Student James Clee

Assessor Simon Weintroub

Date
Unit & Title 1 :- Introduction to media processes and technical skills
Project Title Dead Man Walking
Course/Level Level 3 Diploma in Creative Media Production & Technology

Indicates Indicates
Evidence not Pass Learner is Learner is Evidence and General Comments
Unit 1 provided Achieved working at a working at the i.e. Observation, video, essay etc
higher level highest level
R S G E If evidence is missing, note requirements.

1 Understand processes and technical skills used

in creative media production
1.1 Apply understanding of a range of processes to https://jamescleefilms.weebly.com/dead-
support media activities. man-walking--technical-skills.html
1.2 Apply media processes and skills safely and https://jamescleefilms.weebly.com/dead-
appropriately. man-walking--technical-skills.html
2 Understand the characteristics and methods of
communication within a media context.
2.1 Critically compare a range of communication https://jamescleefilms.weebly.com/dead-
methods used to convey meaning in creative media man-walking--technical-skills.html
production.
Although this unit is only marked as Pass the evidence
demonstrates the student is capable of working at a
Final Grade Referral Fail Pass higher level

Indicates the standard of work submitted for assessment

R = Referral / S = Satisfactory / G = Good / E = Excellent
Assessment Feedback / Referral Action Plan:
(Only one further opportunity will be given for submission of work that has been deemed unsatisfactory at the time of assessment)
James, you need to submit a Recce form and a Risk assessment to pass, as well as mentioning this in your evaluation.
Resubmit these to complete the assignment.

You hae submitted a satisfactory weebly page which is good in parts. I like the way you have evaluated throughout, this is particularly
pleasing. You evidence purpose within the groups work and explain and justify your decision making well.
You have also evidence well-presented storyboards and I particularly enjoyed the way you evaluate effectiveness and evidence the things
you have learned from each process.

Your production skills are definitely satisfactory. You benefitted from the scenes being well shot which evidences a group taking care and a
solid thought process behind your work. Your edits cut well and as you have said in your evaluation, run smoothly. They could benefit
though from a bit more adventure with regards to pace, effects, colour and sound. This is absolutely fine though and something you can
improve over the course of the year.

You evaluation is detailed and you have covered every episode well. You have a tendency though to write as you speak and often describe
things as ok and/or alright. These words are difficult to quantify so please avoid using them and try to be succinct and definitive with
regards to the effectiveness of what youve done. Youve also failed to discuss health & safety and risk assessment in enough detail.

That said though James, you have taken care to evaluate throughout and presented a portfolio which evidences the potential you have as
well how much you do care about ensuring the quality of what you do. With further practice you can absolutely achieve excellent results.
Well done.

Tosubmit
Risk Assessment
Location Recce

Development Points

Please ask if you dont understand how to submit your assignments as requested.
Take what you have learned and apply it to an independent project.
 Complete Location Recces and Risk assessment to a detailed standard.
Follow Evaluation Guide to ensure you cover whats required.
Continue to practice and experiment more with editing techniques.
Use audio recorders for sound to ensure consistent levels of quality.

Agreed referral deadline: Date of referral Referral Grade

(Two weeks after original submission:
assessment date)
24/11/2017
(Referral work is not eligible for
higher grading if applicable to the
FAIL PASS
unit)
Assessor Signature: IV Signature: Date:06/11/2017
Owain Milford

Simon Weintroub
Student Signature Date:

Learner Name James Clee Date 10/11/2017

 Unit Number 3 Assignment title Dead Man Walking

What does the feedback say?

I need to add some recce forms and risk assessments to pass as well as mentioning them in my
evaluation. Then resubmit the submission. Also I need to add a few things to my portfolio.

What are the areas in which you need to improve?

Add pace, effects, colour and sound to my edits.

What can you do to improve in these areas?

Explore more while editing on premier pro and be more adventurous while filming.

Signed James Clee