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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time.

Discuss
advantages and disandvantages.

It is widely believed that children should find a part time job while they have a lot of free time.
Oftentime this idea is suggested to children by his parents. In the following text I will discuss
both advantages and disadvantages of the aforementioned subject.

To begin with, children could earn extra money and help their parents financialy by doing
various part time jobs. Furthermore, not only are parents satisfied to watch their children work
part time, but also if they have ongoing financial problems, their children will help them and
support them. For instance, a statistical data from 2015 showed, that Canadian households in
which children work part time during the year, have 0,5% higher incomes than other families.

To continue with, some part time jobs are physically more demanding than others. Also, If
children become exhausted from part time profession, they will stop doing other more
important activities during the day. The parents should understand fully what are the types of
jobs appropriate for their children according to their age, experience and other social factors.
For example, American actor Michael Douglas said in one interview 2 years ago , that he almost
abandoned his college studies, because his part time job was so physically and mentally
demanding that he could not stand it.

To conclude, one important advantage from working part time is that children could earn more
money and use that money to support their familiy. Other than that, part time job is useful
unless it takes a toll on body and mind of the children.

I personally believe that every juvenile in the world should try some form of part time job,
especially during important maturation periods.
It is widely speculated that one part of the children population does not get enough positive
affirmation from their families regarding school success, while other part recieves more
pressure from their demanding parents. I should mention that parents who put a lot of
pressure on their juveniles, are often not satisfied with their own school performance in the
past. Also, parents need to support their children and to let them decide what is a proper way
of education.

To begin with, some parents had difficulties during early school days, so now they want to
change that through their children. Furthermore, if they require that their juveniles need to be
better than other children in school, they will put a lot of pressure and stress by telling them
what they need to do in order to succeed. For example, a famous Serbian volleyball player
Marko Ivanovic, was usually pressured in the past by his parents to be a best student in his
class.

To continue with, parents could positively influence their children development, by letting them
to decide what is a proper way of the education for their own needs. Needless to say, some
children are not interested in a usual way regarding education and some of them
It has been widely advertised for the last few decades the picture of young fit women as a
something that is perfect and ideal. We could say that this idea has produced a different
psychological problems in women since the first time it was mentioned. So, it is advisable for
women to understand their body fully and to follow individual diet, exercise and life regimen
according to their own needs.

To begin with, one part of the woman population often develops various psychological issues as
a result of the mentioned idea above. Furthermore, many women are battling all sorts of eating
disorders, and vaste of other psychiatric ilnesses, like depression, anxiety and loneliness
because of this thinking. For example, a famous American actress Merlin Monroe, survived
dangerous anorexia disorder as a young girl, because of the mainstream pressure in that time.

To continue with, women should put more attention into understanding their own body needs
and requirements. Needless to say, not only do women feel better about their self image if
they properly understand their body, but also as a result of that they have less psychological
problems. For instance, in 60s Merlin Monroe followed high carb/ low fat approach and she
looked fitter than other mainstream actresses. She also did resistance training 3 days per week.
Some people believe, that she found a perfect nutritional strategy for her own ideal look.

To conclude, women have been battling a various psychiatric disorders since the development
of idea that every woman in the world needs to be slim and fit. The majority of women should
put their efforts into understanding what could be a most optimal nutritional and excercise
solution for their body. I personally believe that women should regulary indulge in exercise, eat
food in smaller amounts, and not overly obsess about their bodies.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing you this letter because I saw yesterday an interesting ad for a tennis course in
England, but unfortunately I can not listen whole course because I scheduled a one small
occasion earlier.

Needless to say, tennis has been my favourite recreational sport since my early highschool
days, so If I sign up for this course, I will improve my tennis technique a lot.

Also, in spite of my interest for this course, I will need to be with my uncle on the last 2 days of
this training because he will leave the country on that day.

Furthermore, I would like to know, If you could get me a refund for these last 2 days of course
or what are the other possible solutions to that. Not only am I happy to attend this course, but
also I would not mind if I do not get money back for these particular days.

I would be grateful if you could read this letter as soon as possible.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Dejan Kanazir.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing you this letter to inform you that I will move to your city in a few weeks. I am
asking you for help when I arrive at the airport.

Also, I would like to know if you could help me with finding a place to stay.

Furthermore, it is widely believed that nature is a perfect place for living, so I would like to find
the flat located near some green park or a small river. So, I suppose that apartment in the
outter area of the city would be appropriate for me.

Needless to say, not only do I need some financially affordable flat, but also If you find me an
apartment with windows facing the outdoor, I will repay you for that .

I would be grateful if you could write me as soon as possible.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Dejan Kanazir.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing you this letter because I ordered last week a new cheque book from your bank and
I have not received anything since then.

I should mention that services of your bank have been used by my collegaues and me since the
early 90s, and now all I could say that I am deeply disappointed in your staff.

Furthermore, I ordered this cheque book 7 days ago using your online service and If I had
known that this would happen, I would have asked over the phone for this book.

Also, time is often described as money, so I would like to know for how much longer I would
need to wait for this problem to be solved. Other than that, I have known your manager since
1998, so I would need to talk with him as soon as possible.

I would be grateful If you could write me tomorrow.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Dejan Kanazir.
It is widely speculated that public libraries will soon no longer exist as a space inside the
building. Some people believe that all books will become available online in the following
years. In the upcoming essay I will discuss possible advantages and disadvantages of the
aforementioned ideas.

To begin with, library as a facility has a special meaning to one culture of society, so moving
libraries from the usual buildings will become one of the possible dissandvantages in the future.
Furthermore, many libraries have been used as a historical sites since the birth of man. For
instance, Sveti Sava library located in municipality of Belgrade called Vracar is well known to
Serbian people, because this library posseses ancient scripts and books of great historical value
for Serbian culture.

To continue with, online access to books will largely improve the society in the future. Also, if
people have medical disabilities and do not have chance to visit library because of that, they
will easily find a book through the system of online search. For example, a study from 1995
done by the Pennsylvania State University, pointed out that 45% of the American readers are
usually lazy to visit library alone, other 30% of people who actively read often want to have a
companion when they go to library, and rest of the readers visit library because they have
various social obligations and needs.

To conclude, not only is a library an important building for many reasons in one country, but
also if a socitey decides to improve online book search, many people will benefit from that. I
personally believe that reading books on papers should be a priority in one highly developed
country.
It is widely speculated that marketing and advertising is a key to a successful buisness. I
completely agree with the aforementioned idea and in the following essay I will try to prove my
thoughts.

To begin with, some companies sell more products because they have better marketing system
than other firms. Furthermore, If manager of company wants to increase a selling rate , he will
use various marketing tricks and beside that he will try to improve the quality of product.
Needless to say, marketing is often used as a first line of strategy that needs be improved. For
instance, Steve Jobs, had difficulties in early 80s, when he wanted to sell his first Apple
computer. So, he found a marketing expert who helped him, to place the product on market in
shortest time as possible, after that he earned his first million.

To continue with, customer(s) brain is often deceived by a good advertising strategy. Also, if
marketing scientist had studied a value of promotion a lot more in the past, many companies
would not have disappeared now. For instance, it is believed that good advertising, influences a
one special part of the brain called amygdala. Famous neurologist Mark Weber discovered that
fact back in the 90s.

To conclude, not only are companies successful because of their good marketing politics, but
also it is believed that advertising could possibly change the way how customer thinks in critical
moments of buying. I personally believe that to succeed in buisness we need to learn more
about marketing and promotion, and to invest more money in science of marketing
development.
Dear Marko,

I am writing you this letter because I was informed yesterday by our mutual friend from college
Milos, that you will move to my place in 2 weeks. I am happy for that but unfortunately I will
leave my flat in 10 days, so I must find a way to give you my keys.

Needless to say, our friend Milos is ofen described as a good fellow by our collegaues , so I
could leave my keys to him, and I wil tell him to give you my keys in two days.

Furthermore, not only is equipement in flat just bought, but also there are few technical
devices which are never used before. So if you need more informations about them, I will
explain you and send it on email.

Also, I would advise you to go and see a main town library, and If you could find an extra time
to watch NHL games in the following week, you would not regret by doing so.

I would be grateful If you could answer me as soon as possible.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

Dejan Kanazir.
Dear Mirjana,

I am writing you this letter because I was informed two days ago by local authorities that winter
storm destroyed half of your house last week.

Needless to say, I have been your good friend since we were children, so If you want my help, I
will put my bags in the van and I will travel to your place as soon as I can. I understand how
frustrating is this to you.

Furthermore, my house was destroyed last year by a great Tornado called Tanya. I almost lost
everything that day, but somehow I managed to survive and save important items and
documents.

Also, not only is winter storm a one of the most devastating nature distasters, but also I believe
that you would be much satisfied, If you could find someone who is expert in winter storm
damages.

I would be grateful If you wrote me as soon as possible.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Wish you good luck,

Dejan Kanazir
You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course
provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter:

Say what the problem is.


Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting.
Ask the provider to solve the problem.

Dear Mr. Jackson,

I am writing you this letter because unfortunately I lost the contract about the apartment that
you provided me in the beginning of this course.

Needless to say, If I had been more careful during last two days, I would not have lost this
important accommodation agreement. I believe that If I do not have this contract I will need to
find illegal accommodation, and that would totally ruin my plans.

Furthermore , other students were delighted when I asked few days ago about the
accommodation that your provided for them. I heard that flats are large, with 2 main windows
and filled with lot of flowers.

I should mention that not only is this paper a valuable document that interferes with my
course, but also I would like to know If you could possibly find a copy of this contract.

I would be grateful if you wrote me as soon as possible.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincenerly,

Dejan Kanazir.
ESSAY TEST

It is widely speculated that many people today travel more than ever before. I should mention
that a one of the main reasons behind that lies in the fact that travelling has become more
affordable since the last century. Also, travelers are often amazed when they discover new
interesting cultures or social habits of the people in the different countries.

To begin with, organizing a trip is a lot cheaper today, so it is possible for wide varieties of
people to enjoy the various travelling expiriences. Furthermore, If people want to scheudle a
cheap accommodation or air ticket for their trips, they will easily do that by using online
service, especially searching for the ongoing discounts. For example, If people in Serbia find
cheap airline ticket for Canada or America, they will book that trip few months earlier.

To continue with, people learn about different cultures and social acts when they visit other
states. Needless to say, not only are different cultures something that could positively influence
people who travel often, but also some people build foreign habits and they implement various
international rules when they return home. For instance, a famous Serbian scientist Nikola
Tesla said 70 years ago, that he learned a lot about his own culture by visiting different
historical monuments in Slovenia.

To conclude, If people want to travel today, they will have opportunity to do that, because
travelling is affordable today for everyone. Travelling is used as a mind boogling experience,
through which we learn about cultural and social traits of different societies.

I personally believe that travelling in free time is something in which we relax and learn at the
same time.
LETTER TEST

Dear Marko,

I am writing you this letter because I have moved recently to my brothers house.

Needless to say, If I had been more careful about paying a rent for my previous apartment, I
would not have moved to this new place. But, unfortunately I lost my job one month ago, so
this is something I could not surpass easily.

Futhermore, this house was renovated 2 years ago. So, now it is a completely new building with
beautiful flower garden on the side of the street. House has 2 bathrooms, 3 main rooms, and 1
large kitchen, and If I require to put my car in the garage, my brother will give me the keys in
any time.

Also, not only are you my best friend and only one left, but also I would like to see you, If you
could find a free time in the following days.

I would be grateful If you wrote me tomorrow.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

Dejan Kanazir
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It is widely speculated today that the number of couples with no children is being increased
constantly in the western countries. In the following essay I will try to discuss both advantages
and disadvantages of the aforementioned subject.

To begin with, couples who decide to live without children are often selfish and they appreciate acts
that are much less valuable. Furthermore, if people want to live without having the children in their
lives, they will discover after some time that this decision is not something that is honourable. For
instance, a famous Canadian musician Neil Young stated in 1993, that he felt depressed and alone
without having the children in the beginning of his career.

To continue with, happy couples who choose to live on their own, wil have more free time to travel and
learn about other societies. Also, If people without children decide to visit all parts of the world, they
will expand their knowledge and their own culture. For example, it is believed that American couples
without children are often turned toward traveling and improving their private buisnesses, and as a
result they are becoming wealthier and knowledgeable.

To conclude, not only are couples without juveniles greedy and selfish, but also in spite of that, that
gives them time and freewill to travel all over the world, and to gravitate toward self improvement.

I personally believe that it is a major sin when couples decide to not have children, because they are
missing a gift that nature gave us long time ago.
It is widely believed by one part of the population that speaking fluently some language is often
associated with staying or living that particular country. I completely disagree with the aforementioned
idea and in the following essay I will try to justify my point of view.

To begin with, there are various language training centres in the world today that are successful in
giving lessons to newbies. Also, if newcomers want to learn language proficiently , they will find a
school which have teachers that are well respected by other colleagues. For instance, English language
has become a main speaking language in many countries , and often people learn English

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