Writing Response #1

by Faith Ivy

Submission date: 09-Sep-2017 04:48PM (UT C-0500)

Submission ID: 844816042
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

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Comment 1
no brackets

Comment 2
why are there brackets around everything?

Comment 3
please look at date f ormat

Comment 4
no brackets around title

Comment 5
of some degrees have decreased

QM Frag.
Fragment:
A sentence f ragment is a phrase or clause that is in some way incomplete. Such f ragments
become problematic when they attempt to stand alone as a complete sentence. T he most
common version of this mistake occurs when a writer mistakes a gerund (a verb that acts like a
noun) f or a main verb, as in the f ollowing sentence: "In bed reading Shakespeare f rom dusk to
dawn."
 QM Trash Word
So, Really, Very, etc. are unnecessary. T hey are trash words.

Comment 6
I disagree with this assertion

QM Contractions
No Contractions

Comment 7
incorrect use of semi-colon

QM Contractions
No Contractions

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QM Contractions
No Contractions

QM Missing ","
Missing comma:
T hough it may not always be grammatically necessary, a comma can of ten help to prevent a
misreading. When a sentence opens with an introductory element (a phrase, clause or word that
is logically related to another phrase or clause in the same sentence), it is a great help to your
reader to place a comma af ter that introductory element. Such phrases will of ten begin with
words like "because," "while" or "although," as in the f ollowing example: "While everyone was
f ighting, the bear wandered away." As you can see, without the comma, the sentence would be
conf using.
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