Jenell Chase - iFixit Resume

by Jenell Chase

Submission date: 31-Aug-2017 11:20PM (UT C-0700)

Submission ID: 841932400
File name: iFixit_Resume.docx (129.7K)
Word count: 298
Character count: 1825
Jenell, Your resume definitely demonstrates your readiness to
lead an iFixit team. To improve your resume, I've made just a few
suggestions below.

Bullet s--f ix

Use
first
person
verbs
(those
you'd
use
with
"I") to
speak
Please explain, do you mean you
directly
started at other places, transferred
of
units to and graduated from Santa
Ana? If so, just list Santa Ana--the
yourse
degree grantor. lf.
"Addre
ss"
Jenell Chase - iFixit Resume
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

48
PAGE 1
/50

Text Comment. Jenell, Your resume def initely demonstrates your readiness to lead an
iFixit team. T o improve your resume, I've made just a f ew suggestions below.

QM Bullets--f ix
Remember to use consistent syntax and grammar at the start of a set of bullet points.

Text Comment. Use f irst person verbs (those you'd use with "I") to speak directly of
yourself . "Address"

Text Comment. Please explain, do you mean you started at other places, transf erred units
to and graduated f rom Santa Ana? If so, just list Santa Ana--the degree grantor.
RUBRIC: IFIXIT RESUME RUBRIC

CRIT ERION 1 Advanced

Form and Organization

ABSENT OR BELOW Sections organization is absent, illogical, or inconsistent; Headings may be absent or
BASIC do not describe content ef f ectively

DEVELOPING Sections organization isn't always clear or consistent; Headings may not describe
content ef f ectively

PROFICIENT Sections are usually organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
adequately

ADVANCED Sections are organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
ef f ectively

CRIT ERION 2 Advanced

Content & Persuasiveness

ABSENT OR BELOW Job description's details may not be addressed; evidence of qualif ications is lacking
BASIC or irrelevant

DEVELOPING Generalizations attempt to address the job's description; evidence of qualif ications
isn't yet adequate

PROFICIENT Some specif ic details address the job's description directly; evidence of qualif ications
is adequate

ADVANCED Specif ic details address the job's description directly and aptly; evidence of
qualif ications is plentif ul and convincing

CRIT ERION 3 Advanced

Appearance

ABSENT OR BELOW White space, f onts, and design are not used to increase the reader-f riendliness of
BASIC the resume.

DEVELOPING White space, f onts, and design may be distracting or inef f ective.

PROFICIENT White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective.

ADVANCED White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective and attractive

CRIT ERION 4 Prof icient

Readability

ABSENT OR BELOW Bullet Point clauses/phrases are hard to understand and structured inconsistently;
BASIC errors impede readability throughout.
DEVELOPING Bullet Point clauses/phrases may be hard to understand or structured inconsistently;
errors impede readability at times

PROFICIENT Bullet Point clauses/phrases are usually ef f ective and structured consistently; a f ew
errors

ADVANCED Bullet Point clauses/phrases are ef f ective and structured consistently; nearly error
f ree
Jenell Chase - iFixit Resume
ORIGINALITY REPORT

0 %
SIMILARIT Y INDEX
0%
INT ERNET SOURCES
0%
PUBLICAT IONS
0%
ST UDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

Exclude quotes On Exclude matches Of f

Exclude bibliography On