is
correct. TT is thus above level.
The word count (61) exceeds the word limit tolerance of 55 words. There is an
appropriate opening and closing.
Range Mark 1
TT rarely uses simple sentence patterns, but uses isolated phrases instead. The
lexical range is not sufficient to deal successfully with the task.
Accuracy Mark 1
The response does not reflect limited control of a few simple grammatical and
lexical structures. There are grammatical inaccuracies with word order - I drive
the all day skiing; the use of subjects - is small but beautiful; as well as lexical
mistakes - sunning the sun, I drive the all day skiing. TT is below the level.
Good example small but beautiful -other evidence is partly lifted from the text.
Despite the use of linking words such as and, but, then, the text remains in
coherent and difficult to understand.
The response lacks punctuation almost entirely and thus does not help the reader
along. There are several spelling mistakes villige, wether, littel. In addition,
some words are illegible.
The word count (71) is within the word limit. It matches the minimum
requirements for a short story as response format.
TT writes a brief story about the picture covering all relevant aspects: weather,
place, people, pet, activities.
Range Mark 3
TT uses simple present and present progressive and negation. The lexical range
is sufficient to deal with this task and is expected at this level with the exception
of however that goes beyond the level requirement.
Accuracy Mark 3
TT shows only limited control of the use of simple present and present
progressive. TT uses simple past incorrectly. TT meets the level requirement.
The response is coherent enough for the reader to follow quite easily. TT uses
and, however, though not always correctly: only the father is not hear. He is
however bag the job.
There are several spelling mistakes famieli, hause, littel, hear (instead of
here), bag (instead of back), and combany. In terms of punctuation, TT does
not always use full stops appropriately. Nonetheless, TT still meets the level
requirement.
The word count (79) is within the word limit. The response format is appropriate.
TT writes a brief story about the picture including all relevant aspects. The
adaptation of the picture as a family photo is acceptable.
The response exceeds the descriptor for this level. It is more detailed and
contains complex sentences which are joined coherently.
Range Mark 3
TT includes simple present and a basic lexical repertoire with the exception of is
composed of, which appears to be a memorised formula.
Accuracy Mark 3
TT uses word order, simple present mostly correctly. The response includes some
grammatical inaccuracies, for example, third person singular - Cristina read a
book and Francesca play with my small dog; plural - five person; word order -
We are for a long time in my garden; like + gerund - I like to play basket, and
I like to live in Sorrento. However, most of the mistakes are acceptable at this
level. There is also the lexical inaccuracy of I play basket. Overall TT meets the
level requirements.
Although TT only uses and as an explicit cohesive device, the text reads very
smoothly and is thus easy to follow. TT is approaching the next level. The order
of the information could be improved to add coherence and place TT above the
level.
TT uses an upper case T, which makes the text slightly less legible. There are no
spelling or punctuation mistakes.
TT falls below the expected word count but within tolerance (53/47). The letter
has a clear opening and closing.
The TT misunderstands the first prompt and thus only partially engages with the
task.
The TTs response clearly matches level requirements. TT is able to write short
and simple text.
Range Mark 3
Accuracy Mark 3
TT only uses and to connect phrases. It reads like a list of individual sentences
and only the first sentence meets the level requirements.
Not to be assessed.
TT does not engage with the prompts in his / her response. The mentioning of
the history book does not suffice. This means that all traits are scored zero.
Not to be assessed.
Range Mark 0
Not to be assessed.
Accuracy Mark 0
Not to be assessed.
Not to be assessed.
Not to be assessed.
The word count (96) is within the word limit. The text fulfils the minimum
requirements for the response format.
Range Mark 5
The response includes the following grammatical structures: simple past; gerund;
simple present; past progressive; present perfect; going-to future; subordinate
clauses and passive voice. Lexical repertoire includes esclusive, cute, fall in
love, unfortunately, in a few of days, was surprised. This puts TT clearly
above level.
Accuracy Mark 4
TT has good control of tenses and word order, except for the use of present
perfect in In that moment Ive remembered, no past tense use in I come back
to the same shop and a t-short very cute. There are some grammatical
inaccuracies, such as prepositional mistakes: We went in a shop., in that
moment, in a few of days. Lexical issues include was very fall in love,
remembered in my mind, I asked this T-shirt and come back to the same
shop. However, TT does not make systematically basic mistakes and is thus
approaching the next level.
The text is coherent and uses sophisticated cohesive devices such as last
week, while, but unfortunately and in that moment. TT exceeds the level
requirements.
There are only two spelling mistakes - esclusive, T-short. TT uses uppercase
throughout. TT is approaching the next level.
The word count (105 words) is within the word limit tolerance. The text fulfils the
minimum requirements for the response format.
Range Mark 3
The lexical range of TT is broad for the level, e.g., quite expensive, special day,
enjoyed talking, suddenly, surprised, remembered. TT uses simple present,
simple past and mainly subject-verb (SV) and subject-verb-object (SVO)
structures. Good use of why-question. The response meets the level requirement.
Accuracy Mark 2
TT does not have full control of simple present and simple past and also makes
mistakes regarding SVO structures.
There are spelling mistakes - birshday, suprised. Some sentences start with
lowercase; and the use of inappropriate uppercase within sentences: My friend,
There is. The use of commas is not always appropriate: Because,, So,. TT
just meets level requirements.
TT does not address the first prompt. TT also does not provide reasons for
his/her preferred way of travelling.
Range Mark 3
Accuracy Mark 3
Although the response is not entirely coherent (the use of problem), TT manages
to link elements into an extended text by using and, but, especially and
relative clauses. TT meets the level requirement.
The opening is inappropriate and there is no closing to the letter. TT exceeds the
word limit tolerance, so only the first 99 words are assessed.
Range Mark 5
TT has a very good lexical range - concious; they base their decision and
grammatical range I am writing to express my opinion; not only are the
cheaper tickets attractive. Most sentences are complex. The performance
exceeds the level requirements. TT is at the next level.
Accuracy Mark 4
The response is reasonably accurate. As TT goes beyond the use of routines and
patterns, s/he exceeds the level requirements. However, there are too many
lexical and grammatical inaccuracies to place TT at the level above: concious
of; global warming affect everybody; base their decision in; instead how much
pollution; largest and unfinished qeues. Overall TT is approaching the next
level.
Spelling, punctuation and layout are accurate apart from two spelling mistakes -
concious, qeues - and the use of capitals throughout. TT uses paragraphs.
Overall TT meets the upper bound of the level description.
The rubric does not specify a specific response format so the TT cannot be
penalised. At 131 words the response is within the tolerance. Both the response
format and the word limit are correct and a score of 2 is given.
All aspects of the prompt are referred to, the TT referring to why they travel as
they do, what is liked/disliked about this form of transport and how they would
prefer to travel to college.
While the TT has written a series of simple phrases and sentences linked with
simple connectors and so clearly fits the descriptor for Level 1, the shorter
discrete elements are not linked in a linear sequence the descriptor for Level 2.
The text jumps from the topic of walking to cars, and there is no repertoire of
linking devices and the response, while straightforward, is not connected.
Range Mark 2
A limited range. The use of the basic SVO sentences using present simple is
frequent. Attempts are made to use conditionals (If are working every day, you
will be very stronge) and superlatives (The beeter travel to walking). The TT
gives opinions and reasons for these (driving being bad because it pollutes the
atmosphere) and there is sufficient vocabulary to allow the TT to get by.
Accuracy Mark 2
Control of simple sentence patterns is variable and there are some basic mistakes
(use of present simple, mass and count nouns, subject omission and subject-verb
agreement). Overall, however, control of frequently used routines and patterns
is reasonable and performance is just at the level of the band descriptor.
The TT only uses because, and, so and but to link simple sentences in order to
describe something as a list of points. There is no evidence of a repertoire of
linking devices and I do not feel that the elements are linked into a connected
linear sequence.
There are several spelling mistakes. Although punctuation and spelling is ok,
overall TT is only just at the level.
The candidate has responded to all the prompts, so gets a maximum of two
points.
The TT has written a straightforward connected text giving opinions, reasons and
describing feelings.
Range Mark 3
Accuracy Mark 3
There are several lexical and grammatical mistakes, they dont cause
misunderstanding and TT is thus at the level. Lexical inaccuracies include This is
very conveniently for me and I would prefer it, underground was absolutely
dangerousless. Grammatical mistakes include underground will be improve and
became more comfortable, have already notice, each person have.
The response is coherent enough for the reader to follow. TT uses several
cohesive devices - nowadays, however, becase, at first, secondly, and thus
manages to link ideas.
There are a few spelling mistakes; becase, quie but punctuation and layout is
fine. This still meets the expectations of being accurate enough to be followed
most of the time. As the response is also intelligible throughout, s/he meets the
level requirements.
The word count of 115 words is within the word limit, and the appropriate
response format has been used.
Range Mark 3
Accuracy Mark 3
TT shows a high degree of grammatical and lexical control. There are a few
inaccuracies. Grammatical mistakes include not using gerund in make lots of
friends and omitting the article in plenty of time in future. Lexical inaccuracies
include the use of mustn't worry and now or then.
TT uses cohesive devices, such as To start, and even if, it's true. The response
shows a high level of internal cohesion. It runs smoothly and is very easy to
follow.
Paragraphing and punctuation are appropriate except for the wrong use of a
comma: so called, children. There are two spelling mistakes global waming,
so called.
The word count is within the word limit (104), and the appropriate response
format has been used.
TT does not relate to the authors comment as requested in the second prompt.
TT thus only partially engages with the task.
The response is difficult to follow as the TT cannot express himself clearly and
effectively.
Range Mark 1
TT uses only simple structures and the range of language is not sufficient.
Accuracy Mark 1
The response uses very few linking devices, only and and finally. It resembles
more a list of points than connected text.
There are many mistakes, which make the text not clearly intelligible.
TT used appropriate response format and stayed within the word limit (word
count 160; the headline is not counted).
The response is clear, detailed and well-structured. It can easily be followed and
TT thus exceeds the level requirements. However, the response does not have
the complexity required for the level above. TT is approaching the next level.
Range Mark 4
Accuracy Mark 4
TT displays a high degree of grammatical and lexical accuracy. Errors are rare.
There are some inaccuracies: after only two months since I had arrived, in
Amazon. There is a structural error in the sentence starting I joined the
ornitologist team. As the errors are not difficult to spot, TT is not yet at the
next level.
Coherent response with smooth flow which makes it very easy for the reader to
follow. Response has a high degree of lexical cohesion with no jumpiness. The
performance does not yet have the sophistication to be placed fully at the next
level.
TT used appropriate response format and stayed within the word limit (word
count 207).
TT exceeds the level requirements and shows evidence from the next level up.
The response is clear and well-structured and contains appropriate supporting
detail. TT rounds off with an appropriate ending.
Range Mark 4
Accuracy Mark 3
Though there are several lexical and grammatical mistakes, they do not cause
misunderstanding and TT is thus at the level. Lexical inaccuracies include
eastern-southern, was like in a fairy, even that and cryed out. Grammatical
inaccuracies include: tense so far is going to; word order I exactly
remember my first day. There are also prepositional mistakes I have tasted
for years, we stayed in, for what I have heard; as well as other errors I
hardly have foud anywhere, that cryed out and the sea there is.
The response is coherent enough for the reader to follow quite easily. TT uses
only some linking devices - and, so far, but, even that, not to mention - but
the response shows good internal cohesion.
There are some punctuation mistakes TT uses commas instead of full stops in
the second and ninth sentence. There are also spelling mistakes: oging,
exactely, sorrounding, concreate, foud and cryed out. Some words are
illegible. No capitalisation at the beginning of the sentence they got. Also
paragraphing is not always appropriate But I made.
Although TT starts the letter appropriately, they do not sign off and therefore get
a score of one for formal requirement. The word count is within the word limit.
The test taker has responded to all the prompts and so gets a maximum of two
points.
The message is clear and well developed. The response shows adequate
precision.
Range Mark 3
The test taker shows a good command of a broad range of language, such as
present perfect and modals, and lexis (It has come to my attention / I have had
the opportunity to observe these symptoms/ exhaustion, face-to-face
conversations rather than texting all the time).
Accuracy Mark 3
Errors are rare and overall there is a high level of accuracy. Errors (e.g., observe
these symptoms on a few friends) are difficult to spot.
A variety of organisational devices are used to convey meaning: This has turned
into / Aside from / due to / rather than. Although these arent always used
correctly (from looking at that screen too much / This way), the TT can be
easily followed, which puts the test taker just at the level.
The test taker has started the letter but does not sign off at the end. The word
count is within the word limit (beginning of letter + title of section 7 text not
included).
The test taker has responded to all the prompts and so gets a maximum of two
points. The last point is just about covered though not explicit (Thats why
parents and children should not underestimate the problem).
The message is well developed and shows some precision and flexibility in
addressing the target audience. However, it lacks clarity at times, especially the
last sentence, putting this just at the level.
Range Mark 3
The test taker shows a good command of a broad range of language and lexis
(e.g., potential risk for / extremely popular / slight discomfort / alienated/
no one is guaranteed). The test taker has evidently used lexis from the section
7 reading (e.g., carpal tunnel syndrome) but it is used appropriately (i.e. whole
chunks are not lifted).
Accuracy Mark 3
A high level and consistent control of language is shown. Errors are difficult to
spot: shoulders pain.
The test taker is able to use a wide range of cohesive devices accurately and
flexibly (e.g., This holds / As you probably know.. / I myself / Apart from
the / Thats why.).
Orthographic Control
Mark 2
Punctuation and spelling are consistent. Although the ideas are easy to follow,
the paragraphing is inconsistent (first paragraph very long and second very
short). So the test taker scores 2.
The word count (178) is within the word limit tolerance. The response format is
not fully appropriate as there are no concluding remarks.
TT describes two inventions (mobile phone & internet) and thus engages
adequately with the prompt.
To a large extent the response is clear and well-structured. TT tries to expand the
argument and provides examples to support his/her argumentation. However,
s/he could have expanded his/her argumentation further. TT is thus just at the
level.
Range Mark 2
Accuracy Mark 1
The response is clear and well-structured, though it does not always read
smoothly, as in the following sentences: () how can we take the advantage of
phones which was designed to send information faster, and make the best use of
them; Emails are ensured to allert us the moment they arrive while at the same
time, the international conference are carried out globally without being limited
by time or place. TT is just at the level.
TT does not properly engage with the task, so all traits are scored zero.
TT does not properly engage with the task, which leads to a score of zero. As
Task Engagement functions as goalkeeper, all other traits are scored zero.
TT does not properly engage with the task, so all traits are scored zero.
Range Mark 0
TT does not properly engage with the task, so all traits are scored zero.
Accuracy Mark 0
TT does not properly engage with the task, so all traits are scored zero.
TT does not properly engage with the task, so all traits are scored zero.
TT does not properly engage with the task, so all traits are scored zero.
TT stays within the word limit (195). There is an appropriate opening to the
formal letter and an introductory sentence and a formal closing.
The response is mostly clear, precise and smoothly flowing. TTs line of argument
is logical and easy to follow, except on two occasions: This view takes;
Changes will be made. The language used is less emotive and persuasive than
would be expected at this level. It does not have the sophistication expected at
this level.
Range Mark 1
TT shows a broad range of language and thus meets the requirements of the
level below. TT uses subject specific vocabulary: economic difficulties, pension,
insurance providers, privatised, funding structure, saving incentives,
expenditures etc. Other good examples of lexical range include: truly
pessimistic, insurance providers go bankrupt, heavily privatised, regulate
change, the simple, although not always the popular way forward. Grammatical
range includes correct and appropriate use of the future tense and the passive
voice. TT does not yet show enough flexibility in his/her language use and some
ambiguity remains. TT does not meet the requirements for this level.
Accuracy Mark 1
TT maintains consistent grammatical and lexical control and thus TT meets the
requirements the level below. S/he makes a few mistakes: modal auxiliary verb
which can bring economic difficulties in the near future; tense Changes will be
made.
Organisational structures and cohesive devices remain less complex: first of all,
on the other hand, whilst, this view, in the UKin other countries, in fact,
although, within a family, therefore, but also. There is some jumpiness in the
second paragraph - This view takes... - and at the beginning of the third
paragraph: Changes will be made. Overall TT is below the level.
TT stays within the word limit. S/he uses an appropriate opening of the letter,
but fails to include a closing.
TT expresses his/her thoughts on how longevity may change our lives and the
implication for families. However, TT rather summarises the writer's argument
than commenting on it when dealing with the first prompt.
The response is clear, precise and smoothly flowing. TT manages to express finer
shades of meaning, e.g., miscalculations by actuaries, extraordinary demands,
cannot afford to keep up the payments, backfired. The response also shows
flexible language use, e.g., enormous financial difficulties whilst attempting to
finance the extraordinary demands on their funds; progress and advances; less
generous cannot afford. TT meets the level requirements.
Range Mark 3
Accuracy Mark 3
TT fulfils the level requirements. The response follows a logical structure, so that
the meaning is easily understood by the reader. Cohesion is established by using
the following devices, e.g., 'are set to find themselves', 'whilst', 'Ironically, this
has come about', 'we should enjoy, many of us will be unable to do so', 'as a
result'.
The word count (315) is within the word limit tolerance. The response format is
appropriate. There is an introduction and a conclusion.
The essay is clear and smoothly flowing. Its structure is logical. However, the
argumentation is not always as complex and sophisticated as would be expect at
this level. Exemplifications remain generic.
Range Mark 2
The response contains complex sentence structure, e.g. These conditions have
changed..., As the years..., Think 30 years into the future. Their use shows
flexibility. TT's lexical range includes widespread and common, as countries
further industrialise, continue to flood our daily life, non-existent, menial
tasks, constructive work, monotonous work, will be greatly impacted,
ultimately benefit from, gradual nature. There is a minor limitation as TT
recurrently uses 'change', 'changes'. Overall TT is just at level.
Accuracy Mark 2
TT is at the level. Cohesive devices include as the years pass, think back 30
years, think 30 years into the future, most importantly, soon, currently,
instead of and however. Although the text reads smoothly, the content of the
argument becomes repetitive in the third paragraph. As it is the summary of the
argumentation, ideas should have been presented in a more abstract way rather
than reintegrating the samples.
The response is not orthographically free of error; there are some mistakes -
every-day life, office-life. The second paragraph could have been split into two
paragraphs.
The word count (293) is within the word limit. The response format is
inappropriate as there is no conclusion.
TT covers all aspects of the prompt in his/her essay, although last aspect (how
do you see your own professional life developing) is not addressed in detail As
for myself I can see work opportunities continuing to evolve.
The essay is clear and smoothly flowing. Its structure is logical (only hampered
by the abrupt beginning and ending). The style is appropriate and effective -
Gone are the days, As for myself, More and more, greatly, simply, It is also
true to say.
Range Mark 3
Accuracy Mark 3
The essay has a high degree of coherence and grammatical cohesion and is thus
logical and very easy to follow. Only the last sentence remains somewhat
isolated.