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Balanced opinion
- Jobs predictability Reason: feel so familiar with work Result: plan personal lives
easily
- Opportunities for career advancement Reason: loyalty is valued Result: more
handsomely paid, feel satisfied
- Difficult to have an ideal job on the first try Example: switch jobs several times before
figuring out passion Result: maintain enthusiasm in work
- Chances to acquire skills and knowledge Example: technical knowledge gained from
different working environments
Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to
get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
People have different views about whether we should stay at the same company for a long
time. While I recognise the benefits of loyalty to one job, I would argue that regularly switching
jobs helps achieve job satisfaction. Commented [J1]: clear opinion
There are two main reasons why I agree that people could derive a sense of job satisfaction from Commented [J2]: good vocab
sticking with a job for years. Firstly, those who stay in the same job may feel so familiar with
their work that it becomes totally predictable. By knowing their work routine perfectly well, Commented [J3]: this word is often seen as negative. You could
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workers can easily plan their personal lives and are therefore less likely to suffer from stress.
Secondly, since many managers value employee loyalty, people who are loyal to a company
have various opportunities for career advancement. Being promoted to a higher position,
workers will be more handsomely paid and so may feel satisfied with their career life.
However, it seems to me that changing jobs frequently is more beneficial for ones career. The
first reason is that not everyone is fortunate enough to be able to have their desirable job on the Commented [J4]: their ideal job
first try. For example, a person may have to switch jobs several times before finally figuring out
the job that they are passionate about. When they love their work, they can maintain
enthusiasm and therefore keep the cycle of excitement and performance going. In addition,
job hopping offers chances for individuals to acquire new skills and knowledge. Those who
work in technology, for instance, are able to gain valuable technical knowledge from different
working environments if they are willing to switch jobs. Commented [J5]: I think this is a very good point
In conclusion, while I accept that working in one organisation helps people climb the career
ladder without much stress, I believe that job hopping is more beneficial for their career life. Commented [J6]: good vocab
294 words
Good vocabulary:
stay at the same company for a long time (v): lm vic lu di ti 1 cng ty
stick with a job for years (v): gn b vi 1 cng vic trong nhiu nm
plan their personal lives (v): ln k hoch cho cuc sng c nhn
keep the cycle of excitement and performance going (v): duy tr am m v s th hin trong
cng vic (cm ny kh dch chun ting Vit nn mnh tm dch nh vy)
gain valuable technical knowledge (v): nhn c nhng kin thc v k thut c gi tr
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Word count OK - 294 words Minor collocations and word choices
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